[HiE] A human wakes, finding he isn't the species he fell asleep as in a place he does not recognise, gear scattered around.
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Nice job for introducing Twilight to the wonderful invention, known as "ballpoint pen". Indeed much, MUCH more effective than the ink and quill. Now only to replace the parchment with something else... Unless it's plant-based.
Loved the idea, curious to know where you will be going to.
Damn it stop. I already have too little free time, then you go and dangle and awesome looking rts in front of me.
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Dangles the 10 pages of chapter 3 in front of your face. Don't these look tasty?
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Cheeki bugger, been looking forward to more from ya and damn is this story good so far, really look forward to next chapter of a well written soldier in ponyland
And she can't fly faster then the sound barrier too right?
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Somepony call the Skaven Clans!
Wow, why show them how they work? Is he dumb? At least he thought in earlier chapters.
hmm i wonder if Twilight knows a duplication spell? that one way to fix the ammo problem. Speaking of, how much ammo does he have? 5-6 magazines for his rifles , 7-10 ish for his pistol?
I wouldn't be explaining intricate details of advanced(to them) weaponry to primitive species and wasting precious ammo that he can't replace(that he knows of yet).
More... I want more. *Drooling*
More please
Ahhh, hello fellow gamer
Great chapter!
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Actually that isn't dumb and it serves two purposes.
1) No matter what her curiosity about the weapon, Twilight is very unlikely to mess with it after seeing that display except for the very small possibility of hiding it.
2) Rainbow Dash has seen the level of destruction it can do. While she is impressed with it, she also understands this and is far less likely to do anything with it than she would be had that demonstration NOT occurred. She is not the type to hurl a tornado at her friends(If she were Lightning Dust showing the weapon would be a bad thing). The only case where I could see her using the gun without permission would be if they were attacked and somehow Jack wasn't able to use the gun.
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Im more concerned with him giving a race he has never heard about an explaination as to how weapons they could never dream of function, and calling incredible amounts of attention to themselves with the gunshots.
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Loud gunshots and a literal beacon of rainbow light in the middle of the night
Like the firearm safety, too many people are flippant with tools that can cause a lot of harm. Was the scope on the AI named yet at all?
Don't think I have seen that Upper Echelon video yet.
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We use the Schmidt & Bender 10x42 PM II and the 3-12x50 PM II
Jack uses 10x42
One less shot... Hope he makes 1 bullet count double!
Great chapter. I feel sorry for the idiot guard that will try steal/confiscate his equicment for any reason.
To be fair... Expected she use her wings to pull the trigger
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Good point
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Gimme - gimme
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Nice =3
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Simply actualy. He has nothing to offer but knownlage and equicment. That in turn is worth a kingdom all on its own...
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Nice idea but replication of all the individual materials and combine them will be better.
'Give a man a fish and he will eat for the day,teach him to fish himself and he is cared for lifetime.'
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Unless its worth it.
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I share that oppinion.
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First part i agree but it can't be helped, second might be quite the deterant to get near the noise...
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Is it friday already? Time to party
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Nice ~♡
That was stupid. Even if you didn’t expect her to be able to pull the trigger, you never give a gun to an untrained person like that, unless you’re specifically giving them training in how to use it. Especially so, given it’s a rifle. He didn’t tell her about the recoil at all. You know people have broken their collarbone/shoulders from gun recoil? Bruised their shoulders? With pistols it’s not too bad, if you don’t have a good grip it could still fly out of your hands and sock you in the face, a rifle is another story.
He essentially just taught an unknown, alien civilian how guns work, and how to fire one, all without teaching gun safety. (No, telling them not to point the barrel at people is not gun safety. Gun safety includes the actual safety on the gun, pointing the gun at the ground at all times unless firing, how to hold the gun and what to expect when firing it including sound and - you guessed it - recoil).
I’m not liking this MC. I’m not really liking any of the characters so far actually - except Griselda - because while the MC is an idiot imo, Twilight and Rainbow act OOC, with the former being too shy and excitable and the latter being too forward, for lack of a better word.
Small changes but noticed even without prior knowing it. Well done.
Five times, easily.
To be fair, it's kind of a literal Chekhov's Gun.
Though, would it really be racism/speciesism? Since countries are broken up more along species lines, the culture of each country would be closely tied to the type of creature living there.
Ok, slight amount of speciesism now. Though, it could also just be the country the individual grows up in. Falls more into stereotyping. Like Americans are friendly assholes and the British have no taste.
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Yep, sounds about right for us.
I was kinda hoping Jack would stick with Griselda and not with the ponies, But that's me.
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Can't argue with that either heh
Shouldn't it be "fire away?"
HAHA! She got a wing boner from shooting the rifle!
Strange, I recall her having visited the human world several times
(EDIT: derp, Sunset is the one that goes back and forth)Or are the Equestria Girls humans not considered humans with their freaky skin colours?
Either way, I still think she would have used pens while she was at high school. Or did she not actually stay long enough to go to any classes? I don't remember a lot of Equestria Girls.
Or maybe I'm massively overthinking it and missed something and this is set before the S3-S4 gap.
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I am just going to assume that nobody told her the name of their species when she was over there
i like these things broke him
And i must wonder, did he pick up his already into Timberwolf fired cartridges? Great chapter