[HiE] A human wakes, finding he isn't the species he fell asleep as in a place he does not recognise, gear scattered around.
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Good to see Jack keep up the training. Loving the story Commander, this chapter is a lovely little addition to the story. I look forward to seeing what will happen next: more sunshine and rainbows, or danger, jeopardy and fear.
Hope your time with your family is rejuvenating.
pft. Jackie is making a warrior out of Dash yet. Luna approves
Excellent work
Yo... Jack is turning Rainbow into a real warior
Proof that soldiers aren't just remade in body, but in mind and spirit if you want them to be good ones.
Rd might survive without plot armor if Jack keeps her training up 👏
Bayonet training where the grass will grow green
Heh anyone else think of this?
Jack:LET ME HEAR YOUR WAR CRY!
Rainbow:*ROARS*
some giffion "EAT FLINTLOPCK REVOLVER!!!!"
I mean, since she has lived on a farm all her life, I can see how she would get tired of putting up fences.
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I just call those Post-hole diggers. They make life so much easier when you want to set posts in ground.
Until you hit a rock or roots.
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If I was the enemy, I would be a bit confused to see a multicolored animal running at me screaming.
Also, I like your profile pic.
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one, yes. Fifty? concerning. Fifty with pointy sticks? Start fucking running away.
The beauty of bayonet training is the aggression it dredges up though, some of the quietest people can have some serious warcries.
I think you need to fix that this. It took a while to understand what the character explained, and even now I can't 100% understand.
What do 'Medical Kits' and 'Meal Ready to Eat' look like in Equestria?
I've not seen anything on this, but why doesn't he train more than just Rainbow on things? Aside from letting others use his own weapons, it seems like he'd be able to train many.