Spike has a great idea to manifest his love for Rarity: to write a story about a brave dragon and a distressed unicorn and have it performed. And he has the actors to play it. Will he be able to give life to his love through art or will everything explode in his face?
Hint: the answer is the most fun one, well... except for Spike.
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Thanks to my pre-readers for helping me to avoid submitting something too crappy.
Well, this is awkward. Spike's got some splaning to do. I do hope he has some luck with Rarity after this whole thing goes down.
oh it's complete? huh. well then, I look forward to thee next storeh! I see your strategy, do a bunch of one shots to get some followers and then BAM hit them with a multichapter that gets featured.
"And Gummy wasn’t much better. He refused every direction and didn’t yield an inch until the script was rewritten to change the main character to his tastes."
That line there earned you a fave
. I love playing with the idea that gummy has a personality that only certain characters can acknowledge through the blank stare.
Gummy's going to pounce on Rarity for a kiss as soon as they're alone, isn't he?
Hmm, the story was pretty entertaining, but the ending seems like it suddenly turned kind of dark compared to the rest. But then I guess everything will be fine once they explain what really happened. Still slightly unsettling that Celestia would send guards to drag them away just because of a couple poorly explained letters, though. The rest was funny, anyway, especially the bits with Gummy. I was wondering why Spike was being so strangely quiet in the opening scene.
1137825 Now I imagine Spike using the same train of thought and performing a musical number to explain everything to the princess and Rarity.
1138973 I guess that after five years doing webcomics I get used to start with simple little things before trying the big ones XD
1141545 I think that Gummy have a lot of potential, at least for jokes. I wonder if they'll use him more in season 3. And thank you!
1141709 The line between comedy and tragedy got pretty thin, right? I have to be more cautious next time. The idea of Spike and Gummy fighting over Rarity makes me chuckle, it could be a funny fic XD
I have reviewed this HERE.