• Member Since 4th Apr, 2020
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Mentality


With every pedal to a flower, is a soul. And with every pedal that I pluck, the more I begin to understand the meaning of power.

Comments ( 39 )

Dude, you caught me with the GR Breakpoint cover art.

Let's see where this goes.

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Yay? Nay? Remember feedback is always welcome. I can’t improve if I don’t know what I need to improve on!

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Glad to gain your interest.🙏

Oh-kay then
Sounds good

So far this has peeked my interest, curious to see where this is going

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Don’t worry! Fourth chapter will be made and posted by tomorrow!

Comment posted by Lunar eclipse airsoft deleted Apr 15th, 2020

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I just think its a worthwhile read. No criticism from me.

Thank u may have many kv2 tank shaped cookies in ur future

If this is Earth's deadliest soldier, then I'm a balarina.

This soldier is a weak idiot.

No creature that's ever been through a war acts like this.

He's WEAK AS HELL. Doesn't even have any combat capability, nor pain tolerance.

You might as well have isekai'd a school shooter who completed rehab.

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Yes yes, I’m taking this into consideration and will be making changes here and there when I have the time

More please

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The next chapter is in the making!

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It's because of two little things, background Ex Machina and the need to make elongate the story.

While I don't like it much when the MC has "surprise magic", this one has gotten my interest.

*slaps tracking button*

Comment posted by Canned_buttr deleted Jun 28th, 2020

This is amazing man you have created a great story

Truly amazing man keep it up

Do not stop lad you are doing amazing

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Don’t worry about me stopping. I had to take a break for awhile due to personal issues, but now that I’m back in order, the next chapter will be up in no time!

Though please excuse any dropped quality, I haven’t written in awhile and I kinda have to get my mojo back.

Well, this is most exciting. I was a bit skeptical at first. But this turns out to be interesting. Look forward to read more.

Oh and one more thing.

took this time to jolt onto my feet and headbutt the large pony.

Ooo, Ouch....poor Big Mac, he's going to feel that one in the morning, that has got to hurt. Won't be surprised, if he ends up with a bump on his head with a bruise ego to boot. LoL.:rainbowlaugh:

Where was his Ifak? Why dident he place alarm trip wires? Why dident he cover himself with a camo tarp? For this guy to be "elite" I'm not seeing it in his actions.

Thx Discord, big preesh

Ill give this a shot, but I have a hard time getting past the description.

I learned along time ago that if in a job interview or a new-hire orientation, the more time the company spends telling you how great the job is, and how happy you will be, the worst and more miserable the job really is.

Just the way the description goes on and on telling me how phenomenal and stupendous this guy is, Just gives me horrible expectations on the actual story.

Here goes nothing.

The Monk.
“They may have been a pair of idiots, but the true test of intelligence is how you stick the landing!” -The Dimensional Traveler

Looking pretty good for a new story, keep up the good work.

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Thank you for honest feedback, I will definitely take a mental note of this and hopefully improve!

bruh, the dude in the picture kinda looks like ghost from warzone

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