What You Remember

It's funny what you remember from your foalhood. What I remember is moving a lot. What I also remember is Derpy.

This is (loosely) based on something I saw in real life, or at least the characters are. Just a short, simple story.

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Uke-Joe

Uke-Joe #1 · Aug 22nd, 2012 · · ·

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Based on a situation I saw in real life.

Pia

Pia #2 · Aug 22nd, 2012 · · ·

Still amazing.

AbominableAnon

AbominableAnon #3 · Aug 22nd, 2012 · · ·

W...wut... I am...there is a strange, clear liquid...seeping out of my eyes. What is this? No...no, really, what is this?

Wing Dancer

Wing Dancer #4 · Aug 22nd, 2012 · · ·

"Still on vacation after the death of my mom, I had time to kill," really, really, really...strange choice of words

Overall, I didn't like the narrator. Maybe because I was the Derpy of my class pretty much. And maybe because the narrator chose to be lonely instead of understanding someone who was more like him/her than anyone else -- alone, misunderstood, not liked at all.

Also, Princess Celestia must be getting a lot of spam mail from her subjects since everypony gets to write to her

deathtap

deathtap #5 · Aug 22nd, 2012 · · ·

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Overall, I didn't like the narrator. Maybe because I was the Derpy of my class pretty much. And maybe because the narrator chose to be lonely instead of understanding someone who was more like him/her than anyone else -- alone, misunderstood, not liked at all.

I'm inclined to agree with this.

Dragon

Dragon #6 · Aug 22nd, 2012 · · ·

1134626 Maybe that was part of the point. The narrator wasn't heroic, or kind, or awesome, or even all that likable. He wasn't even the main character. He was just a guy with a message. Just a guy who made a mistake.

fluttershywriter

fluttershywriter #7 · Aug 30th, 2012 · · ·

This is beautiful.

Lord Vinder

Lord Vinder #8 · Sep 4th, 2012 · · ·

I don't think we're supposed to like him, he;s supposed to be that slight jerk. Why? Because are all jerks at some point in time. This is just something he observed, and wanted to pass on, so perhaps that jerkyness in someone, won't happen.
Nicely done, I enjoyed it.

ManWithThePan