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Shakespearicles
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The last time I came this fast, I got broken up with.
A Classic
Nice first chapter, but I noticed a little typo.
That should be "refilled".
I'll tell my mom I love her, but is it okay if I skip all the other stuff?
Just asking for a sibling...
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The uncensored studio version is in the image source link.
10226677 Fixed! Thank you.
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The fornication isn't required, but it is extra credit!
And for his next amazing feat, Button Mash will invent bifocals, give away an invention that could have made him millions, and wear stocking socks
(just ignore the zebras behind the curtain
)
Very nice story. Just one minor typo.
"His".
10226746 Fixed!
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The dude was a legit player back in the day.
This picture is great.
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1000 hours in mspaint.
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No offense but I couldn't tell this was your writing. You do have a particular style that seems to be absent here. Perhaps it was a little...rushed? I dunno.
LOVE the premise of the story and I can't wait to read the rest of it though. I was just surprised when I scrolled down to the comments and saw that you were the author.
in love with you
could see her
Okay it was just chapter 1 (and somewhat chapter 2) that felt rushed. These last two chapters were of the Shakespearicles quality I've come to expect.
10227320 Fixed!
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It's hard for me to see it myself, like hearing my own voice, but it is cool to know that I have a unique style of writing.
Another person mentioned on a previous story a while ago:
There have been other similar comments. So that's pretty cool to hear that I have 'a style' from so many people.
I was never really set on having a recognizable style, but I guess it just sort of happened.
It's probably hard to articulate, I'm sure. But I would be curious to hear from my followers,
What exactly is it about my writing, or specific parts of it, that stands out to you as 'my style'? and makes you say, "Oh yeah, that's Shake's writing style right there." ?
I thought that I'd finally get that song unstuck from my head.... Not yet, not yet....
Approaches The World's Greatest Author™ dragging two giant soup bowls by hand
Please sir. I'd like some more.
Seriously, more of this. I wanna see the honeymoon night.
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I have absolutely NO formal education in writing so I don't know the proper terms here and will probably sound like an idiot, but it has something to do with the way you write dialogue. It's playful to the point of being borderline ridiculous, but it never crosses that line. I tend to prefer characters that are more...ponyish (for lack of a better word). You write your characters as basically humans in pony bodies and your characters always come off as rather juvenile. I don't know if that's intentional on your part or whether it's your understanding of human women that colors your writing style, but I could do without that. The way you write mares is sort of like a juvenile fantasy/wish-fulfillment from the point of view of a horny teenager. Again, I don't know if that's intentional or not but it's definitely a popular style amongst horny men under 30 (which technically is your target audience). It's just not really for me anymore. I'm almost 30 now so maybe that's why, but I'm looking for more in my stories these days.
But hey, don't take any of this as a criticism. It's merely an observation. I assume you're not trying to create a masterpiece for the ages. It's a freaking clopfic with no real purpose other than getting your rocks off, and it does that. But me personally? I'd like to see more of a backstory of both Button and Sunburst (from when they were younger and horny teenagers). I want to feel their desires for their mothers. It's kinda hard to do that without knowing much other than what you learned from a brief passage stating that they are attracted to them. And a backstory would justify their rather juvenile attitudes because they would be living out a fantasy they've had since they were teens.
Meh, don't listen to me. I've had a hell of a time writing recently because I've been trying to make my stories more than what they are. I'm terrible at writing anything but quick smut, so who am I to judge? I couldn't do any better. Forget I said anything. I'm only posting this in the hopes that my ramblings are of help to you in some way.
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Hmm. Well that does give me something to consider when writing something more serious in the future.
i.chzbgr.com/full/8478158336/h76807D70/wainting-for-inspiration
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Not everything you write is like this. You are capable of writing deeper dialogue and exploring serious situations. These are two examples:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/454814/frisky-flora
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/370328/law-abiding-equestrian
Both are a little too dark for me. I prefer something in between your story here and these more serious stories I linked to. One story where you nailed it is here:
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/263692/the-son-is-shining
I think you wrote another story that was pretty spot-on. If I recall it was a Twilight/Shining story. Don't remember which one so it must be an older one.
I'm a huge fan of incest, but I prefer to explore the relationship aspect of it and the backstory just as much as the kinky action. Character's motivations must be laid out carefully so that readers can actually connect with the characters. This story was hot, yes. It got me off, yes. But I didn't feel any connection to Button or Sunburst in this story, and that left me feeling empty in the end.
The reason I prefer erotic fiction to just straight up porn (pictures and videos) is so that I can actually feel what the characters are feeling. Without that it's just a more boring version of a porn image on Derpibooru.
Your premise for the story was great, but it just felt way too rushed. It felt like I just ate the frosting off the cake and I wasn't able to actually enjoy what I was eating.
You ARE capable of doing this. I've seen it. But now that I've read this story and had time to think back on it, it's just not up to your usual standard. Again, there's nothing wrong with this if all you're going for is a quick clopfic. Quick clopfics totally have their place and many people prefer them (I was guilty of this in my younger years. I didn't want to read anything unless the intro/backstory was only a couple paragraphs long). I just think that the premise was really good but the story itself kind of felt like a let-down.
EDIT: I did like and fav the story. It's a nice little clopfic and if it had been written by anyone else I wouldn't think much of it. But I know that if anyone could pull of a fic like this it would be you and I was hoping for a little bit more when I saw that you were the one who wrote it.
In other words, it feels like more of a let-down because it was written by you more than the actual story itself was a let-down. I was hoping for another masterpiece! I tend to hold you to a higher standard than pretty much any other clopfic writer that's left on this site.
ITs good to see some new work from you!
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It should also be of note he was an actual quote unquote "player" as opposed to, say, Sade, who has become much beloved figure for his libertine views on sexuality.
People regard some spoiled asthmatic baby dick weirdo as an intellectual worthy of admiration.
... Hey Shake's, knowing of Sade's progressive views and admiration of the female form, which pointy object would you have used against that irredeemable penetrations addicts roaming eye if they had roamed over either of your women?
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I liked this a lot Shake! Saving the 'reread' for the weekend, iykwim. Well done!
Aww not anthro *sad pony noises*
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I could have gone either way with it.
I put it to a vote in my Discord server.
Feral won by a single vote.
10230415
Yeah I saw that and to bad though
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10230412
Wow. It's a sad day when 50% of people don't want to see real ponies anymore. I've never understood anthro. If that's what you want, then why even bother with pony at all?
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i.imgur.com/hyD2ejk.gif
Born on a porn set and named after porno dialogue. Why did I wait so long to read this? This is my new headcanon.
I wish I knew your secrets, master Shakespearicles. Able to put out such amazing literature time and time again
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How to become the world's second strongest writer.
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In case the cover art reference wasn't obvious enough.
"Mash Mommy's buttons!" "D.P.S me harder!" "Mommy's so proud of you, son!"
I think I'm a little ashamed I know exactly where these lines came from. A little ol' flash animation...
"You're not my dad!"
"Yes I am!"
"Well I am too, and I say you're not!"
Normally, i would skip the part where they get caught. This time, however, I felt compelled to keep reading.
And I'm glad I did.
Now I'm wishing for a sequel.
Huh.
Oh damn. The twist in this chapter. It's so good, I can't even quote it for fear of spoiling a passing reader! o.o
Just.
Hot damn
I sense some cross-pollination going on here. :,P