No offense but I couldn't tell this was your writing. You do have a particular style that seems to be absent here. Perhaps it was a little...rushed? I dunno.
LOVE the premise of the story and I can't wait to read the rest of it though. I was just surprised when I scrolled down to the comments and saw that you were the author.
Nice first chapter, but I noticed a little typo.
That should be "refilled".
10226677 Fixed! Thank you.
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No offense but I couldn't tell this was your writing. You do have a particular style that seems to be absent here. Perhaps it was a little...rushed? I dunno.
LOVE the premise of the story and I can't wait to read the rest of it though. I was just surprised when I scrolled down to the comments and saw that you were the author.
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In case the cover art reference wasn't obvious enough.