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I like FiM, Star Wars, and Tarantino

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"Your," not "you're."

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Fixed! Thanks for pointing it out. Don’t know how I missed it

Comment posted by WhispersInTheDark deleted May 24th, 2022

Anthro, picture, story. Super hot in all places.

This was amazing. Will there be a sequel to this?:pinkiehappy:

"Oh! A lesson about changing history from Mister. I'm my own father."

Liking how this is going so far. However, I found a typo.

“Really?!” Stellar beamed in both surpirse and excitement, sitting up straighter.

”I am drinking.”

I think you're missing a "not" here.

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No, he was saying that he was in fact drinking, but he meant in a general sense, while Starlight meant in the alcohol sense

I changed it so he puts emphasis on the am

I’m in the fucking past.

Sunburst: "OF ALL THE STUPID, ASININE, SHARK JUMPING BULLSHIT!"

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And that’s how Sunburst became the Legendary Super Stallion

Wait, so you had a chapter titled "Im in the f*cking past" but not a chapter titled "Im f*cking in the past"? In a clopfic?
Shame on you.

Philip J Fry understands his pain.

At least he'll be protected from the flying brains.

Please make a Sequel to this :rainbowlaugh:

This has potential for a sequel.

The TfS reference at the end made it

I thought his sister would be Starlight, how funny it would be? :twilightblush:

“Oh! I uh…hehe…w-w-well…m-m-m-my mom always said I was a cute colt” Sunburst stammered. Mares don’t like it when you bring up your mom when they’re flirting with you, right?! Starlight doesn’t! Though that’s probably because it makes her think about her dad.

“Oh, a momma’s boy, huh?” Stellar remarked, interpreting his jitteriness as nervous excitement. She leaned forward a bit more and uttered in a hushed tone. “I’ll be your mommy.

Starlight was lucky she wasn’t in this time also, or Sunburst would be telepathically sending what was currently in his brain to her undoubtedly hungover one out of revenge.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!

“A-“ Stellar cut herself off, as she was surprised he managed to unintentionally guess two things correctly in trying to guess one. “Yes…and no.”

“What do you mean?”

“You did impregnated me, but not with a sibling.” His brow furrowed, confused. “You impregnated me…with you.”

“…what?”

“The foal I gave birth to from that pregnancy was you. And you just confirmed for me that you were the stallion that got me pregnant with that foal.”

“That…makes no sense” Sunburst said as he pulled away from his mother and sat down on one of the living room chairs, clutching his head with his fingers. “How can I be my own father?!”

I also really need to try and avoid writing sequel bait when I don’t have a sequel planned!

Most definitely! Now everybody wants to see Sunburst and Sunset’s reactions after they are told that they are brother and sister. After they had already had sex, and see what they will do next.

Will the fact that they are related be too much for them or they be like f**k it who cares and stay together. Sunset is Stellar’s daughter, so like her, she wouldn't care, and Sunburst is cool with fucking his mom, so what does it matter if he do his own sister, but then there's Sunset meeting Stellar, so that’s going to be awkward as hell.

But in the end, mother, daughter, son/brother who is also his own father. Will form a herd together. But will they tell Sunspot about it? 🤷‍♂️

“Oh, a momma’s boy, huh?” Stellar remarked, interpreting his jitteriness as nervous excitement. She leaned forward a bit more and uttered in a hushed tone. “I’ll be your mommy.

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Not bad, but it would have been cooler if he just stuck to screwing his mom.

11348784 I mean, he is still going to

“That my dating days are done. That I don’t need a partner. I wouldn’t mind having a friend with benefits now. Would you? ” she asked him, uttering the question in his ear.

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I mean, it would be better if she just screwed her and only her. Like, actually make her his wife.

Well, that was hot as fuck. MWB ending is god tier, but if she insists he branch out and build a herd, how can he say no?

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