At this year's Ponyville Fun and Frolic Festival, Flim and Flam have a booth on the midway offering "a unique competetive opportunity." Applejack wants nothing to do with it. Rainbow wants everything to do with it.
The original minific version of this story, "From the Top," came in 8th in the 137th Writeoff Contest, On Thin Ice. That then largely became chapter three in this longer version, my entry in the 6th Appledash contest, "Go Big or Go Home," where it did not place in the Top 6.
I was thinking of just reading one chapter to see if I liked it, and then I suddenly realised I'd finished the story. Great story :)
Yup, no way you can keep Dash away from that. I share AJ's suspicions, but let's see what happens!
Uh-oh!
This is shaping up to be a friendship mission to save the brothers from themselves, isn't it?
Rainbow Dash is genre savvy.
Put-upon Applejack is best Applejack.
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It was a great speech though.
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Celestia knows they need it.
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Thanks, folks!
The structure here is about as odd as any story I've ever written, and while it doesn't turn out to be exactly a friendship mission, it still kind of is, isn't it?
Mike
Interesting start.
Sweet of AJ to go along with this.
Oh dear. Wonder where AJ is?
Wow, AJ and Dashie certainly have become close friends.
Practical horse.