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*reads chapter title* when will you learn that your action have conscience * reade in ever increasing pitch*
Great read by the way
this
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Lol, yup.
Maybe call it the "Safe Space"?
Should have left her, maybe put her in a terrarium.
Throw the book at her.
Don't feel like she learn anything, just that she was judged unfairly in her mind. (AJ)
Well we will see from here forward.
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It's not an immediate redemption, Applejack has to serve her sentence and learn the hard way, over a long period of time as opposed to "a friendship lesson happened".
Her behavior isn't going to change overnight and she's only just realizing she fucked up.
That was nice KARMA biting back at AJ... Also got some EP-story vibes from it. Only this time the ”P” meaning Pony.
Good job and keep it up
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Jailing people doesn't usually do that though. She'll just learn to be more effectively criminal.
Probably break out with the help of her Family and go into the dark side of the business.
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Assuming she has no contact with the friends and family members that want to help her improve. Her friends and family can still visit her in jail.
AJ is refusing to be Honest with herself, especially given being Honest, so is effectively having a Lesson Zero?
Its later teh same day, only the next day, so Applebloom hasnt got back to Zecora yet?
When karma catches Applejack
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Applebloom probably would have met Zecora again when taking AJ to the poison joke cure since the zebra would've been there to supervise.
Just to be certain, didn't chapter 1 or 2 say that she, as a Luck Dragon, was able to reproduce with almost any species?
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Yes but she's not going to make that public, not when it would cause more outrage because it's not a priority for the pair. Twilight has mentioned that choosing to not have kids is a taboo topic in Equestria.
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I was just checking
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Oh, sorry! I didn't mean to come off as rude, I was just clarifying. I'm also very wordy when writing.
But yeah, the noodle dragon can have kids with other species.
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No need to apologize. You didn't come off as rude.
I was just being blunt.
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Oh ok. I'm worried one of these days someone will take what I say as a personal attack or something, hasn't happened yet but you never know with the Internet.
I'm happy people are commenting and liking the story! It's great seeing this collaboration between me and Sanguine get such a positive response.
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It's a good, engaging story, the comedy hits the mark and the characters are likable, yet believably flawed (referring to John and Lorraine).
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Well I hoped people would like smol bug and noodle dragon. Said noodle dragon is my self-insert but without any of the more wish fulfillment quirks (as in, actually being able to fill the role of hero or chosen one, save the day and whatnot) that my other self-inserts have in my own fics.
The noodle dragon is an adult that doesn't know how to be an adult, doing the best she can in a situation she is not prepared for.
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Nobody knows how to adult.
We all just bullshit our way through life and hope no-one calls us out on it, and copy people that look like they know what they're doing.
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True but how often do we see that portrayal in fiction and taken seriously?
I've had a blast working on this fic because figuring out noodle dragon's lines and reactions isn't something I've done, at least not to this extent. She's as far from a hero or chosen one as you can get and I love it.
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It's part of why I love it!
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I'm glad to hear it!
I heard that someone, probably famous, tried to set up some shelters for male victims of domestic abuse, and some monsterous retards had them shut down for reasons other than real actual danger to those who use them.
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Wow, that is not ok. I hope something like that gets the treatment and respect it deserves if someone tries again, we have womens shelters so why not have one for guys too?
So Applejack is in Jail, that's one way to throw Canon out the window. And the Zecora episode having started the way it did, I'm assuming Pinkie made things up because it was fun and convinced the town Zecora was evil.
Applejack herself could have still been perfectly fine if she hadn't started being so vitriolic, if she had just stayed adamant in her opinion instead of putting down others it would have made her look better but now she's just and made traditional herding look bad. I mean, what exactly is unnatural about John & Lorraine? If AJ is implying that every species MUST fillow the same relationship guidelines as ponies that's kinda rediculous.
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Good points, but I'd put both down to ponies (At least this AU's ponies) being pretty xenophobic. Ponies are rather insular and really only trade and respect deer, for various reasons. Also, AJ is quite headstrong and doesn't like the thought of having her viewpoint challenged.
That kind of hatred is not normal. Rather than stubbornness, I have a feeling something happened in this AJ's life.
GET REKT APPLEJACK
So it's time for Zecora
She's said she's giving a talk at the schoolhouse tomorrow, pay attention
Nah, but you might have stunted his growth a bit
The only one being improper is you