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...I'm a few years out of my OG kaijuu knowledge, but isn’t that supposed to be Gamera that uses that. Giant turtle... tortoise... whatever.
Well shit hit the fan and the chapter is over only one thing to do is ask for MORE
Also Shout out to the author and editor, I hope both of you feel better soon
I am waiting for the town's reaction to Spike's greed growth.
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I'm glad you like this and thanks for the concern, I had a blast working with Sanguine on this and it was good being able to write with him after everything we've both been through the past few days.
Glad John didnt become Godzilla?.. glad he didnt become Ghidora. I mean, that guy get the most psychotically nerfed of all of them, but at full power, he kills Stars.
I thought Lorraine was The Last Unicorn at first, but the extended description made me realise it was something I hadnt seen as yet so I had no idea of the stats.
Thats a Lot of anoyance to the crew, Lorraine needs a Starbucks class Hot Chocolate? all 750 calories per mug?
Has John discovered or practised his Rock and other inanimate transformations yet? Just thinking if he can do Kaiju, then he could try inanimate Kaiju, such as Gundam?
Pinkie being normally Pinkie. Could she get a Dragonfire cake candle for messaging, or just use a mail slot in her mane?
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Do a search for Persona 3's Unicorn. We based the design off of that with some alterations to fit the character. As for her stats, I have them written down and based off of my own Persona 3 Portable save, which is overpowered as all hell and awesome. I'm working on recreating the exact build Lorraine's Persona Form uses in Persona 5 Royal.
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If Lorraine is going for Persona5, would John be best aiming to at least pick up Mystery Dungeon Ditto? That is, gives him the A attack which uses no move cost, but more importantly, transfers movement training accross forms and party?
John as MewTwo?
Well, haveing a look at the game helps and characters, I will have to say I cant play that game, as even when its in English, it reads like the card game, Bridge. It uses a whole lot of unusual English words in unusual ways,a nd so looks like a totally different language. And I failed English.
Still, great story and characters, especially with teh AU variation. I wonder if Spoiled Rich is so desperate for herds, just so she can be just like Celestia, with all the loyalists and followers and power and control?
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Gomora is the dinosaur from Ultraman. The Super Oscillatory Wave is Gomora's unique special attack. Though I could see the name being described for Gamera's fireballs or regular spinning. XD
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Ah.
My knowledge of Ultraman is limited to two episodes of Kaijuu Girls.
F in chat
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I actually pulled most of Lorraine's Persona abilities from Persona 3 Portable, improving the build in Persona 5 Royal is just a fun thing I wanted to do as I changed only a few skills, it won't be a perfect duplicate of the build given the changes made to reflect her as a character but it's fun to work on it.
Mystery Dungeon? I know Persona and Pokemon both had mystery dungeon spin-off but I never played the Persona ones. I love Pokemon Mystery Dungeon Explorers of the Sky though.
Dunno about you all but if anyone started shit like that to my girl I definitely wouldn't be taking a damn break on the couch. I'd tell everyone telling me to go sit down to either help or fuck off. And she for shit sure wouldn't be leaving on her own, I'd be going with her. Your either together with someone no matter what, or your not.
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No need to force yourself if you're not feeling well though, which was the entire point of the scene.
Edit- missed a word, lol.
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I guess I can understand that, in certain situations. But I've done ALOT of shit I dident want to when I myself felt like shit simply because those I love and care about needed me to, even when they dident ask me to. I feel like this was a situation where she should have gone with him to show her care for him even if she was feeling bad. It's doing the smallest things that are easy to overlook that mean the biggest things in a relationship, and her leaving him by himself in that mind frame not to mention how the world looks at them right now was NOT a good or smart thing to do.
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Could you clarify which part of the chapter you're talking about?
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The very end where John leaves and at first Lorraine was gonna go do something about the situation but everyone kept telling her to go sit down and she finally gave in. Edit-- Just to clarify I do enjoy the story, so I'm NOT hating on it.
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Oh I figured you weren't hating, I just wanted clarification so I could explain our reasoning for the scene in question, I couldn't tell if it was just a difference between our intent versus reader interpretation or if we fucked up somewhere along the way.
Lorraine was pissed, not thinking clearly and trying to brute force a solution so soon wouldn't have done her or John any good. She needed to calm down to be of any use and after what just happened, her wandering around Ponyville as an overpowered white mage unicorn from earth myth wouldn't have helped. However, her plan is a good one and she is going to put it into action once she's recovered and the town has had a chance to calm down.
Sometimes de-escalation and a period of calm is needed to handle the hurdles life throws at you and that's what we were trying to convey.
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Roger roger
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Cool, I'm glad you enjoy the story. I wasn't overzealous with the comments was I? It's hard to tell if my responses are adequate or not as I'm still getting to grips with how to balance my usual replies with the fact that Welcome to Distopia is getting comments that aren't just a single sentence so I still find it weird that people like this enough to write longer comments and don't know how to react beyond being polite and explaining stuff.
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No your good. I know some of my own comments may sound like I'm attacking the story but I'm really just stating my opinion and calling out situations I feel coulda been handled in a different/better manner based off my own personal life experiences. At least you pay attention to your audience, theres alot of authors on here that couldn't give a crap and often insult/kill their fanbase, so thanks for actually listening.
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This fic is fun to work on. For me, it's both a passion project and wish fulfillment by way of Lorraine discovering she has autonomy after spending years putting others before herself. I love seeing feedback, even if it is daunting at times and I do my best to reply, I feel rude not replying to more detailed comments. I honestly don't understand how people can insult the people reading their work, sure I've replied out of anger before but never to insult someone. The internet is weird...
I've forced myself to run errands and do stuff while in physical pain before, that self-sacrificing mindset is a hard one to break which is something I wanted to show with Lorraine's character, she is me and all of her actions and spoken lines are how I'd react. Even the little things like her prior life on Earth or how she sees herself are pulled from my own experiences.
I wanted to write a self-insert OC that wasn't perfectly planned out to be a hero but instead, a self-insert OC that was as true to my life and experiences as possible. I've gotten upset writing the shorts that highlight the stress the character went through, I've had to think about how I would approach a situation. So, I know I can get defensive and take comments to seriously but that's due to the fact I put so much of myself into Lorraine's character and I do my best to remain polite regardless.
Sorry, I just really enjoy working on Welcome to Distopia and get a bit too wordy.
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I understand, when I read stories I immerse myself into that world, so in a way, to me, I'm apart of it, and am there seeing it all go down. I've been deployed twice so far in my military career, and getting immersed in stories like this is my little escape from the crap I gotta deal with everyday. That's why I call the people in the story out for their dumb shit like I would the wild monkeys I gotta live with in the army. Might sound crazy but everyone's crazy in their own way, most just ain't honest about it.
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We try to have John and Lorraine react like we would, less dumb shit and more common sense and a different way of solving problems. This is what happens when you chuck real world applications at a harem anime, which has been a joy to write.
Must be rough being in the army, I hope what we've written so far has been fun to read and feel free to ask us any questions about our OC's.
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Thank you and I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of what we've written.
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Really? That's great to hear!
Fake update?
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Explanation.
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The story showed up on my read later tab 'sort by updated', but there's no new chapter that I can see
Ah, that was a link, not a question
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I've noticed it shows up on my recently updated lists as well when we haven't updated it, I think it's just a bug. We update weekly.
The Nightmare is Philemon? That seems like an incredible stretch. Her being an entity connected to the Collective Conciousness makes sense with her thing of shadows, but Philemon himself seems a bit too... cosmic and/or distributed to take such a directed form. That and Nightmare just doesn't seem like she even fits personality wise from what we've seen.
Lorraine unlocking her Persona is pretty cool. The buildup was nice, but the actual choice seems underwhelming and mundane for equestria. For her inner self to just be a unicorn feels like it lacks deeper meaning or significance it would have if she were in some other setting. Instead its just... a pony, like everypony else. Wouldn't some other Priestess Arcana be more appropriate? Or maybe instead of being just a Unicorn, it takes the shape of some other mythical animal that acts as the equestian equivalent mythologically to what a unicorn is on earth, because for equestria it seems generic. Unless of course this is one of those cases where your Persona evolves and changes form, which given Lorraine is going to do so it would make sense for her persona to do so as well.
oh FUCK YEA! BREAK FREE FROM THE CHAINS AND SPRED YOUR WINGS OF REBELION!!
Be happy?
You also have the attention of several major Gods
Caramel.