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I'm Coming Mother - SamSwordsman123



After Twilight passes away, Nyx lives on with her life teaching a student until her time comes as well.

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Nyx's Time

After the death of her mother, Nyx carried on. Waiting until death would at last take her into its peaceful grasp. She went about her days as she typically did, telling stories of her many adventures with her mother and their friends to the current generation of foals.

She sat in one of the bedrooms of the even more ancient than her Canterlot Castle, reading the book Magic of Friendship to her current unicorn student, Evening Tide.

“And so my mother sent Luster Dawn to Ponyville to begin her own journey,” she concluded before closing the book.

“And Luster became an alicorn after defeating Grogar correct?” Evening asked.

Nyx nodded. “Yes, she earned her own wings after saving my mother.”

Evening thought for a moment. She was a blue pony like Nyx’s predecessor Princess Luna, and had a moon Cutie Mark like both Luna and Nyx. Though hers also sported a splashing tidal wave.

“Do you think, I might become an alicorn Princess Nyx?”

Nyx chuckled. “Anything is possible. We don’t know what the future holds after all.”

“Everyone was so shocked when Princess Twilight passed. They thought Alicorns were immortal.”

“There are many theories about us, Evening,” Nyx said. “We let every creature believe what they will. It has resulted in many popular folktales of us… though sadly many of them are tragic. Though in this one we sadly do have it tragic. The burden of having both a horn and wings, many ponies will be jealous of us. Perhaps that is why we are the victims of such tragic tales.”

“But when does yours end?” Evening asked.

“I don’t know. But it has been a long one,” Nyx said. “Both my mother and I have had very long lives. Long enough to fill perhaps an entire bookshelf or library. But the tale will always remain unless all the books are destroyed. Every creature knows the early story from five thousand years ago. Though in some versions I wasn’t in it. My mother never had children. Some have even been bold enough to have her give up the immortality she possesses in their versions to be with friends.”

“That does sound like a happier story. More bittersweet,” Evening said.

Nyx smiled. “Immortality is a thing with many opinions on it. Many could see it as a gift, others a curse worse than death. But I’m glad that I don’t have it and merely a longer lifespan. It has been hard watching many friends go while I remain. If my mother and I didn’t have each other… as well as Spike for a long time… we probably would have felt like hollow shells. We have coped though, knowing that one day we can be reunited with our friends. Even if we were full immortal that could happen. But I don’t know what I would choose if that were the case. Maybe I would have chosen to rid myself of immortality.”

Nyx sniffled a bit at the thought. She wiped the sprouting tears from her eyes with a hoof. Even after five thousand years of life she still tended to cry easily. Not as easy as when she’d been a filly… a filly that had never gone through a baby stage. Perhaps that had been part of the reason she cried so easily, because she was a big baby.

“Well, good night, Evening,” Nyx said before nuzzling her student.

“See you in the morning your highness,” Evening said as she pulled the covers over herself.

Nyx left the room and headed to her own bedchambers. It took her old hooves a long time to climb the stairs. As she neared them, she saw two familiar ponies. Luster Dawn and Flurry Heart both stood before her door.

“Hello Nyx,” Flurry Heart greeted her cousin.

“Hi cuz,” Nyx replied as she wrapped her forelegs around the younger alicorns body. “Hi, Luster.”

These were the last of them. The last member of her family, and the last friend she had from the first century of her life. All the others were gone, her mother and Twilight's friends as well as Nyx's, the first generation of the CMCs which Nyx had been part of. Celestia and Luna were gone as well, having succumbed to time after their alicorn magic reached its limit on life prolonging like her mother had… and soon would for her someday. Cadence and Shining Armor had both been killed protecting Flurry who had grown to rule Crystal Empire for many millenia before passing the crown to one of her descendants and coming to live with Twilight and Nyx in Canterlot. Even Discord, the obnoxious Spirit of Chaos was gone. He’d abandoned making chaos after the death of Fluttershy, the love of his life, and faded away.

“How’s Evening doing?” Luster asked.

“She’s fine. Enjoyed hearing about my mother’s early adventures,” Nyx said.

“Everypony loves Aunty Twilies story,” Flurry Heart said.

“Yes, and they will for a long long time,” Nyx said. “Even after we are all gone.”

Luster chuckled. “Princess Twilight’s tale was one to remember. I doubt mine will ever be as popular but that’s okay. She did much more than I ever did.”

“Well, we just thought we’d come say goodnight to you before you turned in,” Flurry said.

“Thank you,” Nyx said. “But before you go, there is something I should probably show you both.”

They entered her bedroom and Nyx pulled a book from off the desk with her magic and levitated it to Luster.

The youngest of the current alicorns looked at the title. “A Night Alicorns Guide to the Dream Realm.”

“When I am gone, the dream realm will need a new guardian. Its rare for ponies to get nightmares nowadays but there is still an occasion need. You are the youngest of us Luster, I’m going to trust it to you to give that to the next alicorn of the moon. That could be Evening, but we shall see… or at least you will. I doubt I have the years remaining to train her if she does become an alicorn so I have to leave that torch for you just in case.”

Luster nodded slowly, knowing that Nyx didn’t have long before her time would finally come. She still had the body of an Alicorn in her prime, though that would change in the next couple decades.

“Don’t worry Nyx, I’ll make sure whoever takes over the night roles gets this.”

“Thank you, Luster.” Nyx yawned, she looked over to her bed and with steps that seemed to get harder than ever climbed into it.

“Good night Nyx,” Flurry Heart said. “Sleep well.”

“I will,” Nyx said.

Both of the other alicorns left the room as Nyx watched. Her vision blurred. She sighed, was this the sign that her time was upon her? If so, she wouldn’t complain.

Nyx looked over to her bookshelf and levitated something out for what might have been a final look. Her own book of memories… made by her friends Applebloom, Sweetie Belle, and Scootalo. It showed pictures of them all together, along with her mother Twilight. Memories that she had always treasured throughout her life. Just like Twilight had told her, her friends lived in her memories. She had not forgotten them even after all this time… but she still yearned to be with them. Finally that time was drawing close.

Nyx flipped through as many pages as she could with her horn. It seemed to take more effort to lift the pages with her magic, like it had after she had been freed from her transformation into the new Nightmare Moon by Spell Nexus. She looked over the pictures of her playing tag with the Cutie Mark Crusaders, riding on her mothers back, and cooking dinner with Spike. These precious memories she’d kept all these millennia. She looked at them until her eyes couldn’t stay open anymore and she drifted off.

When she woke the next morning, Nyx could not rise. She had no strength, barely able to move. She could only lie in bed and wait for the inevitable. But no fear pulled at her heart. She’d lived a long and happy life, made many friends.

Soon her bedroom door opened and Flurry Heart entered her cousins room.

“Nyx! Breakfast is ready!”

Nyx looked up with a small smile and shook her head.

“I can’t… I can’t… come.”

“Why not?” Flurry asked in concern.

Nyx broke into a song, her final song.

“My time is upon me. I am going to go and see my mother… and all our friends from long long ago. My life has been good but now it must… end.”

Tears appeared in Flurry Heart’s eyes and she walked over to her cousin and pulled her into a hug just as Nyx had done for Twilight over a decade ago.

“I love you Nyx,” Flurry said.

“Love you too cousin,” Nyx said.

Flurry Heart remained hugging her for a time, then slowly pulled away and wiped her eyes with a hoof.

“I’ll- I’ll go and tell everypony,” she choked out. “Get Evening to come and say goodbye.”

Flurry left for a time as Nyx felt weaker, she rest her head on her pillow. Though she was weak , she was not in pain. For that she was grateful. This was a peaceful way to go. Soon Flurry returned along with Luster, Evening, and a handful of other students that Nyx had taught.

“Princess Nyx!” Evening cried out as tears appeared in her eyes. The other students were likewise teary eyed.

Evening and the other fillies gathered around Nyx on her bed.

“Its okay little ones,” Nyx said.

“How can it be okay when you’re… you’re…” Evening couldn’t finish.

“No pony lives forever Evening. I’ve lived longer than most,” Nyx said. “But death will come for all of us sooner or later. That’s why we must not fear it and accept it. I am going to be with my mother again.”

“How do you know that?” Evening asked.

“I have faith,” Nyx said. “We will see all see each other again in the next world someday. No matter how long it might… take.”

Her vision began to fade away, Nyx knew she didn't have much time left.

"Luster," she called out weakly.

"Yes?" Her mother's first top student asked.

"Remember your promise," Nyx requested.

"Of course, I'll do my best to teach her and the others," Luster promised, putting a hoof on Evening.

A white light appeared in her vision though her eyes were closed. And from that light she saw somepony very familiar, though it had been a long time since she’d seen her mother in that form. Twilight was the same size as when she had first found Nyx stuck in a thorn bush. Nyx meanwhile, had turned back into the filly Twilight had pulled out of the bush.

“Hello my child,” Twilight said.

“Mommy,” Nyx said, galloping forward and jumping into Twilight’s forelegs.

Mother and daughter held each other for a long time. Embracing each other in the greatest love there was possible in the world, love that stretched beyond life, death, and time itself. Just like friendship which could be just as powerful.

“Nyx!” a familiar voice called out.

Nyx looked over Twilight’s shoulder and saw the spirits of three familiar fillies. Applebloom, Sweetie Belle and Scootaloo. Behind them were five other familiar looking mares that Nyx recognized instantly as her mothers first best friends.

Twilight released her daughter from the embrace and Nyx ran over to her own first friends.

“I missed you all so much!” Nyx shouted out as tears filled her eyes and she threw her hooves around the three of them.

“We missed you too,” Sweetie Belle said hugging her.

“Hey Nyx, look I can fly in the afterlife!” Scootaloo said as she flapped her little wings which had never in her lifetime grown large enough to support her.

Nyx smiled. “You finally got your dream.”

“Yeah, I can’t wait for you to see me race Rainbow Dash now!” Scootalloo said.

The said Pegasus with the multicolored mane walked up. “Hey there, Nyx.”

Nyx smiled at her and all of Twilight’s friends.

“I missed you all!” Nyx said.

“We did as well, darling. We’ve been apart for a very long time, but we’ve always been with you as well,” Rarity said.

“In your heart, just as you’ve been in ours. Even if they’re not quite beating,” Applejack said.

Spike than came forward and put his arms around her. "Hi, sis."

Nyx nuzzled her adoptive brother warmly. Twilight soon came by her side. “Come, my child, lets go and meet with all the others.”

Nyx nodded. She and her mother were where they wanted to be, with all their friends. It had taken a long time to be reunited with them… but here they all were… at last.

Author's Note:

I had thought of making a little sequel to my currently most loved story, then someone requested it and I just had to do it.

Even if Twilight outlives her friends, that doesn't mean it has to be forever depending on our imagination. I have a different headcanon of course where she doesn't, but we all choose to believe what we choose.

Hope you will like this story as well.

Comments ( 49 )

Beautiful. A fitting sequel.

Beautiful. A fitting end for all those characters.

Beautiful great work

I’m coming mother

I’m sorry I couldn’t help myself from posting this.
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I knew it. You do have a killing alicorn fetish. By old age or not. Might be the only time I've seen someone kill Nyx.

10029668
I dont hate alicorns, I just want them to reunite with their friends or be with them even in death. Immortality is a worse fate to me.

She is an alicorn Time can't kill her

10029720
That's debated. It's never been confirmed that Alicorns are immortal or have very long lives. I say a forum on the fandom wiki stating they aren't but a trading card game stated Celestia and Luna are. For my headcanon, their immortality or longevity comes from their power over the sun and moon. We saw Cadence aged normally from when she was Twilights foalsitter so I'm convinced it's not being an alicorn that gives that.

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I counter that argument that you never ever saw Celestia become an emtional wreck about lost friends People seem to blatently ignore that fact it seems.

Luna was gone for 1000 years, so who knows where she stands. And then there's Cadance and Flurry. Both alicorns, and yet no one seems to show them in the same boat as Twilight.

Because the three of them would be. All of the above makes any argument to the contrary mute to me personally.

10029779
True we never see her become an emotional wreck. But for all I know she kept it buried or hidden well. I've seen fics where Twilight is focusing on the positive rather mourning after her friends are gone, so Celestia could have done that I suppose. But we dont know for sure. You have your beliefs and I have mine.

10029737
Or they reach an age and stop growing. The sisters have been around 1000 plus years. At minimum they won't die of old age.

10029798
Frankly I do see Celestia pushing alicorns so she wouldn't be alone again.

10029874
Not for a long time at least if it is indeed being an alicorn. You dont have any real proof that they are full immortal besides lasting for thousands of years. This all just theories from the fandom. Yours aren't any less valid than mine, we cant fully prove them but we can choose to believe them. I've heard someone else say the sisters possess immense magic power which caused 50 years to be equal to one for them. Now Twilight has their powers since they gave those to her when they fused the crowns according to Jim Miller, that's why she doesnt look aged like her friends. But you believe what you want.

10029883
I jsut go On why have two different kinds of alicorns. another big issue is you are usign Past sins as a reference for this story and Nyx beign Luna's clone would be like her at minimum.

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One problem there, we already know there are at least two different kinds of alicorns. Cadence and Twilight both ascended from Pegasus and Unicorn, Flurry Heart was born naturally. So there could alicorns that have normal lifespans as well. Its all our imagination and how we choose to interpret it. For this story and its prequel I went with the alicorns are not immortal but live longer lives theory, which isn't my main one. As for Nyx being Luna's clone and "minimum" as you say, who's to say Nyx couldn't become very powerful when she grows up? Her power may have been taken away at the end of Past Sins but that originally belonged to Luna as Nightmare Moon, so she can develop her own power. At least that's the way I see it.

To be fair to the other side of the discussion Twilight could have a perfectly normal and happy life if she outlives her friends. I've seen such fics written for years. My point of view on the subject is "Wouldn't it be nice after her task is done she's able to retire to the afterlife after all the eons she's lived? To be able to see her friends again after all her time serving as Equestria's protector?"

I have nothing against the other side of the fandom who likes the idea of immortal Twiggy. If that's what you prefer there is no shortage of your side of the argument, especially after the series finale. 90% of the fandom agrees with you.

If you're not a fan of our point of view well we'll just have to disagree on that point. I mean is this group really harming anything? Besides we have far more "Twilight's friends become immortal" fics than "passes on with them".

Comment posted by Griffonheart2012 deleted Jan 12th, 2020

10030272
Tl;Dr: Not sure why it's a big deal that some of us want Twilight to hang onto her friends.

10030272
Yeah, I guess Twilight could continue to be happy if she finds a new purpose in life after her friends are gone. But I've been raised on the immortality is a curse philosophy, I cant see her being alone as a happy thing. She is the princess of friendship, she needs her friends. Maybe she could make new ones until her time comes after thousands of years, or by some other means?

I could probably cope with the loss, but my beliefs are too hard core at the moment. I would want to pass on regardless.

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I will agree that Twilight being alone isn't a happy ending at all. Though, this also depends by what do you mean by "alone"?

Whenever I hear someone mention this about someone that's immortal, this usually means they are alone. That is, the only living being left, which would obviously suck. But, I can't help but get the feeling that the context of Twilight being alone here may be "alone" as in "without Applejack, Rarity, Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, and Spike". Not quite "alone" in this case. Not to mention, the first friendship lesson Twilight taught Starlight (that Starlight listened to) was to make new friends if those you have must leave for one reason or another. I can't help but feel like I would be underestimating Twilight's character to think that she couldn't do it too.

Still, it would come down to how you see her though; some fans seem to think she could like I do. But others, not so much, but I can see why. I will also note that this is assuming Twilight isn't immortal, but simply has a longer life span as an alicorn, effectively making her out-live her friends, but not immortal.

On a related note, I remember once reading a story that used Twilight's assumed longer life-span as an alicorn in a different light. instead of it being a bad thing for her, because she would out-live her friends, that story used it to help Spike not be alone after the rest of the mane 6's time came. The rest of the mane 6 were gone, but Twilight was still there for a full-grown Spike.

10030688
You do have a point. She did tell Starlight to make new friends, which could apply to an immortal life as well. But I'm not sure if she would view it that way. If your new friends will die too I dont see much of a point, and time would pass on a lot as well. Twiligbt could be seen not as a friend but a ruler by everyone except Spike.

To me it's the opposite, I view accepting death as stronger than carrying on. I can see strength in carrying on after loss but wisdom to me is rejecting immortality. True it may have its benefits but I just can't see them as outweighing the consequences. I've always been a bit of a loner, sometimes I feel like a hollow shell.

We will likely never know whether she does outlive them since the series has ended unless they address it in the comics but we can make our own endings and I'm grateful for that. It could also be a source of conflict for Twilight, having to choose between passing with her pony friends or staying with Spike.

10030688
She absolutely could, she does have a much better support structure not just Spike and other Alicorns bht also Discord, Ember, Thorax and Pharynx who will probably live for a while longer than the average changeling, Smolder possibly Scorpan etc... Maybe Luster Dawn as well if the fandom headcanon of her being a potential Alicorn is true.

It really comes down to personal feelings I guess. Seems to be a bummer ending to such a great cast of characters. I mean if Cozy Glow can randomly become an Alicorn via a frigging bell of all things and Cadence via a magical rock.... What's preventing say Shining Armor ascending using the Crystal Heart or say another powerful magical artifact doing so for Twilight's friends?

I guess it all comes down to how you view that particular scenario.

10030969
Yeah. Well I'm gonna try and make a fic where she makes her friends and family alicorns or live longer.

10030974
Only if you want to Sam. Write whatever makes yo happy. ;)

10031014
If I had all my loved ones with me I'd be good with immortality.

“And Luster became an alicorn after defeating Grogar correct?” Evening asked.

Real or discord disguise lol (I know u mean real just joking)

Roughly, how long was the gap between Twilight's passing and Nyx's passing

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A decade, maybe a little more I guess. Dont think I really established that.

This really...moved me.

Goodness, it's amazing to see so much lore packed into such a simple 2,000 words. I tip my hat to you, Sam.

10245873
Thank you. Are you in the group I just joined? At least someone likes my stuff.i got a couple dislikes just a while ago so that caused me to delete a forum. Apologies for any misspelled words here, my phone is acting up.

10245879
Indeed, I seem to be in the new group. Could do with some help on my lacking comment and/or somewhat similiar dislike situation, but I feel mines a bit more complicated.

Here's a question that I really wished I'd asked earlier. But why did you bring Nyx into this? People seem to have a fetish for bringing an overrated OC into a lot of stories, none of which are really connected to Past Sins.

I don't know what Pen Stroke ever said about her use. But it's been bugging me for a while now.

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Well I made the first story as a way to try and let go of my distaste for Twilight outliving her friends. Not entirely successful with that. I thought having Nyx would make things easier for her since she would at least have her daughter by her side throughout the long alicorn lifespan. She is one of my favorite ocs and I wanted to make a little tribute to her.

Pen Stroke said we could use her as long as we gave him credit.

10029779
Something you overlook though is that Celestia has never talked about immortality. So we dont know her ideals at all. That leaves it completely open to interpretation, Celestia may seem happy, but I've met a couple people that think she could have hidden her pain. Also, coming back to when I posted in the immortality forum and you talked about dishonor. I dont think you or anyone that makes a fic where twilight outlives her friends has a right to speak of honor. Meghan McCarthy said Twilight would not outlive her friends, therefore it is dishonorable to make Twilight outlive her friends in my eyes.

And before you say anything about so called canon lore of the show I point out that it's never been stated in the show how Celestia and Luna lived so long. With dragons its obvious they have longer lifespans but age spells exist, so that's another option. But you know what HAS been stated? That Celestia and Lunas powers over the sun and moon were how they remained young in the journal of the two sisters. Stated by writers is more canon than fan made ideas in my book. Jim Miller said they dont know how long everyone lives including twilight, he also said Celestia and Luna gave twilight their powers over the sun and moon. You just wait till the movie comes out heh heh. They said Twilight Sparkle would not return in Generation 5, I'll bet shes gonna get killed in the movie, its its supposedly gonna be more for adults so they could make it more intense.

Very good story, nice gentle hit to the feels while imparting a very good lesson. The lesson that Immortality is not the blessing many think it is. It's a Curse that makes you watch as all those around you leave for the next journey and leave you behind till finally you are left alone. So be glad that death comes for it isnt some monster or horible thing. Death is but a guide who waits for us to be ready to take its advice on where or journey must go.

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Thanks, you might like my main headcanon story Luster Dawn New Days.

“There are many theories about us, Evening,” Nyx said. “We let every creature believe what they will. It has resulted in many popular folktales of us… though sadly many of them are tragic. Though in this one we sadly do have it tragic. The burden of having both a horn and wings, many ponies will be jealous of us. Perhaps that is why we are the victims of such tragic tales.”

Yeah I think that is a really interesting theory about how Alicorns work but again I'm not sure but as I said before in the other ones probably keeps saying about that if they transferred their magic to another alicorn they will lose the ability of immortality I mean they can live longer but the time will be coming soon it is sad but I guess that's how life is again it's the circle of life they call it

Ok wow again tearjerker so nyx time was coming soon as they expected especially how much times that she has I don't know how long she lived because she was created but I guess stranger things happens in a good way so she said her goodbyes to her students and her cousin and of closest friend that she only have in the world and now she is with her mom and her friends and everybody there as Charlie from All Dogs Go To Heaven says goodbye isn't always forever is just saying see you later and yeah it was something again good job on the story

Thank you for writing this.

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You're welcome may ask why you are grateful?

This story was really good. But I think that part where you describe Discord was truly depressing. Because yeah, that would be the only way for Discord to die

11619222
In another story of mine (my main headcanon) he binds his, Twilights, and Spikes, lifeforces to the Mane 5 so the three of them don't outlive the others. That's just another way I thought of.

I love this story as much as I do the prequel and it makes me cry just as much. It is wonderful though to see mother and daughter reunited.

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Thanks. I have another story that follows the Canon version without Nyx. Of course it's my secondary headcanon after Luster Dawn becomes Twilight’s successer. G5 is an au in my eyes.

11762475

Sounds interesting.

Everypony should have a signed copy of Twilights' friendship letters to Celestia on their bookshelf, and in every library. It should be required reading. It was groundbreaking.

Twilight and Nyx have many generations of friends to surround them.

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