I'm a Brony I'm Canadian I have lived in Canada my whole life I love Pokemon, My little pony, and Ace Attorney
Twilight Sparkle the child of Princess Luna and her husband Night Shadow born 1008 years ago, she had a happy life with her Mother, Father and Aunt, but after 5 years this happiness started to end, her mother and aunt began to fight more and more and rumours began to spread about Luna and her daughter
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*cough* Grammar *cough*
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*cough* I've seen worse *cough*
Not a bad story but I would recommend finding somepony to edit it for you and to proofread it. It shows promise. I’ll add it to tracking.
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Can you tell me any misspellings or punctuation I missed
( I could have my tutor proofread it)
Is Snowdrop going to be in the story?
Interesting idea. There are some grammar mistakes, but those are easy to fix once you have an editor. All in all adding this to my collection.
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Next chapter
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What's the new chapter going to be called?
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That I’m not sure about
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Well, I know the perfect name for the new chapter.
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And that is
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Snowdrop meets Twilight
cute start to being with, and yea I agree with you night, Mood swings and the Royal Canterlot Voice, not a good combination
Hmmm... You have my attention, can't wait for more!
P.S. Luna's mood swing during her birthing of Twilight was hilarious
When is this going to be updated??! I want to know what happens next.
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I’ll hopefully have chapter two up this week
How would she know luna nodded?
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How did I miss that!? 
Oh my God, this was so adorable!
Nice chapter.
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Thank you
Great start to a great story
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Thank You!
Great story
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Thank you
Dose snowdrop have aunt Katniss?
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I didn’t know she had an aunt
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I’m joking
Snowdrops moms name is primrose
I’m refrencing the hunger games where the main cheaters name is katniss and her sister is named primrose.
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Oh I get it (Can’t believe I didn’t notice that)
When is the next chapter coming out?
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I’m working on it I would say later this month but not making any promises
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if by later this month you mean three months then I agree
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Hey writing is harder than it seems without it just being a description of what’s happening
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fair enough still i wish you good luck man/woman
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Thanks. Also you can just say man. My original name on here was just my real name Adam Griffiths
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fair enough
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Thanks I’m working the next chapter after being stuck for so long I’ve gotten a lot done but don’t know how the pacing will feel for others
a nice little chapter, ill have to re read this awsome of a story though...how dare you make an amazing story <3
cant wait for more!
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What are you gonna do sue me for making it?
Thanks
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if it means you keep making awsome stories then yes :3
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Ok!
more please relase next 50 chapter
Things go down hill from here
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Yes they do
I won’t spoil it but there’s one thing that will happen in the next chapter if not definitely the next that I planned before I even started the first chapter or even came up with the title
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But celestia would have to take a hell of a ego trip to ignore her sisters distress. I am curious to how you go about it
A war is coming... Worth the wait, btw
Nice work!
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When can we expect an update?
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I don’t know haven’t had much inspiration for this story. But I’ll pick it up again