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Picardy Third 73018

Joined January 2012
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    Picardy Third's Stories (7)

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    While in her hotel room, Rainbow Dash writes a letter to a friend she left in Ponyville: a friend she hasn't seen in a long time.

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    This is a short story I wrote in a few hours to help me get over the fact that I no longer have a laptop. Please read and enjoy!

    First Published
    17th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    17th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 13 )

    #1 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    fantastic my good sir, fantastic...

    #2 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Dammit! I didn't wanna start my day by crying! :fluttercry:

    *sigh* Didn't even see it coming. Well played. Well played indeed.

    And now that I've finished it, the rest of the story comes back with a kick.

    Please keep writing, I'll keep reading!

    #3 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wow, I should've seen that one coming. :fluttershysad:

    Very, very well written, nice work :)

    #4 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Thought that was the reason for the silence. A very nice ending nontheless :pinkiehappy:

    #5 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Wow that was a very nice story I must say, teared up at the end.

    :ajsleepy:

    #6 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Welp, that's sad. Like, really sad. You played it great.

    I'm a fan of TwiDash and all, but that ending just really got me.

    #7 · 39w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Great in that "Oh damn you and your feels way." Well written, good sir (or madam).

    #8 · 39w, 22h ago · · ·
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    Words can't express the feels of this fic.

    So here we go

    :'C

    #9 · 38w, 5d ago · · ·
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    I saw the end coming... but even so, it still almost made me cry :fluttercry:

    Beautiful.

    #10 · 38w, 4d ago · · ·
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    :raritycry: Why? :raritydespair: WHY?!

    Damnit Picardy! :fluttercry:

    But in all seriousness, this was beautiful. A truly masterfully woven fic that just kills you on the inside... Sigh... I'm gonna go cry myself to sleep now...

    #11 · 38w, 3d ago · · ·
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    -CRIES-

    #12 · 34w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh man....i almost cried :fluttershysad:

    Ok, i admit it..... i totaly cried :fluttercry:

    The story is  sooooo touching and i still have to recover because of the ending, i almost couldnt think at work today.

    Great work, really.

    #13 · 11w, 3d ago · · ·
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    Reading through the entire thing just fine...Get to the end...Procede to bawl eyes out.:fluttercry:

    This was very good.  You depicted Dash extremely well in this.  I will now read your "Don't Cry, Dear" and "Breaking Point".

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