A secret tugs on your mind. It causes you to lash out on your friends closest to you, even if you don't mean it. It is eating you away, but there is no way you can tell them. How could you? They will hate you, surely.
Rainbow Dash has a secret like this.
And she doesn't want to tell anypony.
What happens if it gets out?
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Pretty good. Had me going for a bit there with Blueblood.
D'AWWWWWWWWWW
...holy shit. Its 2 AM.
Being three hours past midnight in my part of this world and having work I must commence upon in the morrow, it is with reluctance that I place this upon my "read later" list and promise unto you that I shall return at a later date, read this tale of Appledash, and if the mood strikes me solidly, write a respectable comment in opposition to this previous sentence of wasted words and long winded eloquence.
No idea why I did that, but it was fun.
Yeah I'm gonna read this later and probably write a fairly lengthy comment depending on how much I like this fic.
Edit: Oh... Apparently I read this already on fanfiction, I remember liking it there so good job!
I like the idea of Rainbow Dash with a diary, it seems like the sort of thing she'd do but keep secret.
Warm and fuzzy, while some conflict at the same time, KEEP WRITING LIKE THIS
Aw, that was really good! I liked how the story progressed in 3 parts, kinda like a play. It was adorable, and well written, and you can never go wrong with Appledash
Awesome work 
There were a lot of moments that made me go beyond facepalming (at present, thats facebedding) but regardless this was still a good read
Fair story with some great romantic elements. Definitely worth reading
*applause*
A lovely cute fanfic that warmed my hearth and made me hate Gilda even more than I already did. It is a good story and I liked every second I read of it.
I really liked this, whenever you can make one of your readers want to kick something in the balls, then your doing something right.
It did seem strange that while rainbow was being held back that her friends did nothing to stop gilda, but other than that, this story is perfect.
You're over populated
so I slaved for days creating gays
but your ended up hating them
SO FUCK YOU
"Oh My God" Bo Burnham
Great story had me goin thinkin Blueblood was all nice and a gentlecolt,but alas it could not be.
I hate such prejudiced ponies
Great story, a perfect example of a good AppleDash
I hate Blueblood and Gilda even more now.... Have 10 Spikes with Mo's
da fuq @ last part
709393 He's a stuck-up posh jerk. The SEED version of him had a silver spoon in it's mouth.
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Wow. Im in the exact same situation as you
Time t' hit the hay
Great story, by the way!
-Jrzfine Out
Nice! Only, in the beggining of the story , you wrote "man" instead of "stallion" or something. Jus' pointing out :)
Brilliant job. This is one of the few stories that inspired me to write my FanFic. This is so awesome and romantic. So sad when 'Dash though AJ was cheating.
Applause are in definite order. You done good.
EDIT: Reread it. Finished at 2:25 AM. Still just as great as I remember
D`AAAAAAAWWWWW I STILL LOVE YOU
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that's me every night when i'm writing my stories. lol.
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You forgot the "
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I hatee Gilead even more now
Good story and its actually finished. Blueblood is homophobic (I could predict this when it said both couples would go on a date at the same place.)
*wanders in*
Oh hello, what's this? An Appledash? Whee!
Do like the concept. A bit clichéd, but hey, it was pretty darn well executed.
OK, so the formatting could use some work. I found it kinda irksome to have to parse through all this. Your writing has DEFINITELY gotten better; I read Remember a while back and I think that it's much improved from this. Maybe take the time to edit this.
Oh yeah, I think this has been mentioned before, but try to stay in Equestria. That means no hands, arms, or stuff like that.
But hey, well done!
Hmm, It seems that I have another reason now to try some honey roasted griffon glazed in a smokey applewood BBQ sauce.
Great story so far. I have read quite a few that have someone "coming out of the closet" and this is the first where a lot of people end up disapproving of it.
You know, if you wanted to update this story, something seemed to scream for attention in the story, but wasn't pointed out specifically. First, Rarity decided to rethink love and decided that being gay is fine. Next, you said something snapped in Rarity. Third, Rarity stood up for fillyfoolers and Rainbow Dash. If you were to make this story slightly different, this could've had an extra twist. Rarity's never had it work out with stallions, as said in the story earlier, and right near the end she had a little moment with Rainbow Dash. I half expected Rarity to suddenly kiss Rainbow Dash. Facts seem to lead up to that, but you did nothing with it. Rarity could've suddenly realized that she, too, loves Rainbow Dash. This would make sense seeing how much Blueblood bothered her when he spoke negatively about Rainbow Dash. In the end, Rarity could end up with somepony else after Rainbow Dash let's her down easy. I knew that this would not happen, though, seeing how this story was only three chapters. Also, during the Celestia part, she said to clear some space and my first thought was "She heard the news and she's not happy. She's going to try to use the elements on Rainbow Dash to 'cure" her." I knew that this was not possible either, though, since this did not have the sad tag. This story was also way too technical, so I couldn't get into the story. You're being thorough and accurate, but it's a little hard to imagine a story when you go, so deep into it, because it pulls you out of the story. I read the beginning, though, so I understand that this is an old story, but it might be good to publish a remake as well where you update it and do more with it.
You know what gilda... FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU
Damn fine story my good sir/maam
I really enjoyed reading this and more so, I appreciate your choice not to leave the rest of the 'gang' behind and, although Rainbow and Applejack are the center of attention, give them a little bit of spotlight as well.
Though I wonder what Fluttershy was so hesitant about...
Rarity readjusting her thoughts about homosexuality did seemed to be a bit rushed, as did the apology that one pony gave at Rainbows party. And although Big Mac showed his support, I can easily imagine Granny Smith to be a bit more... conservative about this.
It was entertaining.
Thank you.
and that stupid fuck get's off Scot free! again!
FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU GILDA!! IM GONNA RIP OUT EVERY SINGLE ONE OF YOUR FEATHERS! DUNK YOU IN BOILING WATER AND HAVE YOU SERVED AT MY NEXT THANKSGIVING DINNER!!!
Fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck