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Sad but heartwarming. A little cliche, but overall a nice story.
Loved it
I can actually see this as an actual episode. Nice job!
T-that...that was beautiful...
I kinda felt a little awkward reading this one. But that's more of a case of my taste in less serious works and prolly isn't anything against this five.
I'm gonna go ahead and give this 4 yays.
Wait, wait, wait. Why the hay does this well written and thoughtful (not to mention tear-jerking) piece only have like five other comments?
339451 I think you mean ep 17. And I meant because it ran like an episode. The friendship report at the end.
I don't understand why this has so few likes and comments!
I guess this is a Dickensian adaptation, I'm surprised there aren't more with the whole whole pride , prejudice and zombies thing going on.
Pride prejudice and ponies seems like a no brainer.
ooooh... Little Mares would also rock, I'm Thinking AJ or RD as joe , Rarity as Meg and Fluttershy as Beth .
" they realized they were no longer little fillies: they were little Mares*".
More classic lit crossovers please.
*Yes I know this is from the simpons and not Louisa May Alcott
Though too dark for anactual episode, it definately has that feel of possibly being one. Though a little predictable (only due to the nature of this story, it was nothing you could have avoided), it still was a well told story, and I truly enjoyed it! Thank you!
I have a question for the author of the literature. What didi just read?!
Honestly, the detail that went into this story just oozes with creativity that it would be too good to be an episode, let alone My Little Pony. Though the third half would be too dark to be canon.
But if I had the right to be negative, it would be Mary's quick change of heart and the back story was to short and rushed. Minor nitpicks, but it doesn't break the story for me.
Well done, sir. Have a fave, a like, and a little bit of Spike!
OMG! S-So Sad
Pretty expected, except for her forming The Wonderbolts, but nicely written nonetheless
I liked it, have an upvote.
I keep coming back to this story expecting to see the likes increase to at least a hundred. This story DESERVES to be in the upper echelon of MLP fan fiction. It's just that good and it's a shame it doesn't get the proper recognition.
I'm distracted by the fact that "Mary" isn't a pony name.
Reminds me a bit of the movie driving Mrs. Daisy
This was so well written, it just takes all the feels from me, it deserves the best, you did an amazing job.
Awesome!