Letting Go

Applejack awakes one morning to find Rainbow Dash is missing and everypony is acting strangely...What does everypony know that she doesn't?

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Dublio

Dublio #1 · Nov 22nd, 2011 · · ·

Just from the title and the synopsis, it sounded really sad. Reading the story, it was. Poor Applejack.

Rrazz

Rrazz #2 · Nov 22nd, 2011 · · ·

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Poor AJ indeed :(

akodkwodwa

akodkwodwa #3 · Nov 22nd, 2011 · · ·

I remember reading this. Saddies were had.

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Swagg

Swagg #5 · Nov 23rd, 2011 · · ·

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Aww man! That was so sad! Poor Applejack...... all sadness aside though, I totally loved it! Your writing style is awesome!!

Rrazz

Rrazz #6 · Nov 23rd, 2011 · · ·

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I'm glad you liked it :) I do need to improve in a few areas, but overall its good to know people are enjoying the story :)

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Indeed, I was quite sad just writing it...

john-117

john-117 #7 · Dec 12th, 2011 · · ·

Another author killing Rainbow Dash.

Pros: its basically well written(spelling grammar etc), and it's very well tied in(it's not trying to be something its not). The premise of Apple Jack forgetting is something new(to me) so bonus points there.
Cons:well, Rainbow Dash did die.

Rrazz

Rrazz #8 · Dec 13th, 2011 · · ·

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Well, I'm glad you liked it :) But, yeah I'm not entirely happy to knock off RD. When I wrote it I didn't think much of it, hell the idea just popped into my head and I typed it up over the course of a few hours...but now that I've been reading fanfics quite a bit I've noticed RD is kinda a favorite to do away with...which is kinda disappointing :/

Diabolic Gnome

Diabolic Gnome #9 · Mar 28th, 2012 · 1 · ·

all i haz are sadz now

Rrazz

Rrazz #10 · Mar 29th, 2012 · · ·

377060 *Gently pats*

Comma-Kazie

Comma-Kazie #11 · Aug 17th, 2012 · · ·

Not bad, but I could see where this going from the start. What really caught my eye was how AJ blocked out the memory, and to be honest this story would have had a much greater gutpunch if she had woken up and slipped back into the cycle of memory repression--we would have know what was happening but she wouldn't have, and that would have been genuinely tragic.

As it stands, this story is well-written and well-characterized but suffers from predictability. 2.5/5 stars.

Rrazz

Rrazz #12 · Aug 17th, 2012 · · ·

1102705 Thanks for the review.

In hindsight that would have made a better ending. And I could have built it up a little better. Writing it at 3am was probably not the best idea, but hey inspiration strikes at the oddest times lol.

Oh well, tis always next time Thanks for the comment!