Hello fellow Brony's  and Pegasisters, This is my very first fic and i hope i did half decent on chapter one. Look forward to more chapters in the future, as i will fully finish Falling for scratch. Please leave any suggestions, tips, or advice in the comments

Thanks a ton: technincscratch

i like here have a pony for your hard work

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Woot.Keep up the awsomness

a human is an OC. An Other would be like a changling or a specific dragon.

And their names deserve capital letters...

You need to captilise all the 'i's, it gets a bit annoying.  Am tracking though.

I wish to be O.C.D. but my humanity tells me not to do it. Interesting so far, I will track the hell out of your story.

Every new speaker gets a new paragraph.

And I spotted alot of elementary errors.

Basic writing bro.

But tracked.

Thanks for all of your helpful comments, I realize i have made some elementary mistakes... was a little when i wrote this (if you know what i mean (you know being excited to be writing my first fic)) will edit CH 1 today taking in all of your help, and will also start on CH 2. Feel free to add any more suggestions ,and thanks for the help, and support

Brony for life: Technicscratch

>>10849011084901 OCD is life my friend, go crazy on your grammar nazism.

Well, here is my thoughts, you need top capitalize all "i"s in this, for there were a few missed. Also, capitalize their names, you have missed Scrath's a few times. You also understand commas better than most fanfics I've read and the story is coming along nicely. Maybe a little too fast for some people or ponies, but who says love at first sight is always wrong. I am tracking this one.

Well CH 2 is up I took a look over CH 1 again and fixed somethings as well as "slowed some things down" in CH 2

if you haven't read my blog i suggest that you do.

Short post

Technicscratch

LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!

this is just

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Just to let you know, names like Rainbow Dash, Pound Cake, and Pumpkin Cake are two words.

@Wumz

Oop's, silly me

Thank you for telling me. Will fix it right away

when i here techno and bass or something

Do a bit more thorough check, you have some errors, like I saw an uncapitalized "i" Just saying

good job

*Whew* Chapter 3 done, and it's the longest one yet!

Hope you guys, enjoy it, and I would like to put a special thanks out to everyone that favorited liked and commented.

Thank you for all your support

Technicscratch

Grammar. Please check your Grammar.

i like >>12132811213281 and fuck grammar!

It's good, but you really need to work on grammar... The obvious example:

'Why would you hide those their, their"... "Their beautiful"

Should be 'they're' (as in, they are), as 'their' is possessive (as in: it is their bicycle).

Yes, sorry for obvious grammer mistakes, I appreciate when you comment, it helps me fix it, will try my hardest to not let that happen in CH 4

Hey everypony, I know that this is completely Irrelevant when it comes to "Falling For Scratch" , but I feel at the same time it is, and since I have no clue if anypony will read my blog, I'm posting it here instead (please don't hate me for this)

I'm thinking about writing another story on the side. It will probably be a lot "smaller" then my current story.

I either want to do a Grimdark or Sad story, based around one or two of the cutiemark crusaders, Rarity, and AJ, or I want to do a prequel to "Falling For Scratch" on how David got to ponyville.

What would you like to see more?

Loving this story so far hope you make more chapter oh here

Have a handmade luna pic

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PRINCESS LUNA FOR THE WIN!

@technoscratch

Thank you for the pic

I will finish falling for scratch (estimated to be around 10 or 12 CH's now) but I was just wondering what you would like to see me write next (or at the same time). I figure if I can write a second story, I will have more time to think about the other story, and have a clear mind for this one (means better content).

Thanks for all the support Technicscratch

Pfft, I'd dump Scratch for Luna anytime.

You deserve a mustached Spike:

Lol keep writing!

Special thanks to:

Cheeseman: for Hoofreading and editing (Your awesome bro )

Technoscratch: who is currently working on "some things" for me

and anypony that is supporting me

I hope you all enjoy where the story is currently going

Technicscratch

damn good story so far...

poor david stuck in a love triangle between luna and vinyl... from what i can tell anyway

he loves vinyl, luna loves him, and i think vinyl also likes david

Yay! new chapter! And we are finally getting somewhere with the relationship.

Me gusta mucho

Well, your editor/proofreader could of done a better job, but I like where this is going.

so far so good keep workin hard.

You REALLY need a proofreader/edit. I love this story to death 50% because it says Vinyl is straight, and 40% because it's a great story with a believable protagonist. All you need is correct grammar instead of the strange broken and mispunctuated sentences and the final 10% will come into place.

Hey everypony, Sorry for the lack of content being released lately

But between school and working i have been really busy. I am trying to get back into a schedule that works.

This weekend I will be busy, but i promise that i will release CH 5 monday or tuesday, or my name isn't.

Well that's not important

Thanks for being so patient and thank you everypony for supporting me

Technicscratch

Sorry everypony, but due to sudden change in proof reader (BTW BlackMuffin is amazing, and you should check out his stories ) Chapter 5 may be a day late. Chapter 5 is fully compleated, but I just have to wait for editing to be done.

Thanks for all your patience

Technicscratch

Huge thanks to BlackMuffin, my new official, editor/proofreader (Your awesome bro)

Congratz and nice chapter!

YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i can only thunbs up once

Yay for new chapter! Aaaand Trixie, it just had to be Trixie. This is going to either be very funny, or a complete disaster.

RAINBOW DASH

This was playing in my head when trixie ran into him!

Loving this story mate!

Trixie don't do it don't fucking do it.

Trixie........FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Another huge thanks to my editor and proof reader BlackMuffin

Man! It's been quite sometime since I have posted something! Sorry about that, I am trying, and please know that a new chapter will always get released, this story will NOT be canceled .

Thanks for your patience and I hope you enjoy the new chapter

Just leave it to Trixie to come in at the last second and ruin everything..

!

Man that sucks,but i know how the guy feels,ya just wanna mega backhand a bitch!

still another grand chapter hope more shall come!

Shit! I missed some parts! Argh, punctuation makes me go nuts. I'm pretty pissed off at myself since punctuation is always what I notice first.

fuck Trixie knows how to fuck up every thing. RAGE!!!!!!!!! i hope this shit gets sorted out.

Wow talk about controversy ! (Hope I didn't make Trixie TOO hate able)

Also, I wouldn't worry that much Blackmuffin, if it bother's you,message me and I will sort it out for you

>>13870071387007

I'm sorry but you made Trixie VERY hate able..... FFFFFFFFUUUUUUUU-!!!!

I predict Trixie getting strangled or something similar to that. If I were David then I would... well... OFF WITH HER HORN!

when is the next chapter?!

@ryanchopper12

So sorry, but i'm working as hard as i can on it, been extremely busy. I WILL GET IT OUT!!!

God dammit Trixie.

(Nice work btw. )

>>10883061088306Scrath's? ....NICE STORY  HUN?

Capitalization and punctuation issues are a constant issue.  Consider revising and/or getting a prereader.  

Another great chapter, but you should really get someone to look over this before you post it! It's sorta hard to understand, and I do suggest rephrasing a few things. I still can't believe you can write romance better than me..

FINALLY!

i got a bit confused with this chapter for some reason dont know why probs because i havent read this in a while so i forgot whats happened?

Yea, like explained VIA the authors notes, this chapter is kind of a trip through Davids head. A walk through his own consciousness, and the event's take place, after a looong walk back to Ponyville from Manehatten. Also I do have a proof reader, however I could not get to him at the time I wrote this, and, had an itchy publish finger . Anyw3ay, will defiantly rephrase a few things and get on top of caps and grammar. Thanks for the feedback.

"I'm going to need a few packed lunch's, a map of Equestria, and any information on the location of any pony that may know Trixie."

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>>18604051860405 Wat?

Great chapter but I'm still a little confused on what just happened. Was the whole thing in Manehatten with Trixie after the concert a hallucination?????

>>18690051869005 NUNUNUNUN of coarse not

Like David asked "I have gone to the concert with scratch, right?". the concert was all real, and, the whole intent of this chapter was to be a little confusing. Don't worry, the story is reaching it's climatic, action packed, unnerving...... talk with trixie next chapter . But don't worry, i have some "Twists" in store for yall!

>>18690661869066 Ooooohhhh ok, thanks for clarifying! Can't wait for the next chapter!

FINALLY  

Its alive! muahahaha

Hey, just a quick update everypony.

The next chapter of FFS will be "slightly" delayed, because I'm going through and reversing all my other chapters (prior to when they started to get better with grammar, and spelling) So, ya. Expect minor delay's of anywher3e from 3 -4 days. Check back in on 4/30/2013 for the next chapter.

Thanks for all your coperation: David scratch

P.S you can follow me on twitter now: @David_Scratch