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David has only been in ponyville for about 2 months. He thought he had met everyone, however when twilight introduces him to scratch, he finds himself hopelessly falling for the mare. Things only become harder when scratch asks him if he wants to be a VIP on her latest "gig", and, as things unfold, David learns that things are going to become VERY hard for him and Scratch
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Hello fellow Brony's and Pegasisters, This is my very first fic
and i hope i did half decent on chapter one. Look forward to more chapters in the future, as i will fully finish Falling for scratch. Please leave any suggestions, tips, or advice in the comments
Thanks a ton: technincscratch
i like here have a pony for your hard work
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Woot.Keep up the awsomness
And their names deserve capital letters...
You need to captilise all the 'i's, it gets a bit annoying. Am tracking though.
I wish to be O.C.D. but my humanity tells me not to do it. Interesting so far, I will track the hell out of your story.
Every new speaker gets a new paragraph.
And I spotted alot of elementary errors.
Basic writing bro.
But tracked.
Thanks for all of your helpful comments, I realize i have made some elementary mistakes... was a little
when i wrote this (if you know what i mean (you know being excited to be writing my first fic)) will edit CH 1 today taking in all of your help, and will also start on CH 2. Feel free to add any more suggestions ,and thanks for the help, and support
Brony for life: Technicscratch
1084901 OCD is life my friend, go crazy on your grammar nazism.
Well, here is my thoughts, you need top capitalize all "i"s in this, for there were a few missed. Also, capitalize their names, you have missed Scrath's a few times. You also understand commas better than most fanfics I've read and the story is coming along nicely. Maybe a little too fast for some people or ponies, but who says love at first sight is always wrong. I am tracking this one.
Well CH 2 is up
I took a look over CH 1 again and fixed somethings as well as "slowed some things down" in CH 2
if you haven't read my blog i suggest that you do.
Short post
Technicscratch
LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!
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Just to let you know, names like Rainbow Dash, Pound Cake, and Pumpkin Cake are two words.
@Wumz
Oop's, silly me
Thank you for telling me. Will fix it right away
when i here techno and bass or something
Do a bit more thorough check, you have some errors, like I saw an uncapitalized "i"
Just saying
good job
*Whew* Chapter 3 done, and it's the longest one yet!
Hope you guys, enjoy it, and I would like to put a special thanks out to everyone that favorited liked and commented.
Thank you for all your support
Technicscratch
Grammar. Please check your Grammar.
i like 1213281 and fuck grammar!
Yes, sorry for obvious grammer mistakes, I appreciate when you comment, it helps me fix it, will try my hardest to not let that happen in CH 4
Hey everypony, I know that this is completely Irrelevant when it comes to "Falling For Scratch" , but I feel at the same time it is, and since I have no clue if anypony will read my blog, I'm posting it here instead (please don't hate me for this)
I'm thinking about writing another story on the side. It will probably be a lot "smaller" then my current story.
I either want to do a Grimdark or Sad story, based around one or two of the cutiemark crusaders, Rarity, and AJ, or I want to do a prequel to "Falling For Scratch" on how David got to ponyville.
What would you like to see more?
Loving this story so far hope you make more chapter oh here
!
Have a handmade luna pic
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PRINCESS LUNA FOR THE WIN
@technoscratch
Thank you for the pic
I will finish falling for scratch (estimated to be around 10 or 12 CH's now) but I was just wondering what you would like to see me write next (or at the same time). I figure if I can write a second story, I will have more time to think about the other story, and have a clear mind for this one (means better content).
Thanks for all the support Technicscratch
Pfft, I'd dump Scratch for Luna anytime.
You deserve a mustached Spike:
Lol keep writing!
Special thanks to:
)
Cheeseman: for Hoofreading and editing (Your awesome bro
Technoscratch: who is currently working on "some things" for me
and anypony that is supporting me
I hope you all enjoy where the story is currently going
Technicscratch
damn good story so far...
poor david stuck in a love triangle between luna and vinyl... from what i can tell anyway
he loves vinyl, luna loves him, and i think vinyl also likes david
Yay! new chapter! And we are finally getting somewhere with the relationship.
Me gusta mucho
Well, your editor/proofreader could of done a better job, but I like where this is going.
so far so good keep workin hard.
You REALLY need a proofreader/edit. I love this story to death 50% because it says Vinyl is straight, and 40% because it's a great story with a believable protagonist. All you need is correct grammar instead of the strange broken and mispunctuated sentences and the final 10% will come into place.
Hey everypony, Sorry for the lack of content being released lately
But between school and working i have been really busy. I am trying to get back into a schedule that works.
This weekend I will be busy, but i promise that i will release CH 5 monday or tuesday, or my name isn't.
Well that's not important
Thanks for being so patient and thank you everypony for supporting me
Technicscratch
Sorry everypony, but due to sudden change in proof reader (BTW BlackMuffin is amazing, and you should check out his stories
) Chapter 5 may be a day late. Chapter 5 is fully compleated, but I just have to wait for editing to be done.
Thanks for all your patience
Technicscratch
Huge thanks to BlackMuffin, my new official, editor/proofreader
(Your awesome bro
)
Congratz and nice chapter!
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YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i can only thunbs up once
Yay for new chapter! Aaaand Trixie, it just had to be Trixie.
This is going to either be very funny, or a complete disaster.
This was playing in my head when trixie ran into him!
Loving this story mate!
Trixie don't do it don't fucking do it.
Trixie........FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Another huge thanks to my editor and proof reader BlackMuffin
Man! It's been quite sometime since I have posted something! Sorry about that, I am trying, and please know that a new chapter will always get released, this story will NOT be canceled
.
Thanks for your patience and I hope you enjoy the new chapter
Just leave it to Trixie to come in at the last second and ruin everything..
!