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The ancient one


I AM NOT A SPY SENT FROM THE WORLD OF CHICKENS TO TAKE YOUR PRODUCE FOR OUR OVERLORD SCOOTALOO! I PROMISE!

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Dark Blood Fang, Mist Moon Shadow Night Flame, the demon overlord of darkness and horror, makes his way through ponyville, where he will strike fear and love into their hearts, while he encounters his deep and horrific past, where he will then meet an unexpected foe.

Co-Written by BrohoofAddiction.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 30 )

Oh, I see why this wasn't immediately dive-bombed by dislikes...

Perhaps it would of been hilarious to me if I hadn't seen these types of parodies almost as much as I see the cliche fics you try to exaggerate. :applejackunsure:

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I literally wrote this to infect fim fiction with cancer. The idea itself is a parody within a parody.

It's a play on these crappy parodies while trying to parody "My immortal"

Okay, these parodies are starting to show up as often as the real thing.

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So...do you have cancer yet?

Normally I don't do this, but...

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I sincerely hope this is a trollfic.

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Read my other story, look at the like to dislike ratio, my grammar and spelling, the comments and decide for yourself.

I laughed as the spelling progressively got worse throughout the "story".

Another parody lol

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I don't think the real thing has ever showed up a large quantity. There are more parodies of the idea in MLP fanfiction than actual examples of the idea itself.

Another one of these.... awesome.

I'm not much of a fan of parodies, and even then, when the trollfic for an idea starts outnumbering the actual idea I think things need to change.

The difference between this one, and other parodies, is that this one is good. The grammer and spelling mistakes were few in the beginning, making me wonder if it was an acutal typo. Then I realized, does it really matter if it was an acutal typo? This is one of the best, sucky, fics.

Yeah. Uh-huh... Mhm. Just because this is a parody of parodies doesn't make it clever. It reads like every other parody and just isn't that original, sorry.

And the people who make these keep forgetting the most important thing to do: don't change lines when changing speakers. That's how you make a fic truly bad.

This first chapter is going to be a tough act to follow, so many plot twists in this chapter alone!

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You're assuming I care about this fiction. Obviously you read my comment where i say it parodies a parody while being a parody.

Knowing that, i know you read the part where i said, "i literally wrote it to infect fim fiction with cancer" It is not meant to be clever or good. You want me trying to make a good story? Go on my page, read my other story, and see the difference, between care and don't care.

There's quite a difference in reaction.

Really, i don't want people expecting anything good out of it, and i'm kinda let down this has ANY likes. :raritycry:

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I don't assume you do, as it would be foolish to assume you want this to be good at being bad, I'm just saying it's a bit more useless stuff.

Though getting likes on a story you did nothing to, nor that you care about, I know that feel bro...
I know that feel. It ain't good.

I think I can feel your brain melting as you slammed your face on the keyboard wrote this story. That being said, good job. Seeing as how it's an obvious parody.

Well, that's what the reader in me says. The reviewer in me says go suck off a horse with a Syphilis ridden cock in hell. :rainbowlaugh:

The best way to describe this is, is that it is every bad OC rolled into one.
Alicorn? Yes.
Bad color scheme? Yes.
Some ridiculous, violent special talent that is out of place in My Little Pony? Was there ever any doubt?
The only thing that could make it more stereotypical is if it had Vinyl Scratch hair.

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AH i should've thought of that!

Still not as bad as "ytp my little acid trip friends on lsd". :trixieshiftleft: Also, when parodying My Immortal, you forgot some of the golden rules. 1. Everyone good is now a vampire emo goff with a "wevil" name. 2. Emo bands are now everywhere. 3. Every 3-5 setences there must be a spot where someone either gets described in detail or slits they're rists. 4. Fishnets.

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Annndd.. it's gone.

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'ytp my little acid trip friends on lsd"

...I'm not sure what feels to feel:twilightoops:

You have one long title you got there, brony. I would like to criticize right now, and may I ask if the character's name was actually that long? I mean... wow... he even has a coma there. I thought there are 3 (4 if anything) characters...

Is this a Gary Sue Parody fanfic? If not then I'm not reading it

Parodies don't work like that.

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