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Tom and Bloomberg are two vastly different... entities... that immediately catch each other's eyes; alas, how swiftly things must fade.



...Why did I write this again?

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like dis if u cry evertim

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Comment posted by tajjetone deleted Jan 4th, 2013

Cool story dude. I liked it.

Bravo! I have no idea what I just read.

This story touched my heart and made me cry more than "My Little Dashie"!

Approved. Prereaders are above! :D

Wow, huge thanks to the prereaders that dropped out of nowhere to deliver some last-minute corrections. Can I keep you guys?

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I would love to help!

Wow, that was a rather touching peace of work. Thank you.

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I'm glad you liked it!

I enjoyed this random romance story that seemed to be innocently perfect

bravo sir, bravo :duck:

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Why thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

BLOOMBERGY IS NOW A DEAD TREE. CUE THE FUNERAL MUSIC.

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Was it because of the part where Applejack walks down the road? She's a troll like that. :ajsmug:

I have a sad now.
:fluttercry:

It's so funny and yet so sad. Well done for doing something that is extremely difficult: blending comedy and tragedy.

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Why, thank you. I'd glad you enjoyed it; I wasn't so sure how it would turn out.

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Come gimme a hug Cam.

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You're welcome.

A story of a rock and a tree and it was a sad one

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Can't anymore
Permabanned on FJ

If this was on fanfiction, it would be in my C2.

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That's about what I was going for, that perfect mix of wut and feel.

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I'll take that as a compliment!

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Admin is Admin. :/

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And Walcorn is his rat.

1095081 well you hit it my friend hope to read from ya more

1095212 And drooms, now.

1178502 I don't really know what this is, either. :pinkiehappy:

That was tragically depressing.

So many favorites. You guys are awesome. :heart:

1194203 Mission accomplished.

oh god... I'm crying now.

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I was thinking about touching up a few places in here, maybe adding some filler what's a good word for filler stuff ...plot... devices...

since I made this in 90 minutes, 120 including prereaders and "editing"

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No don't cry! :fluttershysad:

That was just fantastic. I've been toying with the idea of writing my own shipfic with this pairing, but I don't think I'd be able to do any better than this. You managed to make a story about a rock and a tree actually kind of touching.

Excellent work.

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I'm very glad that you liked it!

And I took a class on philosophy. It almost seemed like cheating.

Now this is original! I was laughing hysterically at first, but then it was actually legit sad at the end :fluttercry:. I loved this. Great work! dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Pinkie_loool.png :twilightsmile:

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I'm glad you enjoyed it! And I'm glad you thought I was able to make it sad. It's difficult.

Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

It's... it's a damn tree, how can you... :fluttercry: darn it.

That was surprisingly beautiful. Honestly, it's the best ship I've ever read. Wonderfully executed.

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Trololololol.

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I'm glad you think so! Honestly, I'm surprised at the excellent reception I've been receiving. Thanks!

1326561 you say troll, I say art.
Ain't it cool we can both be right?:scootangel:

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Well, you know what they say. Trolling is a art.

1332442 ...I was unaware anypony ever said that:rainbowhuh:
However, one of the greatest achievements art can have is to take us outside our normal boundaries - to have an experience that removes our comfortable assumptions and provides a rude shock of other possiblities.
:trixieshiftright:...seems legit

...of course you just set the bar pretty high for me to ever take another troll seriously:trollestia:

this is one of the most amazing things I've ever read.
I don't know how you pulled this off.

This is... This is something else. To be quite frank, I'm not entirely certain what this is.
.........
But I like it. A lot.

I legitimately got feels from this. They may not have been extravagant, or all-consuming, or down right oppressive, but they were there. They were definitely there. The whole thing was wonderfully done. A masterfully written and seamless blend of comedy, romance and tragedy. Despite the rather... unorthodox... premise, it was still legitimately enjoyable and a honest piece of work, unlike most other "Stories" you will find of this nature. And despite it all, just behind the surface is a surprising depth, a whole extra layer to be enjoyed by those who look beyond the small shallow musings of prose that it appears to be at first glance. The thin veneer of a comedic face and light-hoofed touch of the story fall away, and the true and honest tragedy comes to light, and the story is all the more gripping and compelling because of it, despite its admittedly short length. The simplistic nature of the piece only serves to amplify the impact of these subtle tones.

I dare say you have yourself a winner with this story. I think I will recommend it to my readers.



~Signed, InfiniteBrony

:pinkiehappy: there is nothing non-awesome about tom-bloomberg shipping, and the pun rocks!

geddit! rocks! :pinkiesmile:

(ok I'll leave punning to you :pinkiesad2: )

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this comment is awesome :pinkiehappy: I don't know if that was ironic yet, and that is what makes this comment brilliant :pinkiesmile: I shall reread this story!

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Oh I just collected the ones that I liked whenever I found a good one in the comments section of stories/blogs of this cite.
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Agreeing with the others. For such a humorous premise, you really do create actual characters, ones that I actually cared about. And that ending! :applecry: I had more feels for a pair of inanimate objects than I normally do for the living props that can often get passed off as characters (and I do include myself in that living prop category).

Take my favorite. Just take it and go. :fluttercry:

I just got feels for a rock and a tree. :fluttercry:
Liked and faved.

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