As the end of Summer Vacation draws near, Twilight suddenly realizes how finite it all is; how easily Sunset Shimmer can just... leave. And how a certain unicorn can make that nightmare real.
Twilight also realizes her greatest error: learning next to nothing about Equestrian habits and culture.
But tonight, Twilight will change that. She'll change everything, and keep Sunset where she belongs...
No matter how physical she has to get.
(SET BEFORE SEASON NINE PREMIERE)
Story is complete. Shall be updated weekly.
Rated 'Teen' for profanity, suggestive themes and Starlight Glimmer being a cock.
Enjoy with my blessing, friends!
Chapters (3)
I have to call serious bullshit. Based just on the cover art alone. That was never meant to be a romance from what I know of it. Twilight being a stuck up whiny bitch because Starlight was having more time with Sunset yes.
So yeah. Failed miserably in here. And I read it all too.
Aww, is Twiggles jealous of GlimGlam? Its okay Sparks. You're infinitely cuter than her, and I'm sure Sunny knows it.
I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
I'll definitely be tracking
Telekenetic instead of telepathy. Two very different powers.
Aw! Twi, I know u can get the girl!
I love this.
Go Sci-twi!
Punch that bitch for all of us!
This could've used some additional polish (noticed a few typos and erroneous word choices) but other than that it's a solid start, you got me hooked~
This might just be me, but that kinda comes off as a little yandere.
Evidence says otherwise, Bookape.
In any case, I'm not entirely sure what to make of this thus far. All I know is that I blame pony Trixie. Still, you have me intrigued enough to see where you go with this setup.
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That's because it is. Twilight couldn't care less it seems that Sunset, for all she is now, is still a unicorn at heart. That won't change.
It just seems that Twilight can't accept that.
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You seem to think I based the story solely on the cover image. That is false..I just thought the picture fit the theme beautifully.
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*Snrrkkk* Twiggles???? You're my new favorite person. (Sorry Scribbler)
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Good. Gooood...
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Great. Catch.
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I believe the conclusion will shock and delight you.
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Your enthusiasm is inspiring. Sadly, there will be no hitting. However...
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You'd think after my forth draft, I'd be rid of those damn typos. God, the curse of authorship, I swear.
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Well... Your not wrong??? Buuuut...
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Well, I aim to please. Stories like these aren't usually sought, but it was a nice change for me. I think you'll enjoy yourself. (Got your comment on Honest Empathy, by the by. I'd all but forsaken ANY more praise for that dumpster fire. Thanks for that.)
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I admit that I thought it was going to be more along the lines of the story the cover art is a part of. So I read it all the way through.
Quit once I figured out where this was going. Romance I thought was just going to be what was mentioned in the description and nothing more.
Plus this is Starlight Glimmer. The mare that is the best at pushing the buttons of each and every Twilight Sparkle she meets.
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I’m guessing the “but” is a spoiler? Anyway like I said, I’m only basing the whole “yandere” thing on one sentence in the description. I’m well aware that that might not be the actual case for her.
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Aww, thank you. I can't claim credit for coming up with the nickname though. I think I picked it up from either Pabrony or FanOfMostEverything.
man i woulda lost some good money betting on Sunset to whoop Starlights flank
Oof. Shouldn't have given her time to start thinking again, Sunset.
Well, it's ape versus horse. Let's see whether experience or the home-morphology advantage wins out.
Its alright Sunny. You're still a winner to the cute purple nerd girl, and that's what really maters here.
Also, I think Twiggles is going to need some alone time later in a warm bath. Because she's going to be sore. Grappling is not something that you do without practice.
I hope you get the next chapter soon.
Given that Twilight's vision cleared up, I can't help but imagine Midnight's sight-correcting mask of arcane fire on her for that whole sequence. Which honestly makes it even more epic.
Looking forward to the conclusion.
Wow!
That was a lot more epic than I expected.
Sci-Twilight's pony powers kicking in out of compassion for her friend was one of the most stirring things imaginable.
So, wait, I'm a bit confused. Did Twiggles go from being Sunsexual to Starsexual? Huh, that wasn't a development I was expecting. Also, good for you Twi. Glim Glam needed to have her ass kicked.
Now I wait with baited breath to see how Sunny and Glim Glam respond to all this.
HOLY Fuck! I hope you continue this cause I cannot believe I did not see this before.
So much for that conclusion, huh?
Those were hands worth throwing. Really liked when Twi ponied up and pounced.