I am but a nobody that likes ponys. Sunset is best human/pony. Profile Picture was drawn by a Streamer StephOfanime
Twilight finally decide to ask Sunset out after week's of overthink, but she find's out she is dateing some one who looks like her. After finding out she gose for a walk in the park and bumps into someone she know's but dose not know at the same time.
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This needs serious grammar editing... but the story's cute. 7/10 plus a pinkie smile
...but seriously, please work on your grammar...
Great little story! I'd recommend working on your spelling and grammar (you can ask an editor for help, if you like) because those errors tend to be a bit distracting, but otherwise I enjoyed it!
The grammar and spelling errors were a bit distracting... But the story was still really cute! Have another pinkie smile!