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More Than Meets the Magic

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Bumblebee16 #1 · Jul 20th, 2019 · 2 · · Prologue, Escape ·

Awesome!

ponybird21 #2 · Jul 20th, 2019 · 1 · · Prologue, Escape ·

Very, very good story.

However, it's extremely clumped together. When someone new is speaking, that is a new paragraph. That automatically will make it a little easier to follow.

But other than that, I like already! GO DECEPTICONS!

sinewystatue382

sinewystatue382 #3 · Apr 10th, 2021 · · · Prologue, Escape ·

nice but when will the next chapter come out?

hunterjackson2001

hunterjackson2001 #4 · Jul 30th, 2021 · · · Prologue, Escape ·

When are you going to make more chapters me and probably others are pretty eager for more chapters.

hunterjackson2001

hunterjackson2001 #5 · Nov 1st, 2021 · · · Prologue, Escape ·

You’re still continuing this right

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