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WhalenJP


Don't mind me, just a man diagnosed with OCD, ADHD, ADD, Asperger's, And Autism looking to write some stories. It Is All Pure Imagination...

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Many FOEs have the Caribou mind control the males into helping them. Have Megatron radiate such anger and hate that all they have to do to be free is to look at Megatron. In fact, have Megatron be dark hope; a monster that saves the day.

I like this version of Megatron, he's a man with honor.

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There was a fic where it backfired on them as the "hero" turned it from lust of mares to bloodlust for the Caribou's demise.

I, I am honestly interested in seeing megatron's reaction to pinkie pie. I'm also interested in him learning to magic of friendship from ponies. ah the wonders of fanfiction.

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I agree... ENDLESS POSSIBILITIES!!!

Be afraid......Be VERY, goddamn afraid.

You know there are two stories similar to yours on this site, both of theses stories were really good and showed a lot of potential however they both were canceled very fast. I hope you don't cancel this as it has a lot of promise and I want to see what it can do.

THe two stories are linked here:
Redemption of Megatron
Megatron... Saviour?

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Good show jolly good show can't wait for chapter 5.

All hell is about to break loose

I don't think there's something wrong with you. This story is awesome!!!
And yeah.....All Hell is about to break loose:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
LET THE CARNAGE BEGIN!!!

I think it would be cool if when Megatron faces the Caribou he used Optimus's quote that "Freedom is the right of all sentient being". For him to say a quote that he was once told and scoffed at and now repeats it because it's something he truly believed would really show how he has changed. Also the fact he would even speak such a thing and mean it should make him to pause for a second and realize that the irony and think about who he is now is, before continuing to fight.

The Caribou are going to regret fighting equestria now! And are royally FUCKED! :pinkiecrazy:

I just found this story and I love it! Read it start to finish and I’m hoping for more! I’m a fan of both shows so I really like it. :D

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Thank you. I'm just working on the epilogue and polishing up the remaining chapters, which are pretty good so far, but I think i can do better by adding things here and there, going in more detail, that sort of thing.

I appreciate the support, can't wait to show you the rest of the chapter! :twilightsmile:

Man, Past Sins (is that correct?) is one of the few stories (that isn't creepypasta) that is very popular for a long time.

HELL IS HERE

Fall of Equestria(or at least, the brink of it) and Megatron... You have my interest.

start at 4:33

“ Freedom is the right of all sentient beings, Dainn, and you will not take it away from the ponies, not when I still function!”

Oh my gosh said it! :twilightsmile:

Thanks for putting my suggestion in.

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I remember watching the first episode when it first aired on the Hub ( I think?), It feels good to go back on memories...

I am this worlds pass and his future and at this moment. All caribou are simply pass.

Please let it be Celestia or even better Optimus who not only saw the whole fight but also heard what Megatron said.

Or perhaps Soundwave who saw his master falling into the same dark pit he just pulled himself out of and couldn't let the Warlord Megatron return for fear of what might happen if done.

I kind of want opitmus to be there with luna and the two have follow in love,

That was really well done.

Megatron transformed into his jet mode and flew up after the chariot The silent mech arrived at the city when Megatron battled King Dainn, and he felt that he should be an observer, not wanting to get into a fight with the once honorable mech turned Warlord.

Once honorable?! Maybe the other ones, but the "Prime" Megatron still has some honor, evidence after the final battle in the movie.

If I had to Hazard a guess, when Megatron was offline as he heard the voice in the void, that was the voice of Primus giving Megatron his Blessing for Redemption, wasn't it? I've been following the story since I read the first chapter, and I had to say I loved it so far. But when I read that part in chapter 10, that really blew my mind when I pieced it together almost instantly. Very well played out using Primus if that was my correct guess.

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correct! I am happy that you love this story, I am taking my time to go through all the chapters of my other stories and improve them with better plot in it. Thank you. :twilightsmile:

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well yes, but he has to earn that title again, and after I had this in mind, I might say that he has rightfully earned it in the next chapter...

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No problem WhalenJP, I must say I definitely can't wait for the epilogue to come about. I'm definitely excited to see how it ends.

I want to know some history of these griffins for that.

It's the end.... or is it.

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......Sequel?:applecry::pinkiesad2::applecry::pinkiesad2::applecry::pinkiesad2:

My guy you RAN with this shit. The train hit the fucking brake and skidded off the cliff with all that speed.

Is there going to be a sequel

Anthro *groans*

hay do a sequel to this story:heart:

Your YouTube link doesn't work.:applejackconfused:

Uh-oh, it would seem the first image has suffered a 404 error. Best get that fix. And do double check to make sure it works before posting.:twilightsheepish:

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I can see the picture. Maybe you don't have your Flash turned on in your settings for this site?

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Well, than i have to assume it doesn't work on tablets or smartphone devices than. Because I'm not lying when I say its not there except a red and white box that says: Upstream reported 404 Not Found or whatever.:applejackconfused:

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