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TGOPoma


I'm just a person who enjoys reading and writing Fanfiction. No more, no less. I try to be kind to everyone I speak to and I ignore those who are impolite to me.

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Thank You. Seriously, Thank You. We needed this. Immediate Like & Fave.

John only shook his head slightly. “I can’t help you.” He placed his middle and index fingers onto the marker before sliding it back to Santino. Santino looked down to it before looking back up to John with a glare.

John Wicked

Because who knew what he would do if he woke up and panicked…

Get a restrained by a wave of fur? I mean, he is surrounded by animals, and some are very protective of flutters.

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That maybe.
But they have yet to encounter a man of focus, commitment, and sheer :yay:ing will.
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You are welcome. I noticed there were not too many John WIck crossovers, so I thought I'd throw in my contribution. Glad you enjoyed!

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Ahem...let me give you some words of wisdom from a guy named sp00n. It will be covered by a spoiler due to fowl language, so just click/ hover over it if you want to see the words of wisdom. I am not using it to make fun of you either, I am merely attempting to be funny.

”Don’t censor yourself you little bitch, use the fuck word”

This looks potentially awesome. I almost pity the next villain that will attack Ponyville, lucky for it John won’t have any guns. Unluckily for it that means John will get creative.

The idea of such an individual with his past and tired outlook on the world will be interesting to see over the usual SIs and other more happier or lighter characters that get stuck in Equestria.

And he can get a dog again!

And a tailored suit from Rarity... actually Rarity would probably go to town on making him a wardrobe.

Fluttershy was shocked. How could such a thing happen to this poor being? This had to feel like agony, no wonder the being was unconscious, the pain and blood loss likely being the culprits. The being had skin that was pale across it’s body, with black fur on it’s face and head but nowhere else, along with what must’ve been the strangest digits Fluttershy had ever seen

Uh, the self motivation Minotaur (I can’t remember the name of atm) Fluttershy met, and Minotaur in general should mean she is kind of familiar with hands. Even if they are bulkier than human hands. Possibly other creatures I’m forgetting too. She should probably thinks he looks like a weird hairless Minotaur (or monkey) since those exist.

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I do appreciate the joke, dude, it made me laugh.

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Raises finger, then lowers it.
I legitimately completely forgot Iron Will and Minotaurs in general existed. Touche, sir.

I'll make the appropriate edits as soon as I'm in front of a computer again.

I come back after being away from this site for weeks, and I see this. You are amazing good sir/madam, keep it coming.

I love it.I'm also a fan of John Wick.I'm looking foreward to the next chapters.

Off to a good start, looking forward to the next part.

Then Chrysalis kicked his puppy and everything went to hell. :pinkiecrazy:

Well, Grogar, Chrysalis, Tirek or whoever's going to be the villian in this, be prepared to face the boogeyman himself.

Comment posted by Alexthereader deleted Jan 4th, 2019

More omg i love John wick please more

Was really glad to see it updated. Can't wait to see what the future chapters will bring.

Can this be a regular update

A great chapter, happy too see that niether you or your story is dead. Hopefully chapters will come out faster.

Comment posted by fluttercord shipper 23 deleted May 18th, 2019

:flutterrage: If You rip those stiches out, I'll gut you and feed you to my bear!
:facehoof: and no he isn't a Gecko
:moustache: What's insurance got to do with lizards?
:fluttercry: Sorry no MidiFix here...

:trollestia: mmmmmm A bald monkey .... :twilightsheepish: A hooman ?

Really happy to see more of this,. I’m curious if he is from the mirror world, as in it really is our earth, and it’s not just some other earth just humanoid ponies.

All he needs is a pencil and some creativity.

Btw, I haven't read your fic yet but it sounds really promising.

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WITH A FOHKIN' PENCIL!

WHO THE FOHK CAN DO THAT?!?!

Lunch was equally sacred, as it was Twilight’s break from the mountains of paperwork she found herself buried under everyday as a princess.

So when Fluttershy all but broke down the doors to the dining room, Twilight nearly choked on the daisy sandwich she was in the process of eating for lunch, only by the grace of Celestia herself did she manage to get it into the right place down into her stomach instead of her windpipe.

Bit of a nitpick but you already made it clear she was eating lunch, reiterating it in the next paragraph was a little redundant.

"Of course." Fluttershy said

Another nitpick, but every single statement of dialogue ending in a period should be followed by a comma. It should read more like this:
"Of course," Fluttershy said.

He took a moment to reload his weapon as he listened to the footsteps draw closer to him.

I only counted 10 shots. What kind of pistol is it? My Glock holds 13. I usually keep 1 round chambered and 12 in the magazine. Some pistols are different, so I'm curious.

There must be something wrong with my vision. My occipital lobe might have been damaged after I hit the ground. John thought as he moved to get up off the couch.

Again, the commas need to be there after ground like this:
There must be something wrong with my vision. My occipital lobe might have been damaged after I hit the ground, John thought as he moved to get up off the couch.

Good stuff so far, keep it up. Hope this helps!

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All valid points.

In regards to him reloading after ten shots: Did I state during that scene that he had a full magazine when he went up/left the elevator?

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You didn't, I guess that can be left up for debate. Fair point.

You need to make the chapters longer

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1,800 to 2,000 words is gonna be the average. I am not great at writing super long chapters.

So far I love love the story it is a perfect story I love what you are doing with the story I am liking this story and following it aswell I can't wait to see the next chapter of this story and I am not saying rush yourself take your time with your story and make it a good story

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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I work on the story whenever I have a break from work and some other RL stuff.

My friend, this is very nice, John Wick in the land of Equestria. Oh boy is a dream come true.

You've done something rather impossible.

You brought me out of retirement. I quit reading MLP fics, but now, I feel like I can return to reading stories on this site.

And I just watched this movie (the first one in the series) today.

Hope you can get going with that next chapter, please. I'm tracking down this fic.

It’s been months. My weeny hurts. Why must I wait so long!?:fluttercry:

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I’m working on the next chapter slowly. Things in my life have been hectic lately.

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Be a man of focus, commitment, and sheer will. You will power through all your problems and issues, guaranteed. And us, your devoted readers, will be greatly rewarded.

Please keep going. I wonder what will happen next and how the ponies will react to John Wick's back story.

Quick question. What was John's childhood like. It was very vague in the movies.

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Some comics go into detail. I won't explore his childhood in this story.

Looking forward to the next chapter

Man, I was hoping to find something like this :pinkiecrazy:. Well, I was more wondering if someone would write a fic with John Wick really. I like the movies too. Didn't realize it was a comic book though :rainbowhuh:.

In any case, I hope you get to continue this story. It's really good and want to see how you play it out :twilightsheepish:.

Alright, cool, just don't let him near a pencil.

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