Ok, so you know all those stories about people disappearing when they go to a convention? Well, I thought I'd be safe if I just avoided them all together, but some scatter brain decided to prove me wrong. Now I'm in a familiar world, in the body of a girl from an anime I used to watch. I think her name was Wendy Marvell of Fairy Tail. Anyway, at least it's a world I know about, so it could be worse. And hey, got magic now, so that's a plus......probably shouldn't mention it's called Dragon Slayer magic to the locals.
And I'm Zoey, no I'm not calling myself Juvia. Anyway, I'm the one that originally bought the outfit that Wendy got, thanks to the prick that sent us here. Pros: I got the power to create and control water. Cons: When I'm angry and/or sad to an extreme, it starts to rain and no one can stop it for long, if at all. I'm sure that's not going to cause problems with a species that views anything that's slightly out of their norm as a mortal sin. Thankfully it’ll take a lot more than simple jealousy for that to happen, if my memory is correct.
Edit: I'm editing the earlier chapters, please keep this in mind when reading, this massage will disappear when I'm done.
Well, well. I haven't seen a Displaced Wendy, or Juvia before. This is actually quite refreshing! I look forward to seeing where this leads!
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Glad someone agrees! Not sure why nobody has done them before but I hope I could do the originals justice....in my own way.
Welcome to your new home. First of all this is merely a, how to put it, helping hand as it were. While me and my friend are covering the financial side of things I want to be clear on two things. 1. We are only covering the base necessities. 2. And I can't stress this enough, this is a temporary Orangemen. While you my currently be in the body of a miner and have no income, that can and will change in the future. I'm not having you stunt your growth by babying you.
1. Orangemen should be arrangement
2. miner should be minor
cabinets shut until ether I break
Either
“Can you not yell? Kinda have a mind grain here.”
migraine
At least that's what I've been telling my.
myself.
She tried simply push me in the fire with a burst of water, which I easily dodge.
She tried to simply push me into the fire with a burst of water, which I easily dodged.
she's to angry
she's too angry
Zoey was getting tired of the game of hide and seek and she made it known. Kicking a chair she muttered a curse she walks around until she heard a faint noise at the edge of her hearing, unfortunately the rain made it hard to pinpoint.
Zoey was getting tired of their game of hide and seek and she made it known. Kicking a chair she muttered a curse, and walked around until she heard a faint noise at the edge of her hearing, unfortunately the rain made it hard to pinpoint.
Wendy was excited to see the mane 6 live an action and meet Twilight and spike.
Wendy was excited to see the mane 6 live in action, and meet Twilight and spike.
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Thanks for the grammar check! I was planning to check over those chapters later for errors and you saved me a lot of time. Hope you enjoyed the story so far!
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Oh, I absolutely love it so far. Threw me for a loop with the Displaced Pegasus. I didn't expect that. Can't wait to see what else you do.
Even the best displaced is trash, and this one isn’t the best.
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Pretty sure I said only constructive criticism is welcomed, is there a constructive point your trying to get at or is this just another [insert random displaced hating comment here] that literally hundreds of other people have made?
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And none of them are very good. 9 out 10 new authors seem to think Displaced is the perfect way to start writing MLP stories.
And then throw a temper tantrum when peole don't think it's the greatest thing to ever be written.
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You two may not like Displaced fics, but that does not give you licence to actively put down other people's work. If you don't like the story, don't read it, and don't tell people their stories are trash!
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I recommend deleting comments that just bash your story, since they aren't constructive, and are flaming your work.
On another note, I'm happy to see that Kairi's token showed up last chapter!
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…and you keep reading them because…? Most of the reasons they throw a "tantrum" are because of the people comment that no displaced stories are good yet keep reading them, either that or just go from displaced story to story just to bash it. No one is holding a gun to your head and forcing you to keep reading them and yet you do out of your own free will. I know I'm not that good at making a story, it's literally the first one I've ever done. I welcome any constructive criticism, I need it, trust me I know. But what I don't need are people who only comment that all displaced stories are bad and act like the authors are the ones in the wrong when they defend the stories they spent a lot of time and effort on. Hate them all? Then quit reading them, there's literally thousands of other stories on this site.
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I'll only do that if they keep at it, or are known just for bashing every displaced story they come across. Everyone has a right to express their opinions, but they shouldn't be hatful with it. I appreciate the thought though, so thanks.
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Good to hear, hope she's doing well in the upcoming chapter you're making!
It needs a few grammar fix but other then that; It's good.
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Alright, thanks! I'll try to correct those. Could you point them out? Would make fixing them a lot easier, but you don't have to.
So 20ish year old wendy body but she(he) did not ask to turn into a guy. Hmmmm🤨😉😏🤣 nice choice
Is something along the lines of Nyx or the Tantabus living in Wendy’s head?
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Yes, Nyx I mean, the Tantabus hasn’t been created yet. Of course whether or not she’ll be called Nyx, I’ll have to figure out.
This is story is confusing at time because it sometimes jumps from one chacter to some one else with any warning otherwise it is really good I could not follow the nightmare moon part but I got the jist of it good job i look forward to more
You still working on this?
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Yeah, just hit writer’s block
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My advice is to listen to music and take long walks, it will clear your mind, also try meditating it worked for me when I was writing an essay.
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Thanks, I’ll try some of that.
Fire burn with passionate heat. Water flows stronger together. Darkness stikes from deeper shadow
Yeah that's understandable I mean that reminds me of the hate Sasuke and Sakura from Naruto get especially Sasuke I mean he was screwed over constantly outside his control so it's no wonder he snapped.