Me and my best friend were watching T.V while some crazy people were burning a house in the distance. We just sat there until I appeared in a black void, and was greeted by the old Royal scientist, from Undertale, himself. After conversing with him for a bit, he offered me a deal, and I took it. Now I have to help him in an experiment, an experiment that'll help him escape his prison. Now that I think about it, I probably should have considered the fact that over 100,000,000,000 people felt like refusing said deal. But come on, how bad could it possible be? I mean, the dude was thoughtful enough to give me the ability to use Monster magic, though having a monster's body in a human populated world might be a problem. Especially since I'm not the first one here, nor the first person to take Gaster's deal.
I probably should have stated this earlier, but this isn’t a Displace Story. That being said, that’s only at the moment. That could change in the future, but at the start, I never intended for it to be Displace. Though I can see how people could make that mistake.
EDIT: On the matter of whether or not Manny is a displace.
EDIT 2: It’s really important to read about the Save Points when considering a crossover. Please click the link after reading the one before this.
Edit 3: After a lot of thinking, I decided I’m not gonna include this in the whole Displace thing. It would be too difficult to keep track of what the non-canon did and experienced in other stories.
Ooh this is interesting
Actually, it does have a name. it's called a BATTLE, so you were close.
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Actually I decided to look up a video and see how Toriel explained it, apparently she said it was called a FIGHT.
(The first 9 seconds)
Thanks for pointing out the initial error I made in explaining it though, completely forgot about it.
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No problem, but I guess We were both wrong.
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Actually, you're both right in a way, both "Conflict" and "Battle" mean to fight, but in a different way.
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True, but I’m trying to keep the explanation close to the game. Since Toriel said it was called a fight, and since she’s basically apart of the tutorial, it just seems correct to take her word for it.
It’s Betty Noir isn’t it?
Asgore's guards are better than Celestia's.
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One of Asgore’s Guards is so determined to do her job, that she’s able to achieve something that should be impossible for her race.
Not to mention he has The Great Papyrus, which is an instant win over Celestia’s Guard, which doesn’t have him.
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While I can’t confirm or deny that (actually it’s well within my power to do so, but I’d rather wait until the right chapter), Are you talking about the mysterious boss or the one who woke up in the strapped bed?
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The one in the bed.
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Ok, out of curiosity, what makes you think it’s Betty?
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Most likely candidate when all you have to go on is they have hair that is apparently ‘not black’ and they seem to have an inclination towards eating souls.
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That’s fair, it’ll be awhile before I actually confirm or deny that, but I’ll keep your comment in mind.
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What is? Or do you mean the chapter in general?
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In order:
1: Like Gaster said, one Monster might excel at doing something another Monster would struggle doing. Manny simple just has a nack for healing, but can’t use it on command yet. But yea, that’s basically what happened.
2: Gaster is more connected to this world than he’s willing to say, so that universe is blocking his name. But with Manny’s new connection to Gaster, there’s enough of a connection to allow Manny to at least say Gaster’s name in Wingdings, though uncontrollably. Only those closely connected to Gaster in some shape or form can say or understand his name.
3: This is before the first Equestria Girls move, so she’s going to act like she did before Twilight arrived. Though she will eventually warm up to Manny, but at the moment she still has the whole “I’m better than you” attitude. Manny (and by extension, Gaster) will have an effect on her to be sure, for better or for worse will have to be seen. But the lesson she’ll learn will hit closer to home than in the original timeline.
4: As for the magic lessons, imagine a brainiac noble girl trying to teach a normal country guy something the country guy has zero experience and knowledge in, there’s a VERY big lingo barrier between them.
5: This version of the Equestria Girls world is very different, magic has been around for a while, but the average human doesn’t know that. The reason will be explained later.
6: That’s going to be explained much later, though I’m curious if anyone can guess who to what the creature is before I reveal it (assuming of course, if the correct answer hasn’t already been said)
7: Oh that dude’s dead, when I released that chapter, I immediately added the death tag. The creature definitely got benefits from eating the SOUL (which will be explained), but the full potential of the SOUL will be hard to unlock. As for the number of guards, there are other guards around, but Traffic was basically a sacrificial pawn. The boss would have definitely promoted him if he had beaten the creature (at the time said creature barely had the strength to walk at the time and had a tracking device, so it was well in Traffic’s favor), but the boss knew Traffic well enough to not be worried.
8: That’ll be explained later, let’s just say after a certain incident, Gaster is keeping some things to himself until he feels he can trust Manny enough.
And finally 9: This is basically a game of chess, with Manny being Gaster’s King piece playing against an unknown player and King. That’s just a simplistic way of putting it, it’s much more complicated, but that’s the general idea.
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Let me clarify this as I was trying to write it like I think he would say it. This is basic stuff to Monsters, so he didn't take into account that Manny wouldn't understand it.
Basically:
Translation: His magic will take different forms depending on the situation. If he feels strongly that he wants something to heal, that's the shape his magic will take. If he wants to hurt someone, his magic will take the form of something that can hurt someone that's most connected to him. (at the moment, I'm still trying to narrow down what specific form that is) like how 'friendliness pellets' are connected to flowey or how bones are spears are connected to Undyne. Right now, he's at the complete mercy of his emotions. Meaning, he could try to heal someone, but if he's upset at someone or something at the time, he'll only end up hurting the person he's trying to heal, even if they aren't the focus of his bad mood. Think of Raven from the original Teen Titans, except at the moment, he can't use magic without emotions. Though things like teleportation will require him to think a lot (assuming he can even teleport, that is, only Sans is shown to be able to teleport in the game, so its not exactly a common ability).
Did you edit your comment, or did I just forget some of your questions? If you edited it, then it would be better to just post another comment next time you have more questions. If I wasn’t checking the comments for anything I missed, I wouldn’t have been able to catch the change unless it was pointed out.
10: Only specific people can hear Gaster and understand his name.
11: Sounds like an interesting video.
12: I’ll admit you’re close, but I can’t explain it yet.
13: His magic will grow and change over time, though whatever shape it take, we’ll have to see.
14: The abilities for SOUL traits are still being decided, but I’ve decided on a few (though just the lower levels of the actual traits). Perseverance will be touched on in the next chapter.
15: He’s not exactly a glass canon, just not as durable as most other boss Monsters.
16: He’ll definitely have to keep his fragility in mind if he wants to survive. There’s other factors working against him, but that will be touched upon later.
17: Well I just wanna be clear in case that wasn’t the case.
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Good question, it would heal the target as much as Manny could, but it would cause Manny to involuntarily use way more magic then necessary. The sudden drain could (at worst but most likely) cause him to either fall down and be unable to move or cause him to black out for an unknown amount of time. Basically, desperate magic usage will cause him to uncontrollably use more magic then necessary in order to achieve whatever he needs (assuming he has enough magic to even achieve it in the first place).
Truncated or...?
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I-I clicked on the wrong button and didn’t realize until now, please ignore and forget that, I’d really appreciate it.
Ill follow along
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That was actually just a coincidence, I honestly forgot about the Naruto chains. As for the battle aspects, that’s the general idea of it, yes. As for what Trafic was, what makes you think he’s a Monster or hybrid? Not confirming or denying it, just curious.
What are you confused about?
Yes the school is safe, at the moment the mysterious organization doesn't have a reason to get aggressive with Manny and Equestra Sunset. As for everyone's reaction, given the fact that Equestra Sunset Shimmer is going with the alias Abbey Osric, they'll just assume that the two just look identical and sound similar, save for Eris, Luna, and Celestia (remember, this is still a MLP alternative timeline, so the people there won't catch on as well as someone from our world would. Of course that's only gonna go so far). Right now the organization is just observing, and as long as human Sunset doesn't seem to be in direct danger, the organization won't see a need to make Manny and Sunset 'disappear', if you catch my drift.
There's definitely danger, but at the moment, no one is completely aware of it, not even Gaster, the agency or the organization.
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I suppose comparing Celestia to Dumbelledore is accurate enough. Her only goal is to get the students in a better mindset for magic. Of course, she can’t be to direct in her methods.
As for Sunset, yes Manny (and by extension Gaster) is a good influence. That being said, remember, Sunset came to that world for one single purpose. And she’s got the attention of some very bad people. And Sunset is still a very influential, it’s up to her whether she takes Manny’s words to heart, or if she’ll chose a darker path. And it’s up to Manny to be a good influence for her. Remember, he’s still a Monster in a world full of Humans, and he doesn’t have Papyrus’ mindset.
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I know you didn’t, I was just using him as an example. What I was trying to say was: Unlike Papyrus, Manny’s belief isn’t unshakable, so Manny will have to have enough determination to stay true to his ideals.
Perfection
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Thanks
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That’s up in the air, it depends on where the story goes.
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I have an idea for the book, it’ll be safe. Also what is technically irony?
I can’t really say what they are.
At the moment, all they know about Manny is that he has horns, and is with someone who they think only looks like Sunset. And even if they knew about Manny’s healing magic, right now he’s barely considered a genuine healer, he has a long way to go before they take notice of his healing abilities (even if he’s had more accidental success than most upstarts who know what they’re doing). He’s not the only healer, he just has a knack for it.
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This was my thought process for the name:
Order is normality, Law is absolute. Order is encouraged to be followed, Law is enforced to be followed. Order has the choice, Law doesn’t without punishment.
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Weak point?
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The average person doesn’t know about the strange events, as far as the average person knows, Magic and magical creatures don’t exist. Only magical creatures, organization members, and the agency know about magic (not including Manny, Sunset and Gaster) in that world. The only way they’d be able to blend in, is if they weren’t causing any strangeness.
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She meant that if something where to happen to her body, human Sunset could take Equestria Sunset’s body and upload her consciousness and SOUL into it. Basically she’d have an extra life. If you’ve seen Rick and Morty, think of Rick’s project Phoenix, if you haven’t seen it, I recommend looking it up.
And Manny wouldn’t be a manikin, he’d be in the same (or similar) situation that ??? is in. Basically another test subject.
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Right now ??? is still in the testing phase, she doesn't have a set path outside of the experiment. As far as she knows, she hasn't killed anyone (she doesn't know that the weird glowing heart she ate was a SOUL). Whether or not she's good or evil, as long as she's on borrowed time, she doesn't have a real choice. If she is able to get rid of the mind control, then she can decide what her true alignment is.
Btw, human Sunset only made the suggestion, what makes you think ??? has any ties to Manny?
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While that is accurate, it’s more of the fact that he’s working on something big, and as long as nothing ruins it or effects those important to his organization, he has no reason to care.
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Yep, and the fact that she infiltrated that facility without the boss knowing, despite a very important project being there, should give you an idea of how much of a threat they are, especially since they don’t use magic.
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She’d technically be a Guardian. And no, it couldn’t have been solved differently. She is aware of what happened to 4v3s, well not EVERYTHING, but enough to know that talking wasn’t an option. She’s right in saying 4v3s is a victim, and both are aware of what’s happening. Plus she’d have to be convinced to stop following her current religion, which isn’t an easy feat. As for who she is, that depends on whether or not she survives. And if she does, then her name will be revealed later.
Hey I'm put this if there's ever a fight scene on or when gasser is here because I think this be good music to put on
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But you forgot their secret weapons yes I said the plural because they have more than one sands and souls
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If Gaster ever fights in a…well…FIGHT, I’ll definitely use this song.
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sands? You mean Sans?
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While that will make it easier for him to learn, part of the problem is Manny himself. He doesn’t understand what Gaster meant by feeling. Sunset doesn’t know that Monster and Unicorn magic works differently, so she literally can’t teach him. And while Gaster has a better understanding, he’s still being cautious about what he tells Manny since his first partner and him had a falling out. That’s a good starting point. But there’s still a metaphorical barrier between them. If Sunset and Gaster could interact, it would bypass the barrier since Gaster could tell sunset how Monster magic works in a way that wouldn’t put him on edge. I’ll send it to him, but don’t expect big results until the metaphorical barrier is breached.
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What’s up?
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It's similar to that gun, yes, but there's a difference. They don't use magic, so it doesn't harm their SOULs. I can't go into detail, but they have something that makes their SOULs not required. As for the forced control, it's a defense mechanism, 4v3s would have died if the forced control didn't happen.
In this instance, think of the chains as an electrical conductor. It wasn't the chains themselves, it was the energy going through it. While I'll admit the chains have certain abilities, they're a secret for now.
It's 4v3s, not 4ov3s. As for what it stands for, can't say as it's a hint to who she is. Though I will say that you're on the right track, if only a tiny bit off said track.
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Glad I made it clear just how dangerous those extremists are, hence why the boss himself is now getting involved.
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The finished version could, but remember, this is the experimental version, a prototype. And while they’re a long way from actually achieving it, their end goal is to eradicate ALL magic and magical creatures. Thankfully for Gaster, they don’t have any samples from the void, so they can’t reach the void (and by extension, other universes). They’d have to get past certain powerful beings to do that, or miraculously stumble upon something that’s been in the void at any point of it’s existence. And without magic, it’ll be tricky to accomplish that.
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It won’t be as easy as that, Gaster can spawn the door if he wants to, but exist with only that. That’s the whole reason for this experiment, he needs outside help, that’s why he made a deal with Manny.
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I’m not sure, there’s so many unknown variables
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I wouldn't call Manny a Medic, just that he has a knack for healing. Plus, something like that is a little outside the range of Monster magic (which is the only type of magic he can actually use at the moment).
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I'm not saying that's not a possibility, I'm simply saying that Monster magic doesn't work that way. Given Manny's unique situation, it's entirely possible for him to develop powers that normal Monsters can't do, however there needs to be a catalyst for that type of development. (This would be so much easier if I could talk about the nitty gritty of Manny's abilities without spoiling anything, unfortunately it's far too early for me to properly explain the process I intend to use concerning the magic system of this reality, and Manny himself.)
I mean, there's a bit more to the capitalization but yeah, I suppose "that's just how it's done" is accurate.
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She IS the tuToriel.
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You can guide a horse to water, but you can't force it to drink. Magic is a gift, not a requirement, those three feel they have no right to force it on others. That's the main reason Celestia doesn't approve of using magic at all in order to keep them calm, even though it's would only keep the students calm around magic, and nothing more.
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Yes, it is cruel. That’s the reason the gun hurt 4v3s and M.D.S so much. They are a creature made of magic. And before you start raging at the one who attacked them in the previous chapter, remember, her entire deal is to end the suffering of those she deems as a victim, not make it worse (even stating the the gun should have only made them exhausted). The fact that she used that gun despite her mentality, should give you further insight on the extremist group.