This story is a sequel to Mass Effect: Resurrection
With a flash of light in the center of the library known as Golden Oaks, a unicorn mare vanished leaving only a scorch mark in the shape of her Cutie Mark. This mare is known by everypony as Twilight Sparkle and as she appears on the plan of ascension she finds a strange screen that leads to another life she lived. One full of pain and hardship as well as friendship and love as she raced about the galaxy aboard the Normandy.
Ok, so I loved this idea so much that I had to pick it up from the author, Helljumper206. And while I will be writing this with my own flair and style all credit for the idea goes to them.
Though to be honest I have no idea where this story is going to go, I have a feeling it will be an interesting ride nonetheless.
Intresting. Very intresting..... I WANT MORE TO SEE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
just damn.... this is gonna be interting
Surprised that the one-shot version gets a full story treatment. And so far, for a first chapter flashback prologue? It's a good start showing who Twilight used to be and her life as (Jane) Shepard, from her traumatic childhood to becoming the Commander of the Normandy, and her adventures during the Trilogy.
by the way, did she ever have a love interest? Or was she single throughout the Trilogy in this story? If she did have a love interest; I'm sure Twilight would have a sense of longing for who she loved in her previous life.
Personally, I always go with Garrus whenever I play as Female Shepard.
And yeah, you do need to have an editor eventually as some of the grammar, choice of certain words and overall structure felt a little... off to me. But that's just my opinion.
Either way, I look forward to the next chapter and eventually seeing the rest of her friends and mentor react to how she had changed drastically, not only becoming an Alicorn but also after getting her memories (and experience) as Shepard back.
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I've said this on my own stories but if you're going to mention grammar give a specific example that you can find of something wrong that way people can improve on what they've messed up
not bad very enjoyable overall
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Thanks I'm finally coming back and hoping to get this story really rolling
Twilight is calling total bullshit for this!
This could be good would love to see more
good to see an update for this story although this chapter seems rushed but maybe that's just me.
keep up the good work.
It’s back baby!!!
Can't wait for more this is so good
Interesting so far
Please continue