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"Inspiration does not come to the lazy. It only comes to those who call it." - P. I. Tchaikovsky

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This story is a sequel to My Little Girl


Warning: The following story is currently unedited.


It has been thirty-three years since Lauren Faust had that dream of going into a world filled with ponies. Since then, she has become an animator, a director, a writer, and producer for many shows and a few movies; one of which is creating "My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic." Now being in the final season, she wishes that she could have done more to contribute and wonders if the show would be remembered after it's closing episode airs. Then, one night during the season nine hiatus, after putting her three-year-old daughter to bed, something crawled out. But after it left, her daughter followed him through a tunnel that wasn't there before. Lauren would have to once again go down the rabbit hole in order to find her child.

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Comments ( 70 )

O_O yeesssss!!!! A sequel!!! I am so happy you are writing a sequel!

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Ya know, for the longest time people have been asking me to write this; and for the longest time I couldn't figure out how. Thankfully, the final season provided me some inspiration.

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I still have to binge and catch up on season 9.

I am really excited to see where this goes :D

Time for another rabbit hole, eh?

I want to read this, but at the same time there is going to be season 9 spoilers, and i still haven't finished season 8

9687475 I want to read this, but at the same time there is going to be season 9 spoilers, and i still haven't finished season 8

Damn Gallus!:rainbowderp:
First getting falsely accused of foalnapping the Changeling Queen's heir, then being held responsible for displacing the entirety of Equestria into the North Sea, all on top of unwillingly becoming Silverstream's Special Somepony... and now accidentally foalnapping THE Fausticon's own foal, as a result of a plot hole straight out of the Twilight Zone, no less! :twilightoops:

Poor catbird just can't get a break! :facehoof:


oh, I should've covered all that with spoilers tags, shouldn't I've? ♪♫:rainbowkiss:

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The griffon raised an eyebrow. “And what are you supposed to be anyway? You’re not an ape, not a monkey, not a kirrin no doubt, but… what are you?”

kirin is misspelled here

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no prob
when's the next update(and is there a schedule for them)?

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Not one-hundred percent sure, but one thing is for sure, by July, I will be dedicated completely to this story to its completion. I'm not aiming to make a novel out of this, but a fun, thought-provoking, little adventure story as my way of saying thank you to my readers for my 5th anniversary.

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Ha, jokes on you, i dont even know what your talking about for most of those :trollestia:
(Also note, dont put the reply thing in the quote otherwise it won't notify the person your replying to)

All the while, she did manage to get a glance of another of her creation, Twilight Sparkle, waving awkwardly. “Welcome to Equestria, Lauren.”

In all honesty, I half expected for Lauren to faint right on the spot there xD

Why does it seem like they forgot Lauren's visit from when she was a child... or are they just trying to hide it due to the memory alternating spell that was cast on Lauren before she left the first time?

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To be honest, never knew what latter means... so I am confused...

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In a nutshell, "the latter" is an old fashion term meaning that if there are two choices or scenarios, the latter means the second choice. Unlike the word "former" which means the first.

Well, this is an interesting development, she is a storyteller. Storytellers weave thier art best by voice because after all, you can put your passion and emotion in your voice much better than you can the written word.

...Welp, things just got very interesting. God of creation indeed.

Does Lauren Faust really have a daughter?

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Actually yes! When I was doing my research on Lauren, I came across this:

In an interview of Nick Animation Podcast, September 9, 2016, retrieved September 12, 2016, "My daughter's only three months old, so I'm still on my leave, so I'm... just... usually... all day, taking care of the baby. I kinda love it."

There better be fighter jets in this story...

Boy we’re gonna be here all night.’ Lauren thought, trying to figure out how to answer that. “Short answer, yes. It’s still popular enough that people see it.”

Understatement Lauren.

…...could faust give back tempest her horn back?

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Believe it or not, I'm not exactly sure yet. As I'm trying to figure out the limitations of this creation thing.

Soooooo did she just...will a pony to life? Or did whatever magic that caused this event just pull a pony from somewhere and shove some memories into her brain?

Awwww... Got the warm and fuzzies now.

Oh sod it all, I thought I tracked this! Time to catch up, eh?

The hugs have been doubled!

“So… what you’re saying is… we’re not… real?”

Cogito, ergo sum. I think, therefore I am. If you are capable of worrying over the validity of your existence, then you exist.

The power of divine narration? That's Morgan Freeman's gig!

Well this has been a fun little read, I look forward to seeing more of it!

Now this is a wonderful thought. I quite like the idea that the little cottage that the sisters grew up in proved just as long-lived as they, in it's own quietly stubborn way.

I wonder how long until Lauren gets the idea to narrate herself into Fausticornification.

Royal Caps Lock 'em to shut up then explain that the story was covering a specific part of Equestrian history.

Wait so Alice has two big sisters right?

kids. sometimes they are smarter than us adults

Typical Twilight lmao:rainbowlaugh:

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Equestria Exists because Lauren made the show, Lauren Made the show because Equestria Exists. It's a existential causality loop.

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Good Question, and if Surprise just popped into existence did all the nessicary bits for existing appear too? A family, a home and entire personal history? Or did the universe just conspire to place an already existing Surprise into position to fill Lauren's narration?

Quick check birth records, where foals named Starry Night, Sunshine and Greenhoof born recently?

...I think I have something in my eye now...

Ouch, right in the feels, I LOVED THIS

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