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Hmm... this has potential. Follow and fav for now.
looks interesting.. Hmm I wouldn't mind to see where this goes.
Wait... so a FoE story, but with Bowser as the hero?!
.............
Know what? Imma keep an eye on this. Because this premise is too f
cking awesome.
Sweet story so far, I can't wait to see what happens next, please tell me that Bowser will get allies to go with him to Equestria to help save the ponies while killing the Caribou, it would be cool to see him Team up with the Mario and Wario Bros. along with DK and his crew too.
You can't be the bad guy all the time. What reward is in for the bad guys anyways?
Oh yeah now this is a story that I'm going to like!
All hail King Bowser!
this will be watched very closely
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Saving an entire kingdom from bad guys can easily ensure you can be Rich or Well protected.
Ok look, I know Nintendo stopped making only games for kids eight or ten years ago but...... hell I'll take it!
Secondly, I'm kinda glad at the one scene. I rather see Twilight get nailed by her dragon than those ugly f
ers.
Lastly, Flurry Heart x Bowser Jr anyone?
Ah Bowser, a villain with morals. I would feel sorry for the caribou but they need to learn how a real villain act. I wonder if he is friendly with Gannon?
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Good point, and with any luck it could erase all crimes from the past.😇
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That's true, there is a difference between bad, and evil and they must know how many bad things they should commit at a time. As for Bowser and Ganon, the demon king killed bowser in Death Battle.
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Yeah take it from me take the operationality in front of you like I do, yeah that's sad but still better than those guys😠, and you don't know what's about to happen so don't jump the gun ok?
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...Hell Ya.
You have my attention.
good to see kammy managed to put at least a little gentlemanlyness into bowser.
I see potential here, this story has a good premise, good plot and a good cast so far, but I feel that you need to work a little bit on how you want go present this to us readers. For most of this first chapter, it seemed more you telling us what happened and its like I’m getting this told to me by someone trying to summarize an event.
Take for instance this segment;
Yes I can visualize it, but it is wordy in its description. Its like a person writing down the cup size of “a-perfectly-of-age-younger-woman”
instead of describing her voluptuous breasts in a way that catches the reader’s attention.
I see a good story idea, and am hopeful for this work. Good luck and I’ll see you in the next chapter.
You my fine friend have gotten my attention and... you have a good story in the making, just make the next few chapters a little longer.
9639810 Also helps that Bowser's also a dad.
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I'd say a big chance if it goes in that direction. Given the situation, I'd say they'd have a bone to pick with the Caribou over this too being heroes and all. And they have worked with Bowser before for a common goal if SMRPG, M&L SSS and SPM are anything to go by.
Well, it had to happen sooner or later. ... F*ck it, LET'S RIDE!
Here's hoping for a cross world alliance after Bowser saves Equestria. Also, tracking.
Would it be wrong to have Flurry and Wendy as a ship? I mean I would imagine that Flurry would be more than hesitant to have a relationship with a male considering what happened. Also a political marriage between the Crystal Empire and the Koopa Kingdom would be a good legal method to instigate a war. My only concern is how is Mario and Peach going to take this? I know neither one is a parent but I think even they would ally themselves with Bowser because of the threat the Caribou possesses.
Love this cant wait for more
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Yeah, it was based off the Derpiborru image where Spike was about to rape Twilight, and, it looks official.
Huh, didn't originally plan this, but I'll see what I can work with it.
9641313 Are you going to have the other Star Children get involved with stopping the Caribou?
Did Bowser say that he’s been fighting Mario for 800 years, are they both immortal?
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The Star Festivals are 100 years apart, so, I'm guessing that 100 years for us would be 1 year for them, since they were around the same age when the second game began. Well, that's my general headcanon on the Mario world, anyway.
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It's just getting started, I'm busy typing it down.
Interesting, can't wait to see Bowser get angry.
Love this
I can hear Bowser now after hearing Flurry's story.
Bowser: (Slams down a fist on a arm of his throne) I MIGHT KIDNAP PRINCESSES BUT AT LEAST I HAVE STANDARDS!
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I wouldn't be surprised if he relayed the story to Peach and the Mario Bros, and the story ends up having all of them and their allies go join Bowser in his NEW conquest.
They HAVE been allies before in several games, so it's NOT unreasonable to think that.
We need Bowser to do his rendition of the Major's Speech:
I'm quite enjoying this story so far, and i'm eager for more. I love the originality of Bowser and his forces being the heroes/conquers Equestria needs in the dark Caribou Au.
It will be interesting to see how Flurry Hearts first meeting with Bowser will go. As well as seeing how she get's along with him, Bowser Jr, and the Koopalings if you include them in the story.
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Exactly my point about how evil you are allowed to commit.
kammy well be so proud.
Hmmmmm.... Do I smell a certain koopa becoming a hero? Also, will Dry Bowsr or Giant Bowser make an appearance or not?
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I'm planning on some of Bowser's forms to appear, most notably Giga Bowser.
Oh Shit Bowser is angry and it looks like the Caribou are dead meat
To quote Isoroku Yamamoto. “I fear all we have done is to awaken a sleeping giant and fill him with a terrible resolve.”
I honestly hope that Bowser ends up getting help from the Mario Bros after telling them about the story he just heard.
Like I said in a previous comment, he has had several times when he teamed up with them to deal with THEIR enemies sometimes. But having them willing to help HIM out on this would certainly surprise him in a pleasant way.
Well caribou, HERE COMES THE PAIN TRAIN, Bowser style!!!!!
Got to love villains with class. They know the game and they know that after a certain point you better have one heck of an army becuase a coalition of many different parties will start to break down your door.
I was right after all.
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On what?
Hey, while your at it,
Send in the Koopalings for an all out bloodfest.
But Wendy has to stay with Flurry though.
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Flurry's going to join the fight, too. She's fighting because she wants the real Cadence, Shining Armor, and Twilight Sparkle back and not the sexualized ones. As for her weapons, I think that martial arts, katanas, and a black karate gi with light armor would be enough.
Plus, all seven Koopalings killing the caribou would be EPIC.
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They should get the Mario Bros. And Peach in on this, Heck if they are able, contact the Smash Bros. Crew, I'd think Samus, Link, Zelda and Ganondorf at least would have words with Dainn and the Caribou.
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I know, I'm hoping they're watch their backs at least.
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I see your a dorkly fan yes