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Tailspin333


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give them hell CAPTIAN forge!

to me..it is a good start, however, I wonder when the OPFOR (short for opposing force aka the caribou) will make a move.. unsc air units are NOT very stealthy.. another thing! will their be leader powers? and when is forges pride and joy gonna show up?.. sorry.. I am a fan of Sargent forge

MORE BEFORR I SICK YUNO GASAI ON YOUR ASS

This has potential, but the writing style is painful. I highly recommend getting an editor.

Unique to say the least, but a tiny bit rushed. Still no problem tho, good story

don't forget the gunship support power from halo wars two..

is it odd that I can see dainn and sargent forge in both atriox and cutters places in the halo wars 2 E3 trailer easly? that would make a good cover

Could it be that the Storm Covenant is taking over the Storm King’s nation while integrating the Storm King’s army into the Covenant, before attacking the pony nation? After all, it is multiple alien races that made up the theocratic military alliance known as the Covenant Empire. And, if the small and cowardly Unggoy or Grunts were forced to fight for the Covenant; I see no reason why the Covenant would not wish to include the bigger Storm Creatures who are now the foot soldiers of the Storm King.

While the Covenant prophets foresaw that humans would ruin their plans, and then declared humans to be devils to be killed on sight; I don’t see any apparent reason why the Covenant would not want to add one more warrior race into their multiple species alliance. After all, the Covenant prophets would see the Storm Creatures as useful tools, rather than as dangerous threats.

Wait did you say in the beginning of the first chapter the men are bots if they are can he make more of them like in the game

This is so good.
It would be nice to have a super Mac sitting around waiting to be used.

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Seems like it so far. But I personally don't mind. :scootangel:

it is launching not lunching!

Actually, with his massive advantage, he should go straight for the kill with overwhelming force.

My people had outlawed Slavery centuries ago and anyone found doing so are punished harshly for doing so

So, punish the Caribou for breaking someone else’s laws that do not apply to them? Sure, kill them, but have a better reason than “my laws are universal because I have guns.”

I think the robot idea is a good one and even helps the Halo verse seem more epic since it makes the Covenant seem even more powerful than canon by comparison.

Please don't leave this abandoned

Your biggest mistake was crashing the Spirit Of Fire.

F***ED THEM UP CAPTAIN FORGE!!!!!

"Indeed. I hope they don't come here." Luna agreed as she remembered one night when she entered one of Forge's dreams and saw him at a battlefield in a city. The sights she saw made her quickly remove the dream. "I won't tell but from what little I saw before I ended the nightmare if they do come, I don't think my sister or I can stop them." She admitted. They watched as Forge make his way to a drop ship before leaving the room each with their own thoughts about him and how things will end.

Luna just jinxed it, well it is to be expected

Damn it just when the covenant came and ended with a cliffhanger

When is when is the next chapter coming out

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