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Set between "Equestria Girls JT" and "Equestria Girls JT: Rainbow Rocks", the Mane 6 find themselves sucked into Spike's comic book and must work together with the Power Ponies to find a way to return to Ponyville while fighting the Power Ponies' archenemies.
This story is based on both the season 4 episode, "Power Ponies" and the My Little Pony 2014 Annual comic.
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Looks good. Update soon. Will the Mane-iac and her allies talk with Twilight privately, asking her why she and her friends are with the Power Ponies only to learn that they are from another world and that they were sucked into this one? And Twilight would, after that, scold them to questioning her: A Princess at that, when she's at a higher position than they are.
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I don't think they can be negotiated. These are comic book supervillains we're talking about.
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Well, they should know Twilight's royalty since they heard The Masked-Matterhorn say "Princess Twilight".
"As I attempted to steal the Electro-Orb, I encountered 6 ponies; one of them was a unicorn with wings, I believe they're called alicorns who must be royalty; and a baby dragon who claimed to be from another world. They did not say what world they're from though. Since they are with the Power Ponies, perhaps trying to figure out how to get themselves home, why don't we stop them from leaving by forming a team?"
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Are you trying to proofread a line from my story?
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That's pointing out a mistake. If there's spelling, grammar, or something that doesn't look right; the readers can correct it and the writer can fix what they pointed out.
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Then, what were you writing there?
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The correction of the mistake.
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How was what I wrote a mistake?
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Well, for one, you put 'a couple of ponies' when there are 6 of them; and a couple of ponies means 2 ponies. And that you put 'Since they're with the Power Ponies', you didn't put 'probably asking for their help to get themselves back home'.
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How about if I wrote "Since the Power Ponies are most likely helping these ponies return to their world"?
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Sounds good.
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Not sure if they would care if she was royalty, either.
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So they must have figured it out.
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Do that. You can edit it in the chapter.
So, when's the next chapter coming?
Great update. I wonder what The Mane-iac, Smudge, Long Face, High Heel, Pharaoh and Shadowmane want with Twilight and her friends.
You put 2 is's in that sentence. 1 is enough.
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Oh, crap. Thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix that real quick.
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Other than that, the chapter was good. But what does Mane-iac and her allies want from Princess Twilight and her friends?
The Mane-iac. You spelled The wrong.
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Fixed it.
with her hoof. Pinkie doesn't have magic unless unleashing the power of the Elements of Harmony with her friends, she's an Earth pony.
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Sorry, I meant Rarity. I'll fix that.
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Just fixed it.
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I saw. Good job.
Hum Drum did not talk about friendship, Spike did.
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Thanks for pointing that out. I'll fix it in a jiff.
This one wasn't changed with the edit.
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Oops. Sorry, forgot to fix that.
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Fixed it.
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Better. Now, what do the villains want from Twilight and her friends? Since they took them with them.
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I'll send you a private message about it.
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Okay.
Spike's words.
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Just fixed it.
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Same thing here:
"Yeah, Spike, where did that come from?" Mistress Mare-velous asked Hum Drum wondering about his sudden burst of confidence earlier.
Hum Drum should be Spike
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Right. I just fix it now.
(looking at cover art) That's nice, but what does any of that have to do with Bob the Builder?
Why those-!
I can't believe the Power Ponies want to do go to Equestria and be its heroes (and rule over the ponies there as well). Equestria is already protected by the Elements of Harmony! 
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Sorry about that. That's actually meant to be a placeholder cover and I haven't come up with a cover yet.
All the Sludge's should be Smudge. You spelled his name wrong all throughout this chapter.
Her lasso.
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Fixed all the spelling errors on Smudge.
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Fixed it.
Well, great chapter. I'm glad Twilight and her friends are back in Equestria.
Thanks very much.
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By the way, I think that spider bot is Mane-iac's.
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No. No, it's not. Read my story "Equestria Girls JT" if you want to know more about the spiderbot.
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Just did. What is the point of the spiderbot and the boy it belongs to? They sound pointless for the stories.