When her crown is stolen from the Crystal Empire on the night before her coronation, Twilight Sparkle pursues the thief, Sunset Shimmer, into an alternate world where she finds herself turned into... a teenage girl! To regain her crown and return to Equestria, Twilight must learn how to fit into this strange new world and defeat Sunset Shimmer in a conpetition to become crowned Princess of the Fall Formal at Canterlot High. Luckily, she'll have the assistance of Spike and five teenage girls who remind her of a certain group of ponies back home.
Chapters (10)
Wow. Quiet comment section, eh?
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Yeah, no one's really commented about this story at all yet. But thanks for leaving a comment, at least.
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No probs.
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What do you think of the story so far, by the way?
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Haven't read all of it. I'll get back to you.
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Okay, thanks.
I believe the action you mean to describe is shaking her head.
The story is interesting, but at the same time it's a bit like a carbon copy of the movie.
Sorry about that. It's just I wanted it to have the reader feel like they were actually watching an alternate version of the movie.
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Yeah it would have been slightly better if twilight had actually taken sunset concerns seriously. Maybe Celestia wasn't the source of the problem she saw but lying about the possible problem only made her look guilty of hiding something. And sunset wasn't that bad before she went through the mirror. She was just an egg head like twilight was at least she was a little more aware of the world around her unlike twilight who almost got hit with a ball and didn't notice.
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She thought Sunset was talking trash about her mentor and it wasn't until the end that she saw that Sunset wasn't as bad as she thought she was. It was supposed to help make Sunset's redemption more believable and earned than the movie's take on it. I'm sorry if I didn't execute it well. Plus, Twilight will take Sunset's concerns about her prophecy seriously later on in the sequel to this story.
Also, the part with the ball was meant to help connect to continuity of how Twilight was characterized in the season 5 episode, "Amending Fences".
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Well I can't wait to read the sequel. I get tried of Celestia being treated like she something special just because she raises the sun. She keeps her self locked away from everyone and expects them to know that she messes up sometimes. She has to know how everyone puts her on a pedestal especially after the nightmare moon incident.
Celestia's a Princess, not a queen.
Cadence is a princess like Celestia and Luna, neither of them are queens.
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They're queens in this version of the show. I wanted to integrate something from Lauren Faust's vision of the show, in which Celestia was supposed to be a queen.