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Some of them want to use you, some of them want to be used by you/Some of them want to abuse you, some of them want to be abused.

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Rarity asks Twilight for help in writing her wedding vows to Celestia, and learns more about her new place in the world.


Conceived before Season 9.

An entry into the Imposing Sovereigns II: Once and Future contest for the prompt Rarity: Coronation.

Edited by GaraTheAuthor.

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Comments ( 8 )

And somehow, Undome found a way to fit a Raritwi story into the—

It's not like the entire country isn't in an absolute frenzy over you marrying Celestia.

:rainbowderp: Wait, what?

Actually, most historians these days actually think that Sapphire was writing about Luna, not Celestia.

Before she helped thwart Tirek, of course.

Even if I can't remember what sleep feels like anymore, you have no idea how honoured we are to be part of this.

"To be fair, I couldn't remember what sleep felt like even before the wedding plans."

A beautiful wedding. There's not a lot of foundation for the relationship itself, but the emotion on display is gorgeously heartfelt. Thank you for this, and best of luck in the judging.

I enjoyed this! Rarity's dialogue and mannerisms were absolutely on point here, and I thought it was a nice dilemma that she struggled with. The resolution felt... easy, in a word, but not entirely unsatisfying despite it.

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True connoisseurs of RariTwi understand that romance is irrelevant. As long as Twilight and Rarity are in the same room and talking, there's always a chance for chemistry, and that chemistry is the core of what makes RariTwi RariTwi, not kissing or flirting or exchanging books with each other.

This was a really sweet story, and I liked how everyone was portrayed. Including, yes, the friendship between Rarity and Twilight mentioned in the comments.

Majin Syeekoh
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HMMMMMMMMMMM

Well, it's very sweet, and I definitely prefer Rarilestia to Twilestia shipping (the power dynamics in student-teacher relationships are creepy). But it feels a little lacking - it's hard to feel much for the happy couple when we have no idea why they're a couple.

why is this under the Twilestia is Bestia group??? lmao, good story though!

there are tears

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