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This story is a sequel to Chaos Theory
It's been three years since Discord and Twilight began dating, and Discord has something very special planned for the evening of the anniversary. But he's not sure about his plan. That is, until he gets help from two very unlikely ponies.
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Nice little one-shot you have here...
Ah, now I know why you mentioned something about Rarity to me...So that wasn't a random comment at all.
Good job on this. And I guess the "Tangled" idea won't be too bad.
I would very like to see a 1-shot of the wedding.
It would be awesome like this and Chaos Theory.
impressive addition to "Chaos Theory" and i agree to the "Tangled" for a new sequel.
Till next, fellow writer.
YES! Now to make the wedding and a happy chaotic ending!
"Tangled" liked wedding? All my yes. You had me at Tangled--it's one of my favorite Disney movies!
"Best editor ever"? Dude, you're far too kind.
Excellent story, of course; as if I'd tell you otherwise. You have yet to disappoint me with your great stories. Like I said, love the ending--aw, heck, I love all of it.
1899236 You seem angry...
But don't comment bad towards the other readers...
1899236 Someone needs a cookie.
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So we get a sort-of-doubtful Discord and a somewhat-forward Twi. (Which is the way I tend to write her myself.) This works amazingly well as a pairing, mostly because they pretty much have to think like one another, lest they precipitate the Fight of All Fights. Or worse.
We must see the wedding.
ALL MY YES!!!
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And finally, the most important seal of all!
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1902521 Glad you enjoyed it! You should go read my blog I just posted. It's completely relevant to this story.
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Mkay! Oh wow, it's been 5 minutes since I posted that comment?! I could've sworn I just posted that like 10 seconds ago
Edit: Is it a bad sign if it's 5:00AM and I'm still wide awake cause of this site and I'm not even yawning?
1902532 Not really...
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Awesome! and Perfect!
Perfectly Awesome!
And for the progress so far UPVOTE!!!
Moremorenore more moremore more
Very nice. Do the wedding storyline, with Rainbow and Pinkie running around trying to fix things in time so things don't explode!
Great! Needs the wedding chapter and a little more story... CHILDREN. This needs children!
YWhen - yes, that better be when not if - you expand this story further...there should be the wedding, and kids - and probably some minor fuss when they determine whether or not Discord and Twilight even CAN have kids...and whether or not it's safe for Twilight. Also, maybe a chapter as Discord starts thinking about the fact that Twilight is mortal - maybe notices a few early signs of aging - and starts to wonder about what will happen when she's gone.
Goodness this was just precious
I hope they have a wonderful little life together~
As a DiscoLight author and fan, you just made me d'aww. Congrats on that.
1994913 I love your fics! Can't wait to see what happens next in "Renew"! Oh, and be sure to read "Chaos Theory", the prequel to this, if you want to see how it all started!
1994968 Oh, thank you very much! I'll be sure to read your other story soon.
This was not bad. I preferred the first story though. I like how Twilight basically told him "Screw the speech, we have chaos!"
I have to say that I would have liked a bit more from the story. Mainly because it was excellent, but TOO SHORT lol
That is a good sign though that even knowing that it was a one shot, it made me thirst for more. Thankfully, there SI the sequel.
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I would love it if you did more then just a one-shot. I love this story line and you should continue it as much as you can.
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You know what? Screw the one shot wedding, give me five more full length books, and a movie instead!
I'm surprised this wasn't a chapter added to the former story, but then again, it is tonally a little different. All throughout the time I spent reading this, it was obvious that it was pure, delightful fluff. It was very different from the Drama/Comedy/Romance shenanigans of the previous story. There weren't any sneaking secrets or reformation obstacles Discord needed to overcome. He was just a big ol' dorkus.