Applejack has finally worked up the gumption to tell Rarity how she feels and so she's invited Rarity over. Now if only Rarity would have let it play out properly...
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Jhoira
Time to write some fanfiction! Yay! If you have any thoughts comment! I find reading them fun!
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Congrats! You get a like.
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Yay! ^.^
Cute!!
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Thank you. ^.^
May I suggest shortening it to 'her room'?
'breathe' is a verb and shouldn't be used here, instead you ought to change it to 'breath', which is a noun.
'mane'.
I'm assuming that this is part of a series, and 'Two For The Price Of One' is the sequel? I will continue! Not bad.
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You are correct, I meant to type her room, hehe. I think I started a different sentence then changed it and didn't completely delete the old sentence.
Correct!
Also correct.
They're not by default a part of a series, but they're both little bits of Rarijack fluff so they could be.
Perfectly played! I can hear each of them exactly as it plays out.
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Muhahahaha!
Ah this was another fun story, bravo!