"Let's try this again."
Cozy Glow sighed as she flapped her wings to stay afloat in the air. She frowned at the mess beneath her as two grown adults bicker like foals fighting over a swing set in a park. Again, it was up to her to be rational and patient. If she doesn't make Tirek and Chrysalis get along soon, they would have to face Grogar's wrath and she would like to avoid him as much as she can. She learned all the friendship fundamentals of Friendship in Twilight's school, if she can do it, Cozy Glow can do it better.
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A little deviation from the end of episode 2 is interesting.
(Link for those wanting to check what was said: https://mlp.fandom.com/wiki/Transcripts/The_Beginning_of_the_End_-_Part_2 )
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I think she is their strategist , since she planned and schemed for the longest time before going though her plans.
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I kinda see Chrysalis as the "Assassin" or "spy" to infiltrate and stuff, I don't know, lol hopefully we will get a clear picture in the upcoming episodes.
Hillarious, can't wait for the next chapter.
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If Chrysalis is going to fight anypony, I'm pretty sure it'll be Starlight.
Tirek is right. Chrysalis do have pretty eyes.
i like it
The characters writing is spot on and I’m really getting drawn into the story! Keep going!
I'm liking this so far, hope you continue.
But, I thought Cozy could not comprehend friendship.
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It’s true, she does not but she uses the “lessons of friendship” to her advantage like in the new episode she tries to teach them to trust and work together. Something she learned in the school of friendship.
“I rather drink bog water.”
I read that as bong water at first.
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Psychopath's can comprehend emotions like empathy, even if they do not feel them.
Please continue this story. It's good.
Cozy Glow can be scary when she wants to be
The beginning of their bonding, aww<3
even if this fic is a year old, I still would love to see another take on how their friendship could develop. Its always so much fun seeing different takes with their dynamics.