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This is too weird for me.
i'm out
Dafuq is this shit. I mean really.
theres a video game called the last of us
1052157 this is the weirdest chapter in the whole story and I really feel that this book of mine will progress further than you think
1052325 it's my book and if it weird for you then that's your problem, you could have still gave me some real critical comments.
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had to... lol...
havent read story yet, add to read later
add to read later
1502734 lol that is an awesome Simpsons episode and hope you enjoy the fanfic!
Oh, wow, I... I'm sorry... but you seriously need to go back to the drawing board on this.
I just look at the first paragaraph, and I see what seems like no regard for punctuation, pacing, formatting, or anything like that.
1502782 I just got a prereader/editor about 2 days ago and I'm going to get him to help me with all my grammar issues and such. I think that after getting no comments on this what so ever to help me fix this fanfic up I just gave up asking so thank you for the helpful insight. Also I really don't know if the grammar gets better in the later chapters. If not please inform me.
By the way, the chapter title should be spelt 'Disappointment' instead of:
1583593 okay so other than that is the story fine or what?
1892888 God I haven't read my chapters in ages so tell me what is this song based off of (the scene you found this song fit) or are we being random today?
1892888 oh and dig the song
well this has been i interesting
story so far hope to see more
Great chapter. Lots of character development!
This chapter is too good
oooooooooooh
2682039 glad you are liking so far but I have to say my story Parasitic Relationship is of higher caliber
When I first saw the name of the story, I thought it was a crossover to The Last of Us.
2776624 LOL, as did I!
im liking this
3145783 thanks as this was my first major writing project, I hope that you will enjoy my other works as well as the book I am working on currently.
.....sorry about the self promoting
3160761np whens the next update for A Parasitic Relationship if you dont mind me asking
3160784 um...when my computer gets fixed I'll start working on it as well as another chapter for The Last of Us
3165034
Okie dokie lokie
I'm sorry man but I cannot do this anymore this story has so many plot holes nothing against your ideas but the way you present your ideas needs to be fixed