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I am here to prove that even someone that has dyslexia can write stories. All feedback is appreciate​, and always have a smile.

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Princess Celestia has been alone for a very long time. So what happens when she decides to start getting back into the dating world? She starts a war with an unexpected pony for the love of a special somepony. It will be a while before the actual war starts so please wait and enjoy.

Specaial thanks to lonewolf3878 for the cover art.
Set in the Our new Queen Universe. You don't have to read that story to understand what is going on here. But If you want to go ahead that way some things make sense here. But this is a Discord Love story, when does it ever make sense?

Edited by Misty Dolphin 6/26/19

Chapters (17)
Comments ( 45 )

Shipping wars! Count me in!

I really like how all of this is within the realm of possibility should the characters try to confess their feelings.

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Glad you are enjoying the story so far. So who are you routing for?

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I always root for flutercord

100% Dislestia here :D
sad Twi is out tho hahaha that would be my OTP xD

Wait, what? Did Twilight become the new queen on the Changelings?

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Oh sorry. I forgot to add to the title page that this was in the same universe form a previous story i wrote that she did.

I think this would be a more appropriate cover.
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I don't think I can use it. Can I?

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You could ask the artist for permission. Here's his account. https://www.deviantart.com/lonewolf3878

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Oh, wait I can't use this because I have Twilight as a changeling in this story. Nuts!

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Does it matter? This is mainly a Dislestia vs Fluttercord fanfic, right?

*reads last part* ...... Wait WHAT

Fight! Fight! Fight! Fight!

Yess #Dislestia Rules!!

oooooo, Flutters gonna smack a sun goddess in the head!

Dejected, Celestia rubs the tree where her lover was moments there earlier. A small tear came from her eye, before a presence similar to a enrage dragon could be felt behind her causing her to shiver.

"PRINCESS!" She turned to see the element of kindness, not living up to her title as she looks like she was going to kill her. "We need to talk."

Well... I'm sure Luna can handle raising the sun for a while.

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Ah yeah the typical agressive Fluttercord-Shipper that cant accept any other Discord Ship.
Nice to meet you.
You're not really helpfull to your reputation, u know that?
~Nerfy

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Eh, you have your opinion, I have mine. As for being aggressive? Bruh, you ain't seen nothing yet

**which has nothing to do with Fluttercord

Let the love games begin

Haha i can already see the Plottwist that Discord is totally annoyed by Flutter's and Tia's behaviour and starts dating someone else xD
I route for Luna since Twilight is outta the game haha

Calling it right now: It’s gonna end with none of them winning Discord, cause Discord is gonna give a message of how they shouldn’t fight over him and that this is stupid; ship wars are terrible.
But that’s just my theory.

"You have reached the answering voice of Discord. If you are hearing this than Discord is not talking calls and I will annoy you for the next five minutes." The voice in the mirror started to singing about nursery rhymes in high pitch voices before Celestia touches the surface of the mirror. It ripples at contact as the voice fades away as she can once again see her reflection.

Good thing my head's on correctly.

Am I the only one who's going to read this story solely because of the cover art?

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Maybe, but who knows if that is going to be part of the story or not?:pinkiecrazy:

The ending amused me.

Comment posted by iliastolepbergen456852 deleted Jul 9th, 2020

I like this series it is funny and awesome to see Fluttershy ready to deck Princess Celestia in the face! Keep going with this series, I just can't wait for what plans does Fluttershy have in store for Discord. Also, I did notice throughout the story that some things were misspelled. I suggest getting Grammarly it is free and easy to use for your future chapters in this story. Keep up the good work I just can't wait for more to come. 😄

YES! Another chapter and it was cool I did love how the arguments were continuing after the water slide incident. You have to keep on writing this story do not give up I see a lot of "chaos" waiting to happen. Now, I do have a question, why do you want Celestia and Fluttershy to tell Rarity, AppleJack, and Rainbow Dash about their whole battle with each other for Discord's heart? I just can't wait to see what is Celestia's next plan will be or Fluttershy with the help of Pinkie Pie. Although the chapter is amazing, the grammar in this chapter was hurting the experience when try to read it. I really suggest you proofread your work and get Grammarly to help you catch those miss spelled words. Also, I guess I am a little scared of what you are going to do with Pharynx and Rainbow Dash; since there is a Sorin in MLP; but I am not the author just the reader waiting for the next chapter to come up. I love this story and concept and please continue it.😍

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It good that you like the story. As for my writing. I am using Grammerly. But their is only so much I can fix on my own due to my dyslexia. As for Rainbow and Pharynx, I forgot that there was a Sorin.:pinkiecrazy:

I love Fluttercord :moustache:

DisPrincess Celestia, The Co-ruler of Equestria, the Princess of the sun. With beauty only matched by her fellow Princesses and adored by her fellow ponies. Is bored out of her mind. Her sister Princess Luna had taken the time to schedule a day off for her without giving a heads up. So here she is, in Canterlot's library sipping tea and reading one of the many books she had read before.

DisPrincess? Huh?

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Where did that come from?

OMG YOU'RE BACK I'M SO HAPPY OMG I THOUGHT THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY WOULD DIE! BUT HE IS ALIVE YAY:yay::raritystarry::rainbowkiss::twilightsmile:

I just looked at the title pick and "Ready the cannons!" vs. "Ready the Canon." is just amazing.

Ah... Shipping wars.

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The story is very unique and really nice. Just read it offline and I want to see this hilarity to its conclusion.

I love this story Equestria at War!

Hope you are still making more because this is getting good. This is my idea for a evil Fluttershy that name herself Queen Chaos.

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