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Meadow_Dawn


Writer and hopeful novelst who seeks to share in creativity and things she's learned.

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Morning Rise laying against her father’s forelegs and Hearty Beacon laying with his head in the nook where Stalwart’s hind leg met his body.

When i read this i thought it said hearty bacon lol guess that's what i get for reading b4 breakfast:rainbowlaugh:

Subject of day:
Sun – Off, Mon – Math, Tues – social studies (history/geography), Wed – Sciences, Thurs – Language: Equine (change when discover punny name for English from other fic), Fri – Foreign language of choice

Equish sounds good and punny right?:pinkiehappy:

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Trust me, i have almost called him bacon too. :p

Thanks for the note-catch. Fair warning this 'story is more a side project as Scorch and I work on a major sequel placed in my dawn's world again... and lets say tentative permissions from certain bigger authors have been gained...

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Fully understood this was a side project xD still looking forward to getting the updates for this i like how u included it as more of a journal as well. Dawn is going to need aloooot of training to counteract all that cake and other sweets she had on the other equestria lol

She definitely was lasting longer than she remembered doing as a human, probably due to spreading out her weight on four legs,

Actually, having fewer legs is better for long distance running since you have to only move two legs rather than four, which takes less energy. So any extra endurance is definitely coming from magic.

Of course, for top speed, four is better than two.

Storm frowned, half sad to feel them go and turned around to leave. Nightfall was going to get an earful tonight … if he wants to go back or complain, he can be a stallion and actually talk to Twilight!

hell yea!

"Agreed." Dawn nodded quietly, grateful she didn't say 'amen.' She had no idea why that almost came to mind, but it would have stuck out too much.

ah... : ) amen to that.

While myself do not particularly enjoy The Game, I like how it keeps you on your toes and your senses sharp.

Get back here Discord! You still owe me fifty bits!

I can't be the only one that keeps reading Beacon's name as 'Bacon', can I?

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Nope, there's even a point where Dawn herself does... though the reason why... well, it's probably nothing.

Twilight and the kids were adorable

Celestia's back story was the interesting thing in this chapter

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Yup. Things are nice n calm right now. ... and if we know anything about the world CTS helps manage... well, she'll probably be fine.

Think you are overdoing it with the journal

And what exactly is Dawn planning with the gray mare?

Wow what an idiot ball move. By now both Twilight and Chryssy have a rep for swift vengeance and this idiot ticked them both off.

Oooooooooohhhhh whoever attacked dawn dey fuk'd up and now dey gonna get fuk'd up

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Essentially like killing John Wick's dog and blaming Agent 47

Things are really heating up, and I (almost) feel sorry for whoever is having their head in the sights of all these powerful ponies and changelings.

Also, is that new cover art? Nice.

So curious to who Figure and Target are.

And as always the anti changeling does the stupid

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Yep. Done by a Cloureed. She had fought some depression and this got finished after. Seeing the outcome, i dont mind the delay and hope my next piece completes in time for this project's completion. I have a whole fic ready to lay down when this is wrapped up (i think it'll be within a few chapters? Havent reassessed my written stuff yet.)

Saw the Short Description on the front page, decided to post this:

And no, I am not sorry! :derpytongue2:

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Excellent response, regardless of if you read the story or not! Thanks for dropping by (though still surprised it was on the front page at any point.)

Love the bots..

and a bit of old Twilight shows up.

And I get Twilight. she doesn't not take betrayal well, Night, you are very lucky to be alive.

This story looks good, but I do not like the Soliderverse at all. Will that keep me from enjoying this story? I want to be 100% sure before I consider reading this.

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To be honest, it could. A lot of how the world works is determined by that soldierverse even as Dawn herself hates some things. I would sooner recommend Dawn the Derby Horse or Soldier and Hope, as they both happen in worlds other than Scorch's

interesting look but jeeze, just hatched and hit again

someone bit Meadow's horn lol

Cue up "The Game" by Motörhead?

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YeaH, I really loved Dawn the Derby horse, I just can't get into alt. universe storys most of the time

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Glad to hear you enjoyed it. After two years of working on training a princess here though, been getting a bit burned out and wrote Derby Horse to break things up (and totally has no bearing on an anime she watched. nope, none at all.)

I've had other ideas come to mind, including other displacement stuff like landing in minecraft (only to be told it's already been done so I'd need a way to make it unique or fun in its own right if i try it at all, like a modded version, but still). Honestly may need to take more of a break from writing period as I'm still semi-stuck when it comes to motivation for writing Training out further, and even when I have new ideas, I can't seem to write out any of it. I've got the plot for a re-done/alternate timeline Lost in the Mirror of Worlds ready, and even have a few chapters ready, but I'm strugglig to write.

Anyway, whatever feedback you wish to leave, by all means do so. It brightens my day when people leave feedback on what they liked, even if there's suggestions on how i goofed up mixed in. Happy reading Sports, and thanks for the comment.

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Thanks, I would love a sequal or continuation of Dawn the Derby Horse, but I know you're busy. Just a idea

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Well, i can say she'd be somewhat involved in the next fic in the series, currently called Project Chaos Wars, but i feel obligated to finish this fic (not to mention write some actual training like the title says it'd be about x.x)

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Do I need to read any of your other stories in order to understand Dawn the Derby Horse or Soldier and Hope?

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Not really. It may help, but is not required. Derby is definitely standalone and a nice condensed story in its own right. Soldier and Hope is a bit all over at first (we mostly wrote it together for fun and were caught up in our own bs'ing tbh) but it grows the character while showing some of what happened. While i dont yet have intention to do Lost in the Mirror of Worlds, I have been working on its spiritual reboot, so if you really want to know dawn's origins, keep an eye out for Seed of Hope

so qwhat is she now.

And frankly Chryssy and Twilight should be disaplined as well. to NOT see this coming

And if there was one story her parents drilled into her when she was young, it was that drill sergeants made sure that most complaining and some questions would just make it harder so the right way could be sunk in. She knew they probably weren’t going to be hardballs about it in actual training, but they were there to make sure everything was done and done right.

Oh dear. Another soul to be crushed.

If anything, the stories don’t do them justice.

Comment posted by LegionCenturionMaster deleted Mar 28th, 2021

when will there be a sequel?

I would love to see this continued.

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