Dawn has finished helping with the threat of the terrorist Solar Flare, but she is clueless on what makes a good princess. Cue training montage!
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This story looks good, but I do not like the Soliderverse at all. Will that keep me from enjoying this story? I want to be 100% sure before I consider reading this.
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To be honest, it could. A lot of how the world works is determined by that soldierverse even as Dawn herself hates some things. I would sooner recommend Dawn the Derby Horse or Soldier and Hope, as they both happen in worlds other than Scorch's
interesting look but jeeze, just hatched and hit again
someone bit Meadow's horn lol
9960599
YeaH, I really loved Dawn the Derby horse, I just can't get into alt. universe storys most of the time
10008168
Glad to hear you enjoyed it. After two years of working on training a princess here though, been getting a bit burned out and wrote Derby Horse to break things up (and totally has no bearing on an anime she watched. nope, none at all.)
I've had other ideas come to mind, including other displacement stuff like landing in minecraft (only to be told it's already been done so I'd need a way to make it unique or fun in its own right if i try it at all, like a modded version, but still). Honestly may need to take more of a break from writing period as I'm still semi-stuck when it comes to motivation for writing Training out further, and even when I have new ideas, I can't seem to write out any of it. I've got the plot for a re-done/alternate timeline Lost in the Mirror of Worlds ready, and even have a few chapters ready, but I'm strugglig to write.
Anyway, whatever feedback you wish to leave, by all means do so. It brightens my day when people leave feedback on what they liked, even if there's suggestions on how i goofed up mixed in. Happy reading Sports, and thanks for the comment.
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Thanks, I would love a sequal or continuation of Dawn the Derby Horse, but I know you're busy. Just a idea
10008671
Well, i can say she'd be somewhat involved in the next fic in the series, currently called Project Chaos Wars, but i feel obligated to finish this fic (not to mention write some actual training like the title says it'd be about x.x)
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Do I need to read any of your other stories in order to understand Dawn the Derby Horse or Soldier and Hope?
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Not really. It may help, but is not required. Derby is definitely standalone and a nice condensed story in its own right. Soldier and Hope is a bit all over at first (we mostly wrote it together for fun and were caught up in our own bs'ing tbh) but it grows the character while showing some of what happened. While i dont yet have intention to do Lost in the Mirror of Worlds, I have been working on its spiritual reboot, so if you really want to know dawn's origins, keep an eye out for Seed of Hope