• Published 4th Jan 2019
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Adventures Of An Animus Dragon - Undertotem



A man gets sent to Equestria, but not as a human, but as his OC dragon. Camo scales - weird, mind reading - head ache, prophecy seeing - HUGE migrane, venom spit - dangerous. At least he has books to keep his abilities from being a problem

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Colts, Fillies, Stories, And Forests - Part 2


Note: All songs are not made by me, and the song's lyrics is slightly altered to fit the story's narration.


Stargazer looked towards the group of fillies and colts, among them was the CMC, beside them was their teacher Miss Cheerlie. He then looked behind the group and saw that there was a rather sizable amount of ponies that heard him tell the story known as "The Lost Heir". A couple of the ponies behind the young group cried at the rather sad tale he told, others were amazed by how the story is. As for the group of youngsters, they seemed to enjoy the story so far, most of them were. Stargazer the looked beside him to the left and looked at Spike. Spike then in return looked at the white and red dragon and gave him a thumbs up for his good work.

"That was a great story Star, I didn't know you were really good at storytelling." Spike said as he laughed a little bit. "They seemed to really your enjoy your story." He said as he pointed towards the enthusiastic group of ponies asking the large dragon for more stories.

"Thanks. You really think so?" Stargazer asked sounding unsure, although a swelling warmth of pride was slightly filling his chest. "You really think they'll like it if I tell another story?" Stargazer asked the young dragon.

"I don't think so, I know so!!!" Spike said proudly. "And what you did with your scales, especially showing the characters and stuff was pretty awesome." He said.

"Eheh, thanks." Stargazer replied. He then looked at the crowd in front of him again, he then smiled then sighed. "I can still do two or three more stories if you want." As he said that, the crowed behind the group of foals clapped, and the colts and fillies cheered as they get to witness another great story. Stargazer smiled then shrugged as he prepared for another story.

"Well this next story was made by Turtle, and the title is, "The Platinum Dragon"." Stargazer said. He then moved his body around a bit, and spread his wings open once again to provide a visual help by changing the color of his scales into what would look like figures. And just like the other story before, his mind went on autopilot as he told the story, and strings started to play from somewhere.


A serpent lights the ancient sky
A threat of tainted stars
Evil stirs and in its wake
The souls of mortals sway

Stargazer sang as the color of his scales change to that of a mountain valley in the night, with kingdoms and their structures. His scales changed showing dragons living happily within, only for a dark looming figure to block the light of the moon. Its visage imposing and its intent evil, the large black serpent roared, striking fear and panic to the dragons below. Dark figures soon emerged from nothing, laying ruin to everything they cross paths with, made by the black serpent, who promised only destruction to those who oppose him.

Sorrow reigns
Over fields of red
Spirits pace
Through the shadows cast by their graves

When the destruction ended, and the kingdom laid in ruin, one dragon survived, walking through the broken space, in search for something that he can not find. A young white one, who cursed towards the heavens for loosing those important to him. With a heavy heart and aching body, he took the remains of what he knew and buried them. With the world turned gray for the young dragon, he swore to avenge those who fell, and make the black serpent pay.

These are days and nights of venom and blood
Heroes will rise as the anchors fall
Brave the strife, reclaim every soul
That belongs to the Beauty of Dawn

Years has passed, and the war against the black serpent and his forces has not yet ended. Dragon nations from all around have gathered under one banner to drive back the forces of darkness, and find a way to defeat the black serpent. The young white dragon, now older, joined the ranks of the of the united nations, to further his goal of defeating the black serpent. Unbeknownst to the white dragon, fate had plans for him, a road of sadness, suffering, despair, betrayal, hope, strength, duty, and sacrifice, for the light has chosen him as their champion.

Darkness strikes to blind the strong
But Faith will guide their claws
Loyal hearts we'll stand as one
And fight with wings of Hope

More years pass, and the white dragon has become an elite member. Through the travels of becoming an elite, he had formed bonds with other dragons, allies, friendship, brotherhood, and a lover of sorts. With more things to help him with his travels and give him purpose, he now has more of a reason to destroy the darkness. No matter how hard the darkness would try to deceive and fool him, he would stand strong. And through the final push towards the black mountain, through the army of darkness, the army of light would soon destroy the black serpent that has caused them pain and suffering.

Pride fuels the deadly fire
That devours our tower of gold
The wings of war will rage and roar
'Til the sun burns bright once more

Split apart, a lover left behind for safety, a friend lost in a devastating battle, and a betrayal of a brother, the black serpent, spoke of false promises towards the white dragon. Enraged, scared, confused, and in despair, the white dragon mourned for their loss. But what set him straight was seeing his fallen brother again, this time, the white dragon remembered that he does not need to carry the burden alone, because they would all fall, together with their shared burdens.

These are days and nights of venom and blood
Heroes will rise as the anchors fall
Brave the strife, reclaim every soul
That belongs to the Beauty of Dawn

The final clash, light against dark, good against evil, for the white dragon, guided by the light, fought against the black serpent with all his might. The war has stopped, the army of darkness defeated, and the only fight happening was a dance to the death of light and dark. Battered and broken, the white dragon looks at the black serpent, unharmed and unflinching. With the last of his effort, the white dragon rushed towards the black serpent, and with the last of his power, his scales of white now turned platinum, and his size now massive. With his final strength, he destroyed the black serpent, but with the cost of also loosing his life. The black serpent disappeared like a dying ember, and soon the platinum dragon followed suit. And for the first time in many, many, many years. The sun rose, and the blue sky came.


Once again, after Stargazer told the story, the crowd cheered, and the colts and fillies were ecstatic. Even a certain pink filly with a tiara was showing a hint of wonder even though she is feigning ignorance. With the story done, Stargazer rested his wings and his legs, due to making motions with them by showing his back and the top side of his wings or his stomach area and the underside of his wings.

Meanwhile, the ponies in the crowd were talking to each other, talking about their thoughts about the stories so far. Spike was with the students, as to have a better view of the presentation and storytelling. But the crowds noise, soon shifted to that of want, as one colt from the group of students started chanting.

"More, more, more, more, more, more, more, more, more........"

Soon, the chanting got louder as more and more ponies said 'More'. Wanting another story, the crowd, along with the students, and Spike, they chanted. Again and again, Although, Miss Cheerlie was at the side lines with a gentle smile on her face as she shook her head. Upon seeing her students' rather excited actions and outbursts for wanting another story, she had to calm the group of young ponies before they become a rather problematic group. Especially 3 certain fillies.

Stargazer on the other talon, was somewhat liking the attention, thus, to prompt more of the thing that he likes, he gives in into the temptation of telling another story.

"Oooohhh~ Kay, okay, okay, sure thing, sure thing. Alright, I'll tell another story if that's what you guys really want." The white and red dragon said, causing the crowd to cheer loudly at his approval of telling another story.

"This next story is somewhat of a continuation to "The Platinum Dragon", the title is "The Day Of Destiny". It is also written by the same author, Turtle." The large dragon said to the crowd. Although one pony from the crowd called out to him, referring to the other story.

"But isn't the Platinum Dragon gone from the previous story, and how could the story have a second one when they have already found peace?" The random pony asked the RainWing.

"Well, to answer your question, the story takes place many years later, long after the war on the black mountain. The Platinum Dragon being seen as a guidance to the lost, a hero who saved the world, a warrior who vanquished evil, even seen as a god to some, indeed peace was prominent throughout the world. Although not everyone is fond of peace...." Stargazer replied, giving an air of cryptic undertones. And just as he said that, he opened his wings once again, and music could somehow be heard from somewhere.


We wipe our brows and wait for the 'morrow
Cold is the night and nary a tear
For on the morn' we head into shadow
There is no room for our fear

Darkness loomed through the night, the moon high in the sky. Armies of dragons wait in silence, waiting for the sun to rise. A fight against a dark army happens at sunrise, soldiers, and warriors from different dragon races and kingdoms ready themselves for battle. Unwavering, and hardened. As the sun rose up, the troops began to march forward, through the corrupted plains, brought forth by destruction and evil, they prepared themselves for a long war against the enemy.

His eyes are cruel
His evil is endless
Black is his soul and ne'er will he rest
Till all the world lies covered in darkness
And none who'd fight him are left

The Black Dragon, one who followed the Black Serpent's path, cruel and evil, for he gave up his mortality, morality and his life, to become stronger and lay ruin unto the world of peace. Many tried to stop him, but many also failed, for those who have tried to stop the Black Dragon, they all fell into the dark magic that he uses, corrupting the minds of those who fight him. And if he wins, the world will be plunged into endless darkness, ruled only by the Black Dragon, for he knew how to use his power against those who oppose him.

Tha'nera Telezia
Fly straight and true us dragons
The day of destiny comes
I'll follow the path only fate knows

Soon, armies from both sides rushed towards each other. Wings beating heavily, flames lighting the path, and claws and talons swiping away to defeat their foes, the war began against the followers of The Black Dragon.

Tha'nera Telezia
Forwards to glory don’t whimper
Today our hearts beat as one
When hope is the faintest of whispers

Dragon soldiers of the Alliance fought with all their strength, without fear and without hesitance, for they are guided by hope, made by the Platinum Dragon. The soldiers all fought bravely, as for the warriors, they fought for glory and for honor, for if they won, they did it for glory, and if they died, they died in battle, bringing honor to their name and be accepted in the afterlife.

Our songs of fire, our wingbeats of thunder
On we will go, this army of light
Though peril's storm may tear us asunder
For our dear home we will fight

As the clash between the Alliance and The Followers of The Black Dragon continues, joining into the fray to help the Alliance, is the Light of Bahamut. Joining with them are 5 heroes, renowned for their exceeding strength and skill. With the army of light joining the war, they are sure to protect the world that they cherish.

Geraint, the Gold. Argenta, the Silver
Cloaked from our sight, yet saviors to all
When all seemed lost and blood flowed in rivers
Down, the Black Dragon will fall

Two dragons of Gold and Silver, along with the rest of the heroes charged forward. Defeating their enemies left and right, and not stopping. Their main objective is end the source of the conflict, The Black Dragon. Swiping at their enemies effortlessly, they flew through clusters of followers, many dying, and soon did they reach the Black Dragon.

Tha'nera Telezia
Fly straight and true us dragon
The day of destiny comes
I'll follow the path only fate knows

Although there are 5 heroes and only one black dragon, numbers alone could not match against their opponents size. The heroes fought against the Black Dragon, neither one side faltering, for both sides' strength is overwhelming. Many spells were cast, and lots of blood were spilled, but the heroes have their will and hope to defeat the Black Dragon.

Tha'nera Telezia
Forwards to glory don’t whimper
Today our hearts beat as one
When hope is the faintest of whispers

With combined powers and guidance from Bahamut and the light, the dragons of Gold and Silver used their strength and powers to overwhelm the Black Dragon. With a final clash, the Black Dragon fell from the sky and was defeated, and stood there hovering in the air, were the dragons of Gold and Sliver.

O'hark young ones the battle yet rages
Take up your vows there's no time for words
Go make your mark in history's pages
Let songs of your bravery be heard

The war against the Black Dragon may have been finished, but his followers still roam the plains, plotting, and scheming. For the young ones who feel a sense of duty and purpose, being called by the light of Bahamut, their story is just about to begin. For they would soon become the next generation of heroes that would protect the land from evil.

Tha'nera Telezia
Fly straight and true us dragons
The day our destiny comes
We'll follow the path only fate knows

The young heroes now travel across the world, unknown to each others fate. For when the time is right, their fates and destiny intertwines with each other, bringing them together to fight a great threat the lurks within the shadows of the world.

Tha'nera Telezia
Forwards to glory don’t whimper
Today our hearts beat as one
When hope is the faintest of whispers

And while the heroes venture the world, shadow creep within the earth, and plans are being set a stone, For the Evil Dragon Tiamat, there are no failed plans.


The crowed cheered once again for another astounding story telling from the white and red dragon. This time with more emotion and was taken with more of and energetic display of actions. Especially the little colts and fillies. For Spike, he absolutely adored the stories that Stargazer was telling, for this is what he truly believes, what dragons were supposed to be, strong and powerful, but also wise and great.

For Stargazer, he got not only more cheers, but also more requests to do another story. He did not know what to do, would he stop and say no, or would he give in into the temptation. Unfortunately, with the increasing cheers and chanting, he gave into their wishes.

"Oooooookay~, Fine! But this is the last one, this is the last story that I'm going to tell! Okay? Okay." He said, slightly complaining as he has to do another story, but all of them didn't seem to notice that the large dragons throat starting to hurt from all the story telling.

Meanwhile the crowd of ponies and the group of students cheered as they get to hear another story, although a little bit bummed out that it's going to be the last story of the day.

Stargazer sighed as he rubbed his temples. He then cleared his throat and did some word testing to clear his voice so that he could be properly heard. And just like last time, music soon creeped into the field and soon started playing.


(got lazy to think for more situations so just read the lyrics, the story is pretty straight forward, so use your imagination and make your own drama)

When the war has lasted 20 years …
The dragonets will come.
When the land is soaked with blood and tears…
The dragonets will come.

Find the seawing egg of deepest blue.
Wings of night will come to you.
Find the largest egg on the mountain high
Will give to you the wings of sky.
For wings of earth search through the mud
For an egg the color of dragon blood.
And hidden alone from the rival queens
The wings of sand waits unseen.

Of three queens blister blaze and burn
Two shall die and one shall learn
If she bows to a fate that is stronger and higher
She'll have the powers of wings of fire.

Five eggs to hatch on a brightest night,
Five dragons born to end the fight
Darkness will rise to bring the light.
The dragonets are coming ….


In the near future.....

Figures are found laying around a crystal tree. Figures of various sizes and colors could be seen. For how they got there was unknown to anyone. It could be the "unnatural" tendencies of the Everfree Forest, a rift between space, the distortion of time, or magical distortions, one one would ever know. After some time, one of the figures started to move, waking from their slumber. Their head slowly rising, eyes slowly opening to take in the surrounding environment. And soon they spoke.

"Hey Phoenix?...... Where are we?????"

Author's Note:

I'm back and I took quarantine for granted, and used it to waste my time for playing games and binge watching stuff. Not much progress seen through my stories, but I started making a plan on how to properly do my work, so that I could produce more chapters. I went though somewhat of a depression of sorts, but I'm kinda okay. I should be able to at least make one chapter for each of my stories by the end of this month, hopefully.

Now in regards to the story, I kinda dont know hot to feel about this, I feel like the near to the end part is kind of rushed, also what are your thought about the story so far, with all the time lag and and all??? Idk.

Well, as always, suggestions and feedback is always appreciated.
Leave a Like if you enjoyed the story.
And see you in the next chapter.

Comments ( 17 )

Thank goodness you're back.:pinkiehappy:
Like I said in the last chapter; very few stories are written that are connected to WoF. So keep up the good work.
P.S.
Please don't let this make you feel rushed take your time.

I agree with
10342536
Take your time bud we can wait for new chapters you don't have ta rush it and please take care of yourself dude

9989292
Is the next chapter coming out soon?

10442848
HAHAHA! Unfortunately for me, collage online classes started, so I have work to do. Hopefully I find time to continue writing.
EEEUUUGGGGGHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter, You're the reason I got into WoF and I love it. Take your time, no rushing. :pinkiehappy:

I FINALLY managed to get some of the Wings of Fire series.

I have the first three graphic novels and will be getting books one to ten later.

And it has helped this make SO MUCH more sense.

10880578
Glad that you're managing to connect the dots together, smile :).

And I finally got the time to catch up with where this fic is at!

Imagine being me, deciding that you just want to read some story's because you're bored, and then seeing this story show up. I thought, "Ah, it must be like most of the other self-insert displaced fics, could just be a good read and then forget about it."

So, I read the first chapter, then the second, then the third, and suddenly for no reason i'm now REALLY enraptured in how this is going, where it's going to go, making my own little theories on the fact of who Jonathon and Stargazer are, and finally really depressed that last update was a year ago.

I'll be honest when I say this, I thought this was going to be sub-par, but god damn, this is good. I haven't been this drawn into a story since... forever! I really hope you continue this, finish it, and then come up with 3 more sequels because I want to know more about Stargazer and his friends.

So, please, don't let this end up like a large majority of fanfictions I've seen, where there was great writing, a great plot building, and then the last update was 4 years ago and we just had a cliffhanger for the last chapter. Please.

Keep up the fatastic work, and I'll hope to see a new chapter soon.

Is this story cancelled?

10880848
I do hope you plan to continue this story

I'm curious if this story will continue

When I saw first song in the previous chapter I knew that here goes "half-lazy" and somewhat cliche chapter with character singing songs. And you actually made two of those and even actually got lazy in the end. XD

I have mixed feelings about chapters like these. On one side you clearly worked on stories for him to show, on the other they have only vague relation to the story at hand and absolutely impossible to listen to and read anything beside lyrics at the same time.

On one hand it will be just boring to tell "another week have passed" to skip directly to the part everyone actually want to see, so a few chapters of his life among ponies are needed.

On the other hand these chapters only shown that he's affected by local brand of Harmony, can sing and display some fancy pictures. And almost everything else is irrelevant.

If this was an anime these chapters would be the most controversial filler episodes in history of anime because instead of going on a beach characters would go to a cinema and the episodes will actually show then sitting and watching actually interesting movie with camera behind their heads, so we can see the screen too. On top of that it will be directly related to the main story, but completely irrelevant for anything in it at the same time.

Additionally, I'm not sure it was a good idea to bring a lot more characters into the mix, but that's up to you and a bit late to argue about that considering they are already in the story. Was that one of the reasons why the story got abandoned for over a year already?

2 years later....seems university killed his muse, pity, this was a good story

May I please have some more?:fluttercry:

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