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For most bronies going to Equestria would be a dream come, I'm not most bronies. I went to a game convention simply for fun dressed as my SWTOR Bounty Hunter character and end up here for my efforts, even worse I'm stuck with two fillies that I'm going to have to raise as leaders. Tahla'ada Vadugilyr!

Warning: I'm using Legends Star Wars Lore not Cannon Star Wars Lore.

*Rating and Tags will be changed as needed
*This is a Star Wars the Old Republic displaced story, I don't own SWTOR or Star Wars but the Character is mine so don't bloody steal it ya filthy sinners.
*some words in this story are written in Mando'a, the language spoken by Mandalorians.

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naisu, hope this one gets lots of love and attention

(there are far too little good kotor and swotor fics out there as it is)

Im a big brony and huge star wars fan, i think i may have had a bit of a fangasm

[The Captain (SW:TOR smuggler class)]: {exasperated sigh} Do Mandalorians not know how to say "hello"...?

[Akaavi Spar]: "Su Cuy'gar." It means, "I am surprised to see you are still alive."

Even years later, that game-conversation from SW:TOR still stays with me and is funny. :pinkiehappy:

I like how your character interacts with the merchant.

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SWTOR is one of my favor it games, the only one that I could say I like more is the original Old Republic game or the original doom.

Okay, yeah I am soooooo following this!


Does he know the Resol'Nare? or will that been given to him by the memory's?

Shi Mesh'la!

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The main characture is based off me, so yes he does know about the Resol'Nare.

  1. wear armor
  2. speak Mando'a
  3. defending oneself and family
  4. raising your children as Mandalorians
  5. contributing to the clan's welfare
  6. when called upon by the Mand'alor, rallying to their cause

If you know about Resol'Nare, do you know what the Code of the Mandalorian is?

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Do you mean the Canons of Honor? if so yes I do.

1. Strength is life, for the strong have the right to rule.
2. Honor is life, for with no honor one may as well be dead.
3. Loyalty is life, for without ones Clan one has no purpose.
4. Death is life, one should die as they have lived.

.....Does him being the Only Mandalorian in Equestria make him Mand'alor?

Also, is that Faust? Soooo, he is here at the Time of her Ascension to a Goddess? Damn he is far back in time!

I really hope he is immortal.....

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I spit on the Cannon Star Wars Mandolorian for they are but dar'manda who have sworn loyalty to one of the Mandalorians greatest enemies, the Sith. You spoke the true Mandalorian Code.

No, He will not be Mand'alor. There are too many people that think because they have a Mandalorian OC they can claim that but I feel that that title must be earned through dedication to the Resol'Nare and by actions.

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Yes it's Faust but look at the forth tag for further information. There is the reason the Merchant was so desperate. Now time to make the entire Fandom rage at me in the comments. :trollestia:

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Don't they hate all but a few Force Users? The only two Force users I can think of from Legends that they REALLY Respected were Metra Surik and Revan?

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So Wait? Is Faust NOT going to become a Goddess? Wouldn't that prevent other Ponies from Ascending to Alicornhood? From what little the MLP Canon and the Non-Canon comics have suggested and Hinted at was that Faust's Death and Ascension to a Goddess created the Plane we see in Episode 13, season 3.

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Actually most Mandalorian despised the Sith with a passion but respected Jedi due to the actions of Revan. It wasn't till the Jedi sided with the Republic fully that the Mandalorians actually hated the Jedi. You know how in the Clone Wars Mandalore was a wasteland? That was because at one point the Mandalorians were more powerful than the republic and the republic feared that they would attack so they sent the Jedi to massacre about 90% of the Mandalorians and then bombed Mandalore and every planet under Mandalorian control till they were dust. After this happened they created the government of Mandalore seen in the the Clone Wars and changed history to where it read that Mandalore was like it was due to Mandalorian infighting. This attack destroyed a total of 41 worlds including Mandalore, and the republic is labeled as the good guys. (Yes I will be talking more about this in the story.)

Now as to your Questions about Faust, She is already and Alicorn and has given birth to Celestia and Luna but they're around the age of a toddler so I'd say about 5-6 years old. Also I'm not super familiar with MLP Lore, I thought the Ethereal Plane/ Ascension Plane was always there but the ability to for normal ponies to ascend will still be there. I can't really say any more because of spoilers.

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Uhg the Republic are a bunch of Di'kuts, the did not just BOMBARD 41 planets! They issued 41 Base-Delta-Zeros!

Koltor Overload - Overrides the safeties on the suits Koltor injection system to dispense a high amount of Koltor. This overloads the nervous system and prevents pain but can lead to an overdose that causes damage to the nerves or even death.

kolto* not koltor

(unless there is a specific reason its called koltor here like its a fusion of kolto and bacta)

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Thanks, auto correct is a pain in the butt.

Well now you're all caught up on what's happened to me. Seems no matter where I go the Universe loved dumping a shit ton of responsibility on me and telling me to deal with it. Honestly I have no fucking idea what I'm going to do but I know the Merchant's about to get an ear full form me on this. Well, look out world because you just got a very grumpy and pissed off Mandalorian with two kids and basters with infinite ammo.

Mandalorian's are deadly enough, but give them infinite ammo and something to protect? well......nothing short of a Capital Class Turbo Laser is going to stop them.

So I take it Celestia and Luna re now Mando'ade? Also will he invoke Gai bal manda? Both for the Children and for Faust?

Nebula will invoke Gai bal manda for Celestia and Luna however Faust was given burial meaning she will not be. Mandalorians don't bury their dead unless they are the Mand'alor, instead they burn them and scatter the ashes, the armor might be kept as a way to honor them but is most often passed down to the decedent.

Well, look out world because you just got a very grumpy and pissed off Mandalorian with two kids and basters with infinite ammo.

you forgot to add immortal to that bit it would make it way better

Love it, right kriby
Kriby:love it *bashes little creatures face in*

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....You realize the Mandalorian's used Gai Bal Manda for the dead too right?

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The tradition could be conducted on a singular basis, or toward a group, and even in some cases, posthumously.

She was their Mother, She was their buir. Besides, to a Mandalorian Blood or state of being does not matter. She should be as much a part of the Clan as her ade are going to be.

Aliit ori'shya tal'din after all.

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Normally you would be right however for Gai bal manda to be used on those who have passed is an extremely rare event and required the agreement of Mand'alor, the reason behind this is this specific scenario. Since Nebula is not Mand'alor he doesn't have the right to perform the Gai Bal Manda on Faust.

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At the same time he can't ask Mand'alor, I think given the situation no one would be mad at him for doing the Ritual for Faust even IF it is in the future.

He can't Rely on Mand'alor or the Clans, he is essentially on his own and must therefore make his own rules and choices until otherwise told not to.

Least that's what I think >.>

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In time he will start doing this however in the early story he will be more trapped in Mandalorian traditions. I'm doing this so that Nebula can grow as time progresses but there is also a lore reason that will appear in upcoming chapters, I can't exactly say much because it would give some big spoilers.

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That's fine, it just sort of irks me that some one who has more then earned a ritual like Gai Bal Manda but doesn't get it (yet)

I really hope you do it for her in the future though.


Also I can't wait for the pain of making beskar'gam for their frames!

This is an Anthroverse right? Also are Celestia and Luna going to take up his Clan name?

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It was a decision that took a while to make because I knew it would make people mad but I decided that it would be a good way to show how Nebula will eventually grow and learn. There will be a point where Twilight will go to Faust's resting place and some of your answers will be revealed. Celestia and Luna will be taking the clan name of Nebula since he is going to perform the Gai bal manda for them.

Yes this is an Anthroverse and I did it specifically so that it would be easier for me to do Mandolorian armor for Celestia and Luna. However due to beskars properties it will be a pain in the butt to make and there will be some scenes of Nebula's trouble working the metal. Also you have to remember that Nebula wears a suit of the Hunter class Mandolorian Armor so his armor is also made from beskars. I'm going to be having a lot of fun with him and his trouble with the legendary Mandalorian iron

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Will they lose their current last names or will they keep them and add the Clan name at the end?


Also now that I think about it, This is a world of magic so Enchanting is a thing. I can't wait to see what kind of Upgrades that can be applied :D

.......You know I wonder how close Magic is to the Force? it would be interesting if one of the future Guard Battalions was based off the Mandalorian Knights :pinkiecrazy:

I loved the D5, not only is it an amazing ship but it has a Prefix that you would see on a Klingon ship!


Also that is ALOT of droids! Is it just one of each or?


So do you plan on Sending HK after those bastards that got Faust Killed? Hell Claim the bounty too, it would throw them off and give you some breathing room until they get wise! NOW we go to the MOOOOOOON to set up a base!

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The D5 is the best ship and if you look at it's codex entry it's even more awesome! There will only be one per type of droid, don't want to turn into an overpowered asshole.

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Hate to say this, but a little late for that. He is a Mandalorian with all the classic fixtures, He is now a Clan leader with two of the most powerful Alicorns to ever exist (before Twilight) in it, he now has a D5 Mantis and can get away from the bounty hunters by going into space, he also now has more Beskar on the way, he also now has some of the Most OP droids in SWTOR AND to top it all off? He now has an HK unit ready and willing to kill who needs to be killed.

If that's not OP I would hate to see your Definition of the word.

Also now that I think about it, I wonder how Equestria will turn out with two Mandalorian trained an minded Alicorns leading it, it's a Scary thought! I feel sorry for some of the Villians if I am honest.

On one last side note, Is the Crystal Empire a thing yet? I really want him to find a Young Sombra and bring him into the Clan.

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My version of OP can kill gods so... yeah, as for Nebula being a Clan Leader that's part of his lore. He was the leader of Clan Soull before becoming Displaced, since the human and Game character merged together he acquired all of his games characters knowledge and status. This also includes training, skills and combat prowess.

The Crystal Empire is it's own kingdom separate from other countries, it currently exists and is ruled by Queen Amore , Cadences mother, an OC that is somewhat uncommon in fanfictions bit does exist.

Honestly when Equestria is founded it will be entirely different from the one on the show. I won't give much away but you get three questions about what it will be like before I refuse to answer any other questions made by anyone else.

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Cracks knuckles Right then!

First Question: Will Equestria still be a Diarchy or will we see something more along the lines of the Unified Clans?

Second Question: Will your Equestria follow the Mandalorians tendency towards one culture no matter the species?

Final Question: Will there be any outside Alien Species when and if Equestria expands into space?

Princess Amore isn't an OC, She is the Queen of the Crystal Empire in the IDW Comics and one of the Main reasons Sombra became the way we see him. Hence why I asked if there was a chance he could be adopted into Nebula's Clan and taken away from Amore and the Empire. Sombra is Part Umbra (Umbrum?) so the Crystal Faire hurts him massively as his race has natural dark magic.

Not only that but the defeat of Sombra and the Banishment of the Crystal Empire is what really set into motion the turning of Luna.

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Sombra will not join Nebula's Clan, the reason for this is because Nebula is aware of future events and despite his presence obviously altering the timeline he plans to not intervene or change anything unless he has to. This means that every villain from Discord to Tirek will be in the story.

Q&A Session

Q: Will Equestria still be a Diarchy or will we see something more along the lines of the Unified Clans?

A: That's a difficult question to answer because of how I plan to have Equestria be. I guess you could say that Nebula will technically be the 'king' of equestria while Celestia and Luna will still be the 'Princesses' of Equestria and share equal power. The Noble Houses will act as Mandalorian Clans and are permitted to do what ever is they want as long as they obey Nebula and the Princesses.
In short Nebula's Clan will be the leader of all other clans, this is why Celestia and Luna are Princesses

Q: Will your Equestria follow the Mandalorians tendency towards one culture no matter the species?

A: Kinda Equestria will predominantly follow Mandalorian teachings and the Resol'Nare, while they won't go on a crusade against other cultures they won't exactly agree with them. I guess the best was to put it is that they will tolerate them unless they cause problems.

Q: Will there be any outside Alien Species when and if Equestria expands into space?

A: No, there will not be any aliens or other creatures from Star Wars, Equestria will also not be getting Space travel. The Reason for this will be explained in later chapters so for now that's all you get.



These were some good questions but that's all I will be giving for this story, at least for now. I enjoyed doing this and might do it again later but for now that will be all.

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I think Sombra should be one of the few situations that he get's involved in as it's Child Abuse on Amores side. I mean that Litterly, she knew the ENTIRE TIME that the Crystal Faire was hurting Sombra and pushing him towards the Dark side of his Species and yet didn't do anything at all to shield Sombra from the effects.

If the Timelines line up, he would be no older then the Season 1 CMC! I wouldn't be able to stand aside knowing what he could and would become if I didn't step in. If for nothing more then to get him to a more loving Environment or outright Adopt him myself.

On Question two I think I should Clarify what I was saying: I meant more towards the Mandalorians Tendency to Not care about Species when it came to Clans and their Members. Like for Example the Huntmaster in SWTOR, in other words Aliit ori'shya tal'din.

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Honestly there are three factors that prevent Nebula from interfering with Sombra, the first is that he doesn't have any authority in the Crystal Empire, second is how Equestria will be viewed at that time frame, and theirs is that he won't know till it's too late due to Queen Amora not doing anything. Like you said she did nothing and didn't seem to actually care at all. Also in this timeline Queen Amora will not be killed by Sombra but by another, guess who.

As for the question, other creatures, like Griffons or Minotaur, are generaly not cared about unless they are part of the clan. By this I mean that there not seen as animals, slaves or lesser beings but a mandolorian wont go out of their way to help other creatures unless there is something in it for them.
As for your comment on Aliit ori'shya tal'din, it's written into Mando'ade law that family comes before all followed closely by the clan. If you are given a choice between your Clan or your Family then you will choose your family if not you are branded as a dar'manda (Outcast). The only exception to this is if your family is branded as aruetii (Traitor) to Mand'alor in which case the needs of the Clan come first, this is the case of Torian Cadera, when he executes his father to regain his clans honor and unbrand himself as dar'manda.

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......I can't really think of any one else who would have the drive to "Kill" Amore, other then maybe HK-51 or Nubula. But I also don't know what Villains are still around at this point in the timeline so I guess it could be anyone.

So if a Griffion or Minotaur showed willingness to follow the Resol'nare and become Mandalorian then they would be ignored? How would that work? There are going to be those who want to be Mandalorian and found their own clans.

Sooooo, sending HK-51 to scout out the Empire and "Accidentally" finding Sombra in one of his near fatal Fits during a Faire is out of the question then? I mean Nebula is going to have to have Intel on everything any way >.>

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If a Griffon Minotaur or other race showed willingness to follow the Resol'nare and become Mandalorian they would be allowed to become Mandalorian after passing the cuir malhr be Mando'ade. (4 task of Mandalorians)
The tasks are extremely difficult and symbolize you becoming Mandalorian, not may have ever done it but those that do are made Mandalorian.

Here are the four tasks of cuir malhr be Mando'ade:

  • Studying Mandalorian History - Learn the history of Mandalorians, study and follow Mandalorian teachings.
    In this way you become Mandalorian in Mind.
  • Proving Yourself in Combat - This is also called The Ritual Blooding in which a warrior earn the right to become Mandalorian by killing a extremely powerful or dangerous creature that is marked as a great feat of combat strength.
    In this way you become Mandalorian in Spirit.
  • Earn the right to wear Mandalorian Armor - To do this you must join a Mandalorian Clan and earn the right to wear a set of beskar armor, this is not an easy feat to accomplish.
    In this way you become Mandalorian in Body.
  • Mandalorian Legacy - If you have done all three tasks then you have already completed the forth task, this means that as long as you have the blessing of Mand'alor or a Mandalorian Clan Leader you my take the title of Mandalorian.

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I wasn't sure if the 4 Tasks would come into play as the First and Third Tasks would be all but Impossible from my understanding.


On a side note, why didn't Nebula ask for HK-47?

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HK-47 is not an available companion in SWTOR, also he's technically dead because in the False Emperor flashpoint follows the Battle of Ilum you destroy HK completely. It's quite sad honestly but may he rest in robot hell.
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It depends on what contenuity you put SWTOR in, as HK-47s AI can be found on a hammerhead class ship around the early to late years of the Galactic Empire

Informative: I am a Tech Priest.
Statement: I would like more.

I can see this story going a lot of diffrent ways, the end resalt though? I. WANT. MORE.

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Kinda like how Satoru Suzuki became one with his avatar Lord Momonga from Overlord.

Is Arcus a Mercenary or Powertech?

Thought the AI is going to be Mako. Not as customizable as it's claims to be.

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Nebula is Mercenary class and I did toy with the idea of Mako being the AI but later had an idea.

I have a plan to have most of the crew be apart of the story but not for a long time and this plan may change.

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