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Discord The Narrator

Hey guys! It's me, Discord!

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Hello! Yeah, you're probably asking yourself: what happens here? What's this? Who's Jimmy Hook?

In this story, follow Jimmy Hook as he transforms into so many Female Characters from MLP, be it FIM, EG, MLP Movie, IDW Comics, a few MLP books, or any other material related to G4 of MLP.

Anyways, let me know what you think about it on the comments. Hope you like it!

PS: May contain small references to certain parts from the body.

EDIT: I'm republishing this story after having made a few changes on some things which went against the rules of FimFiction. I hope nothing else happens, because I don't like having problems from this kind.
Chapters (19)
Incomplete Published: Jan 1st, 2019 Download
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JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #2 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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And we're off to a Fantastic start! <3 :heart:

Plus I can solve the clue easily: Twilight Sparkle :3

Terry the human
Terry the human #5 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379613
Shit is happening, and also interesting idea.

JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #6 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379614
I sure did <3 :heart:

And I'm ready for tomorrow's chapter <3 :heart:

Discord The Narrator
Discord The Narrator #7 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379617
Shit is happening?:derpytongue2:

Also, glad you like the story. And it's just the first chapter!:twilightsmile:

Terry the human
Terry the human #9 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379620
Being turned into 1,000 different mares isn't exactly nothing you know.

JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #11 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379631
Unless you are me of course :yay:

Terry the human
Terry the human #13 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379633
And I have a good idea on who number 1,000 is.

Terry the human
Terry the human #15 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379641
Base on what I know about your favorite ponies are, I say it's Sweet Belle.

Discord The Narrator
Discord The Narrator #17 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379645
Oh, it's ok. Gonna fix it now. Thanks.:twilightsmile:

Terry the human
Terry the human #18 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379647
Or is it going to be your least favorite pony?

JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #20 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379651

Or is it going to be your least favorite pony?

You don't know my list really well... do you? I don't have a single character that isn't my least favorite!

Discord The Narrator
Discord The Narrator #21 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379655
Oh, I changed the Equestria thing you told me earlier, so I don't know what sentence you mean,sorry.:twilightsheepish:

Terry the human
Terry the human #22 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379658
Oh really, very single character? Male or Female, even Flash Sentry?

JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #23 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379660

very

*Every.

And yes, that's true. But as the long summary says, this will be just on the Female Characters.

JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #25 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379665
yep. And besides.... I have a liking to the Male turning into Female Transformations X3

Terry the human
Terry the human #26 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379667
Oh... Well it's not permit and it's a non sex story so I'm not hating it.

Discord The Narrator
Discord The Narrator #28 · Jan 1st, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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9379671
I think it would be because Jimmy didn't think his hair would keep changing, but I'll change it.

Switch Gears
Switch Gears #30 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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hmm seem like this is going neat to read will have to keep an eye on this

The Blue EM2
The Blue EM2 #32 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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Twilight Sparkle (or Sci-Twi, maybe).

Titanicgaming360
Titanicgaming360 #33 · Jan 2nd, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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I can smell the cringe. I can smell it. I can cut it with a knife.
But this actually does look good.
I have my eye on you!

JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #35 · Jan 3rd, 2019 · · · 2. Twilight Sparkle ·
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*Does an Adorkable Smile like Twilight Sparkle*

JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #37 · Jan 3rd, 2019 · · · 2. Twilight Sparkle ·
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9381747
Can't wait for tomorrow's chapter X3

JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #42 · Jan 3rd, 2019 · · · 3. Queen Chrysalis ·
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9383562
"I'm coming for you Discord >:)

JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #44 · Jan 3rd, 2019 · · · 3. Queen Chrysalis ·
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9383571
(X3)

(Anyways, get a few things set up, such as the getting the story submitted again... and then... on to chapter 4 tomorrow!!!!! <3 :heart:)

JimmyHook19
JimmyHook19 #49 · Feb 21st, 2019 · · · 3. Queen Chrysalis ·
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9469997
Yeah baby! We are back in action! :D


LOOK OUT FIMFICTION! BECAUSE THERE WILL BE THE LONGEST STORY ON THIS WEBSITE! :D :yay:

Golden Fang Ryu Shenron
Golden Fang Ryu Shenron #50 · Feb 24th, 2019 · · · 1. Sunset Shimmer ·
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"Hmmm... I suppose I could take a nap. Maybe I could do something else later." He said.

He lay down on his bed, getting comfortable before finally closing his eyes, a plush of Sunset between his arms.

Hmm...:ajsmug:.

"What is that!?"

His hair looked a bit different. The color changed on some strands so now, instead of brown, it was a combination of red and yellow.

"How did this happen?" Jimmy thought, still looking at his reflection. "Maybe the plushie?"

He went back inside his room and grabbed the Sunset plushie.

"I don't think this did it, but..."

Jimmy rubbed the plushie over his hair and his clothes, but nothing happened. The plushie stayed the same as always.

He looked on the bath's mirror again, noticing a surprising thing: his hair kept changing its colors...

And it was also growing longer...

Jimmy shook his head. "It has to be some hallucination."

Sorry Jimmy, but it ain't:rainbowlaugh:!!!

"A house is burning! We're going to see if the owners need help." The man said. "Also, what's wrong with your hair?"

"Huh?" Jimmy remembered. "Oh, I don't know, I just woke up after a nap and it was like this."

"All red and yellow? That's odd. Anyways, gotta go!" The man said, running away.

Uh-oh, the house is burning:pinkiegasp:! Also love how he noticed the hair change:rainbowlaugh:!!!

"Oh, wow... This is really weird." Jimmy thought.

Indeed:ajsmug:.

"I called the firefighters! They're coming now!" A guy said.

"My daughter is still inside!" A woman exclaimed with a scared expression. "We have to save her!"

"It's too dangerous, Alice!" An older woman said.

With those flames, nobody wanted to risk their lifes before the firefighters arrived. Jimmy stared at the fire, unsure of what to do.

"Should I try to rescue her?" He thought, feeling nervous.

Who wouldn't:twilightoops:?!

"Hello!? Where are you!?" Jimmy yelled, without response. Did she faint? Was she...?

No, she couldn't be dead. She wouldn't be. Jimmy would get her before the fire did.

Opening a door, a few flames touched his right arm, and he got back while checking it.

"Wait... what?" His arm was intact, with no burn marks on it.

He looked at his entire body, seeing his right arm, his legs and his left hoof.

Wait, left hoof?

"Whoa! What's this?" He exclaimed.

First the limbs...:twilightsmile:.

"Whoa! What's this?" He exclaimed.

Not only that, but his left leg was also starting to change, and his clothes were vanishing.

"Oh, wait, I think I got it. The Sunset plushie didn't leave any strands of hair on me, but maybe..." Jimmy said as his body kept changing, his skin turning yellow.

"Maybe it did this when I touched it..."

The remnants of his clothes scattered on the floor, revealing his ponified body.

I think the more appropriate term would be, ponifying body:ajsmug:.

."I suppose it had some magic, and that would be what's causing this."

A horn emerged from his forehead and a Cutie Mark appeared on his flanks, as a tail also appeared behind him. His ears also turned into pony ears.

Then the horn:scootangel:!

"So, if I'm not wrong, I'm transforming..." He closed his eyes.

Into the Golden Phoenix:yay:!!!

"...into Sunset Shimmer."

In the middle of the fire, Sunset went inside the house's kitchen. Avoiding a chunk of the ceiling falling down, she reached the faucet used for cleaning the dishes, activating it and looking at the running water.

"Ok, I still remember one spell for this. Let's see..." She said, staring at the water.

You go Jimmy/Sunset:rainbowdetermined2:!!!

"Sarah!" Alice ran and hugged her daughter. "This is a miracle..."

She felt surprised when she saw Sunset.

"But you... are..." She said.

"I'm Sunset Shimmer. Nice to meet you." She extended her hoof, which Alice shook carefully.

Yay for Sunny:yay:!!!

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