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Niaeruzu 43820

Joined March 2012
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    Niaeruzu's Stories (4)

    • Thrown Abroad
      A changeling is thrown out of the changeling hive and ends up in a familiar village.

      23,280 words · 18,169 views · 2,017 likes · 30 dislikes
    • My Little Changeling: Friendship is Weird
      A changeling attempts to learn about friendship in Ponyville.
      96,101 words · 14,807 views · 1,679 likes · 25 dislikes
    • Louder Than Words
      A pony becomes friends with a mute dragon.
      4,564 words · 765 views · 122 likes · 2 dislikes
    • A Soldier's Night
      A changeling soldier tries to sleep. It fails.
      1,599 words · 445 views · 82 likes · 1 dislikes
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    After the events of Thrown Abroad, Suncloak the changeling is happily living in Ponyville. Well, sort of. He needs the love of friendship to stay alive! Luckily, there's plenty of ponies who would want to be friends with him. But let's not forget about other changelings here...

    You know, this would be a lot easier if the whole concept of friendship wasn't so needlessly difficult.

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    I highly recommend reading Thrown Abroad before reading this.

    Amazing cover art by Wolfeh! Find her Tumblr here!

    Fanart!

    To be found on Equestria Daily here!

    First Published
    6th Aug 2012
    Last Modified
    12th Apr 2013

    Comments ( 858 )

    #1 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Well, it took a bit of time, but it's here! Apologies for the long wait, I suddenly got my hands on lots of video games. Video games that needed lots of playing.

    If you find any errors, feel free to PM or comment, so I can fix them. It's much appreciated! I could always have missed little things.

    I hope people will enjoy this as much as they enjoyed Thrown Abroad!

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yes! The long awaited sequel to Thrown Abroad!

    Keep up the good work pal.

    #3 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Instant fave and thumbs up.

    #4 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    But why did Suncloak have the strange feeling that this was only the beginning of a whole lot of craziness?

    And why do i have the feeling that you underestimate the craziness?

    I hope he is smart enough to tell the Mare 6 about this, they may not be able to help, but at last they know whats going on and are not scared when they find out Suncloak meets a group of channelings every week.

    this comment is dedicated to the poor mailbox who suffered a heavy assault and still stood tall.

    #5 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · 1 ·
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    Very good. Only one error I noticed. Where the changeling says "I resemble that remark." it should say resent, not resemble

    5/5

    #6 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · 2 · ·
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    >>1039492

    Intentional. It's why the other changelings have such trouble not bursting into laughter!

    #7 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh okay, he's just stupid, lol I kind of thought that, but wanted to let you know just in case. Still, awesome story man, keep up the good work. I'm gonna go re-read Thrown Abroad in the meantime! :yay:

    #8 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · 1 · ·
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    YES! INSTA-UP VOTE.

    #9 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Good good, continue with the hilarity, it amuses me so.

    #10 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    ooh this is gonna be good:twilightsmile:

    p.s. suncloak be trollin:trollestia:

    #11 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This is going to be more than great story.

    :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

    5 moustaches for you.

    #12 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Atleast ! Just upload new episodes with some normal time delay

    But Derpy maried with Doctor xD ah whatever still good story and waiting for more

    #13 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    You, my good sir get an insta-fav!

    Have a Spike. :moustache:

    #14 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    It's nice to see you've posted another story and that it's of supreme quality as previous.

    By the way, getting Suncloak into teaching other changelings how to act around ponies is hilarious

    moreover gives many possibilities of extending the plot.

    #15 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Oh Lyra.....you and your lobsters........but it is true.  They can dry out really quickly if you don't water them regularly.  Especially in the summer.  I almost lost the one I keep in my car during my trip to the beach because I didn't drive for a few days after getting there.

    A fantastic first chapter for what will most likely be a fantastic new story.  As a new author, you set the bar for yourself very high with "Thrown Abroad".  This, of course, means we expect great things from this and all your future stories, and so far you have not disappointed :yay:.

    Edit:  and grats on the feature box as well.

    #16 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    AAAAAAAAW YEAH :rainbowkiss:

    #17 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yesssssssss

    ...

    :coolphoto: we need more.

    #18 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    This is going to be so much fun..... :rainbowlaugh:

    #19 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    54 straight Likes and counting? No Dislikes?

    The story is good one! :pinkiegasp:

    Was grinning like idiot most of the story. :rainbowlaugh:

    #20 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Very nice - FIRE THE MOAR-TAR!

    #21 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Let the insanity begin! Muahahahahaha! :pinkiecrazy:

    Oh, and Suncloak, I feel your pain (literally) about the music. I like music, but make it too loud (like it is at every dance in existence) and... yeah. :twilightoops:

    #22 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1028575 you are forgiven ( I got my hands on Wow and I couldn't update my stories :P)

    #23 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Thrown Abroad sequel? :raritystarry:

    Most excellent. :rainbowkiss:

    #24 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Suncloak should inform Twilight at least about this, that way in the event if everything goes to Tartarus the mane six will not think Suncloak sold them out.

    #25 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    He's is back! And he's more ling-like than ever!

    Suncloak in...... My Little Changeling..............  Friendship is Weird

    With many numbered changelings with amazing professions like scouting,military strike force, and accounting?

    Coming soon to your FimFiction Favorite Star.

    :rainbowlaugh:

    #26 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Thoughts after reading: MOST excellent. :rainbowlaugh:

    I can't wait for more! :derpytongue2:

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    “Friendship is weird.

    ah ah, there it is.

                                

    Been looking forward to this for a good while and was by no means disappointed. Can't wait for more. :pinkiehappy:

    #28 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1028575 Steam summer sale?

    >>1040188 the MOAR-TAR is prepped and ready to fire sir. At what distance should we aim for?

    #29 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    whao

    #30 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1040683

    Surprisingly, no! A lot of other games, though.

    #31 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Upvote and tracking with the power of a thousand suns!

    #32 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Sequel to one of my favorite Changeling fics of all time?

    Don't mind if I do :pinkiehappy:

    #33 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1028575 Hold those apologies, it was well worth the wait!

    I'm enjoying your characterization of the... well, characters.  This plot of a bunch of changelings attempting to learn the ways of friendship is quite neat, and will doubtlessly be very entertaining and satisfying.  Can't wait for more!

    Said vine coiled up, and with a burst of green flame around it, changed into a very small changeling. “Aww.”

    #145 is adorable! :D

    #34 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    #35 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yay, another awesome story to track. Also, the premise looks like it could be just as good as Thrown Abroad, as long as it's developed :pinkiehappy:

    #36 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    “Are you just here to insult me or can tell you to buzz off and leave?”

    I think theres an error here somewhere...

    awesome story, cant wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

    #37 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1041332

    Fix't, thanks!

    #38 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    big grats for getting featured:pinkiehappy:

    #39 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1028575 Kickass.

    #40 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    'I just have to water my lobster!'

    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    Now you've gone and made me want to hear the FiM main theme performed in the changeling style.

    'I resemble that remark!'

    :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    Haven't seen this one in a while.

    This is boss. The sequel is shaping up nicely!

    Oh, and if the group of changelings goes all Harmony eventually, they definitely should become the Elements of Chocolate.

    #41 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    horray!! a sequel to Thrown Abroad! here :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

    #42 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    "Hey, I resemble that remark!"

    Hm... TMNT Turtles Forever reference?

    Heh heh.

    #43 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    So wait, this means that Suncloak is the new Rainbow Dash?:rainbowhuh:

    #44 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Suncloak isn't the only changeling reject. He needs to look for someling usually called Cloud Jumper. He's

    's SS! :rainbowderp:

    #45 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    Yay for sequels. This is quite promising. I really like the setup of this chapter. I can't wait to see what adventures happen with these characters. Also, we all know Bon Bon can't be that normal. She must be hiding something! :pinkiecrazy:

    #46 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    *changeling_trollfaic.jpg*

    Yay, more Suncloak! This one, and the one with Wubsy are good Changeling stories. =3

    #47 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    "Sheesh, all these ponies look so much alike. Why couldn’t they all be more unique, like changelings?"

    :rainbowlaugh:

    "And, well, free candy. That made everyling look good in the changeling’s book."

    :pinkiegasp: Suncloak, get away from that van! You can't trust just anypony who waves a bag of sweets in your face!

    "But why did Suncloak have the strange feeling that this was only the beginning of a whole lot of craziness?"

    "First Chapter Intuition", I'm guessing.

    >>1041488

    Elements of Chocolate, eh? That would be... let's see... Milk, Dark, White, Semi-Sweet... er... Hot Fudge... uh... Okay, I'm out of chocolate types. If we assume one Element per changeling, then what would the final three Elements be?

    #48 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 2d ago · · ·
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    >>1041935 I have no idea! Gotta ask Suncloak. It's him who came up with the Elements of Chocolate after being hit on the head one time too many, after all.

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>1041935

    How about Schocolate! Chocolate energy! It's like putting Chocolate into ELECTRICAL STORM!

    And seriously, I can't wait for new chapters!

    #50 · Chapter 1 · 45w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Great job mate!

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