• Member Since 5th Mar, 2012
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Niaeruzu


Hi! I'm some guy who flails at a keyboard and then suddenly has popular changeling fanfiction. If anybody finds out how I did it, please tell me.

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A dragon suddenly takes up residence near Ponyville. Cirrus Cloud, an ordinary pegasus living in Ponyville who has trouble making friends, ends up meeting it through a strange series of events.

It turns out the dragon is mute, and somehow, Cirrus Cloud manages to befriend it. But how does one be friends with a mute dragon?

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 140 )

Written and edited in one day. I suddenly had inspiration yesterday, so I decided to write it out, and I'm really happy I could churn something out, considering how awful I've been feeling lately.

I don't know 100% what direction this story is going to take, so tags and characters might change a bit.

I like the premise so far... Looking forward to more, hopefully soon! :pinkiesmile:

1482021 So far, so good!

I'm looking forward to more. :pinkiehappy:

She kinda reminds me of Fluttershy...

Great story! Totally looking foward the next chapter! Question aside, are you planning to release the next chapter of friendship is weird soon?

The very beginning felt a bit forced and she seemed way too much like a Fluttershy clone, but once we get to talk to Slate she starts forming a personality. It's not a huge deal, but it could use some smoothing. Otherwise, good start, if brief.


As a fellow writer and enjoyer of dragon stories, I must say I love it :pinkiehappy:

As another enjoyer of dragon stories, I too love this, and look forward to more. :pinkiehappy:

This piqued my interest.
Please proceed and don't abandon that fic.
Or I'll find you.

Interesting..... I see some sweet potential in this story..... I like :-) :pinkiehappy:

Interesting start.

1482021 Looks good. Also could Suncloack could make a appearance?

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Well, that kind of happens when you have a shy character. Give her some time to develop, though!

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I have no idea. I've been feeling incredibly down lately, and it's difficult to write anything. I'm happy enough that I managed to write this bit.

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Don't worry, I'm not abandoning anything. I just hit a rough patch.

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He most likely won't. It wouldn't really fit, plus to understand it, people will need to have read Suncloak's stories. I want this to be able to stand completely on its own.

Look like very interesting !
i'm glad to know this isn't a test because there's a lot of matter to work on and liked this start !

PS: not as someponies here, i didn't felt watching a copy of Fluttershy then

Dracus.

Interesting so far.

1484910 It's what is called an expy.

How come I never noticed this one until now? It looks to be a very promising story. I hope you choose to continue it sooner rather than later.

I think it could do with some more pacing. The story kind of came out a bit rushed, and the sentence structure felt a little segmented. Try and get more flow into it, and pad it out with the thoughts and feelings she may have such as whilst travelling to the Whitetail woods; it would slow down the pace and help identify more of her character earlier.

Please continue, man. This has serious potential...

Congratulations on the second chapter:pinkiehappy:, I think it's a success:twilightsmile::heart:

I love that you are continuing this story.

Yea you should finish this! This is awesome!~ :pinkiehappy:

FÉLICITATION ! Vous avez écrit un second chapitre !

Joke aside, this is a good chapter. I have waited it long, but it was worth it.

This story just makes me feel good.

This makes me happy. I always like a good "Different Worlds" story....like Beauty and the Beast; Changeling fics; etc.

yay~ !
finaly the second chapter and a good one !

Luna's nipple, it's alive!:yay:

I should continue and finish it.

No, really? :ajbemused:

Seriously tho, yay another chapter!

It's lightning that strikes trees, not thunder - thunder is just the sound lightning makes.:applejackunsure:

And I can't help but notice that Cirrus forgot to ask Slatescale about the party stuff again. Pinkie probably won't really care (especially if she learns that the reason Cirrus was distracted was friendship), but I bet Cirrus is going to think that she cares a lot and will hate her for it until Pinkie calms her back down.

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Yeah, I just had this sneaking suspicion that it'd probably be a good idea to not leave people hanging on this.

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The one time I forget to check if I've got my facts straight or not, and I make an elementary mistake like this :applejackconfused:

Fixed it, thanks!

when I saw the description, I was rather skeptical; it sounded bland and rather vanilla compared to your other stories. But then I read it, and by [insert deity of choice here], why did I ever doubt you? This is amazing!

Author's Note:
Oh hey this still exists

I should continue and finish it.

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It has begun..
Maybe

You know, I just got around to reading this, and I gotta say I'm intrigued. I am also tempted to dry Cirrus and Slatescale for a cover art. I even have this cute image in my mind of Cirrus on top of Slate's head, hugging him, with him looking up at his forehead towards her, grinning out of one side of his mouth in amusement.

Damn, so many things I want to draw. . . :twilightblush:

read, thumbed, fav'd....now im waiting for the next 20 chapters to come within the next hour....don't disappoint me

A book on dragon sign language?...but, that's...I thought...

Too convenient. :trixieshiftright:

were is 'feels' vid when you need one

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AUTHOR USED DEUS EX MACHINA !!!

IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE !!!

this story is awesome. i like that the dragon isn't a dick.seems like everyone makes them evil or mean. you have another like and another person eagerly awaiting more.

this is the best. pls Finnish it.

Hehehe, take your time. As long as all the chapters are as good as this.

Your writing never ceases to entertain me, sir. :moustache:

good story you get 4 of 5 moustaches :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I would give you 5 or even 6 but the proablem is i find the first chapter a tiny bit hard to read :fluttercry:

never mind 20 moustaches :moustache:x20

This chapter is fine! No need to applogise!
As many have said, it's one of those stories that is different and always a pleasure to read.
Thanks for another chapter!
:pinkiehappy:

Aahhh~

This kind of light-hearted feel good makes for an excellent Slice of Life...

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