One night in the changeling hive, a soldier attempts to sleep, and forget the failed Canterlot invasion. Something is intent on keeping him up.
Written for Equestria Daily's Memorial Day weekend flash fiction event.
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Niaeruzu
Hi! I'm some guy who flails at a keyboard and then suddenly has popular changeling fanfiction. If anybody finds out how I did it, please tell me.
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That wasn't bad, but actually nothing special. Like some filler in larger story (i know it's shoot to you other stories but it will be good to just post it in between chapters)
I like it. An interesting insight into the inner workings of the insect infiltrators. Indeed.
Does #44 have a Sherman tank hidden somewhere in the back of the hive?
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Love the nod to Thrown Abroad. Other than that, though, it's essentially a single scene. Though, I assume the point of the Flash Fiction thing was there was no warning?
I like it!
Nice... But this just seems like filler, not funny enough to be humor, no real goal here either, I'm tired, shut up. Long rant, he walks off, and then it ends with a simple thought, and we don't have a clue about how anything else goes.
This is just complaining, a revelation that isn't even much of a thought, and then nothing. He looks at nymphs and has a small thought he won't remember later. It was well written, but too bland. There was nothing exceptional, or even anything that makes it a simple relief.
I am sorry for the bad comment, but I am about to head to bed, so not really thinking as well as I should right now.
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The announcement was posted a few days beforehand, but I spent half of that time deliberating if I wanted to participate or not. That's because I just so happened to have some important, time-consuming stuff to do this weekend.
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Well... yes. It is filler, sort of. I know it's not that funny either, that's why it doesn't have a comedy tag. There isn't a real goal either, indeed. I probably could've made this into something better, were it not for the time restraints on the flash fiction event.
I hope you don't mind, but I liked this fic so much I have put together and audio version on YouTube.
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Oh wow, that was an amazing reading! Thank you! I really, really enjoyed it. And about the pronounciation: you were very close! I don't mind if people get it wrong, it happens when you have a jumble of characters like this. In fact, it's kind of funny.
Funny
listened to scribbler's reading and found this quite nice. a little insight to the changelings' lives
I hope you don't mind, but i did a reading of this
I hope it was okay. it was my second reading, so it should sound better than my last.
Its a nice view inside a hives simpel guard drone
Could almost be a backstory for Thorax. A Changeling finds similarities between his people and the ponies they fought, despite initial assumptions that they were completely different beings. A bit more abstract in some similarities, but we end the fic getting the impression that at least one Changeling is getting dangerously close to becoming effective against the ponies.... Not that he's reformed, but that he has more insight with which to attack said ponies.
If you like audiobooks, you can find a dramatic reading of this fic on YouTube, done by Scribbler Productions.