Starlight Glimmer's life implodes when Trixie dumps her, but Sunset Shimmer is there to help pick up the pieces.
Starlight may need a friend, but how far is Sunset willing for their relationship to go?
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Bronyxy
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not bad, a little rushed IMO, if i may say if it had been me i'd have Sunset say during dinner that she hadn't planned any of this, but would be willing to give it a try with starlight
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You're right, Sunset really didn't intend to get into this, but I rather enjoyed changing her attitude from one of trying to find a way of getting out of it to appreciating Starlight for who she is and falling for her.
Your idea about a confession over dinner is good, but I confess I hadn't thought of it - I'll put it in if I ever do a rewrite!
Thanks for your support.
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i always am available for advice, i wish i could get my own story ideas off the ground
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The biggest issue is to come up with an idea to start the process off. As you have already got ideas, then introduce your characters into a storyline based on those ideas and as long as you pass 1,000 words, you'll have a story!
Have a little confidence and give it a try - we all start somewhere. As your style develops, you may look back at your first stories and see how you could have done them better, but we all feel that. Just dip your toe in and give it a try - we're with you!
Good luck!
Cute, fluffy and all around d'aww-inducingly sweet. I have to say this is a ship I haven't seen used much and that earns some bonus points from me! Pony Sunset seems woefully underrepresented as well, so hey, another bonus in favor of this fic :3
I have some advice, double space the dialogue. Single spacing the dialogue made this story rather difficult to read. I will admit though, I absolutely love it! Starlight and Sunset do make a cute couple and I like how you made Starlight the naive one with Sunset being experienced in the romance department....that is how I would see it being in real life. Have an upvote and a fave.