Crystal love

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Cadance has fallen in love with Twilight ever since she saved the Crystal Empire from Sombra. 5 months later, Cadance finally decides to tell Twilight her feelings. Will Cadance get what her heart desires? Or will she leave with a broken heart?

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DNC

DNC #1 · Oct 24th, 2018 · 1 · · Crystalline love ·

JusSonic

JusSonic #2 · Oct 24th, 2018 · 2 · 1 · Crystalline love ·

Romantic. Good work.

silvercrystal432

silvercrystal432 #3 · Oct 24th, 2018 · 3 · · Crystalline love ·

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No. He died at birth. Twilight's parents never talk about it and Twilight doesn't even know.

silvercrystal432

silvercrystal432 #4 · Oct 24th, 2018 · · · Crystalline love ·

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Thank you.

Drago Cadenza

Drago Cadenza #5 · Oct 24th, 2018 · · · Crystalline love ·

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Ouch. Didn't see that coming.

littlewashu45

littlewashu45 #6 · Oct 25th, 2018 · · · Crystalline love ·

Nice can't wait for the next chapter.

silvercrystal432

silvercrystal432 #7 · Oct 25th, 2018 · · · Crystalline love ·

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There will be no new chapters. BUT, there may be a sequel with them getting married.

EDIT: I might do new chapters

Knight N Gale

Knight N Gale #8 · Oct 25th, 2018 · · · Poll ·

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Glad to see a new TwiDance fic, but kinda disappointed. It could have been so much better. Don't get me wrong, it was nice and I liked it, but it was really fast paced.

Honestly, you could have easily stretched this into a multi chapter story if you slowed the pace and was more descriptive.

Dont take this the wrong way, I'm just trying to give some helpful criticism.

silvercrystal432

silvercrystal432 #9 · Oct 25th, 2018 · · · Poll ·

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Detail is not one of strong suits and neither is very long stories. I struggle with it, that's why my stories get straight to the point very quickly. I'm sorry if that ruins the story. I do my best with what I have.

Starlight Nova