When Twilight defeated Tirek she should have been happy. But she wasn't. She felt, sorry for him. Weeks after his defeat, Twilight decides to pay him a visit.
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wait is celestia twilight's birth mother if not then what happened to velvet?
9291666
Celestia is Twilight's birth mother in this.
9291673
alright thank you
Will this story be a short one?
9291688
No, this story will have a somewhat slow pacing, with Tirek and Twilight's feelings developing as time goes on.
Hmmm ill track this story on my read list
Not bad though I thought Twilight would find it hard to feel sorry for him that easily, and if Celestia was Twilight's birth mother I'd expect her to not let Twilight go that easily. And you're the only one who I know that created a ship for Teirk and Twilight. Also, I thought she would have told her friends about it. I'm not trying to criticize but have you got Teirk's full personality. Hopefully, things will be more explained in the oncoming chapters.
9291673
Well....not sure how that will affect my point of view but I give you the chance to show me that it can be written good.
Celestia being her mother I mean. Sometimes I either remember bad examples or just haven't seen a story like that being finished and everything like that.
Her being in love with Tirek or something like that is strangely facinating.
I think I give it a try.
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Considering that Twilight is the Princess of Friendship, she would be more inclined to give others a second chance. Even though Celestia is Twilight's birth mother in this story and is overprotective, she still knows that Twilight is her own mare and she can't control what she does (much to her dismay). Twilight's friends will play a part in this in the future. Yes, I know Tireks personality. He is a deceptive, cunning, and manipulative creature who will do all in his power to win. He will use Twilight and push the right buttons to be set free if he has too.
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Glad to know you are willing to give this a try.
Is there a human turned female draconequs x Discord romance story? I would love to see him being head over heels for our former human and him/having to deal with Discord having a crush on him/now her.
FInally I could take some times for this story. It is not bad, but I hope the rest won't feel so fast. It's probably not happening to fast, but it could be that it just feels a bit odd that it starts right before the talk with Tirek. I have that image of the little space between two episodes in my head, but I'm still interessted to see where this goes.
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1) I don't know, I haven't really searched for those types of stories.
2) I know that it was a little rushed and that's because I have ADHD. I can't focus for long periods of time, so everything I write comes out a bit rushed and I'm sorry for that. Also, I am not one for a lot of detail so that's also a reason why it looks rushed. And finally, this was like a prologue chapter to what is to come, the rest of the chapters will be longer.
3) I have 4 stories that I need to update and a sequel to write for another, so it's going to be awhile before this gets updated. I pretty much screwed myself.
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Alright, in that chase I understand.
Would it help you if you take a longer time to write this or would that cause a different problem?
I think I know what that is and my cousing should have that to, but you know it the best.
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Taking longer to write this would help in the long run, but it will maybe take twice as long to get chapters out because I need to work on my other stories and update them.
Also, unlike other people I don't leave stories unfinished and no matter how long it takes they will be finished.
I'm hoping I will still be a brony by the time I finish these stories because the 5th generation might kill the brony fandom for me and I hope that never happens. I love being a brony and I hope I never fall out of it. The brony fandom saved me from my crippling depression and i owe everything I am today to the brony fandom.
(Sorry for rambling)
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We have the 4th Generation now right? I'm getting a bit confused, but yes this is the only generation where I really got into it.